Haha, really funny track in a unique style! Nice work! I feel the first section a bit too long after a time, but cool track overall. The intro is especially superb. Regards, traz
I feel in no way qualified to critisize anyones stuff but I'm going to. This is to long. If this were chopped down into smaller pieces I can hear it at the begining of a comedy sit com or advertising something. What I'm saying is with a bit of something and I don't know what .... I smell something very very commercial not cheesy. A sellable product is not to be sniffed at and marked down as cheesy!
I can hear few electronic genres combinated here. Much energy in every part of this track! It seems like you have good music theory knowledge. That high pitched synth around 0:20 has really nice melody... Like something you can hear in russian folk songs. Anyway, this is some really good work!
Very interesting idea here! But for a phrase as powerful as "number one champion" I was expect some louder buildups and more powerful sections. But that's just my opinion. Great start!
Haha you make a valid point. By 'more powerful' do you mean something like a bass drop? Hmm you definitely have me thinking now. I'm thinking of introducing some transition swooshes/pads as well. Maybe more interesting samples.. who knows. Thanks for listening.
Creativity is power. Remember that. And this was track displays just that. This is has many flavors. Reggae and Trap influences indeed, as DJ-SLT-UK mentioned. I liked this alot. Very interesting how this came together. I cannot say I've heard anything like this, but for my first time of this type of infused genre, I am very VERY pleased. I'm not sure what I can say as far as improvement, for the song sounds great in my ears. Keep this up, man! If you want to work on this track with others, I'd love to be able to help in any way. Faved, and peace!
Hey cheers Ookami for the words of wisdom! Really means a lot. I don't really know where this track is going to go from here, or where the idea even came from haha, but i'll keep you in mind if i need a different perspective! Otherwise, i am keen to collaborate on something in future =]
Hey man i'd be happy to send the stems to you. Just let me know the best way to send them to you and it's done! I would really like to hear this remixed.
hi again, I like some of the changes you've made here by rearranging the song. Sounds really good like this. The only thing would be that the e piano which I particulary like (the one playing some nice rhythm) seems be a little bit less present here. Synth bass and pad blend-in very nicely in the recording. Im really enjoying this one. NIce work. Congrats, Alex
Thanks for actively listening Alex! I've made the e-piano a little more present, just for you bud haha, but no i agree it was getting a bit lost in the mix. Vocals yet to be added ft. Larry Barrow. Stay tuned!
Ok man, sorry for the late response. I've just been through exam week at my course so I've been super busy, but now I'm on break so I'm keen to work on our track. If all goes well I'll post some added vocals up within the next few days! Peace.
Its still a Work-In-Progess (WIP) so it might end up being different later down the line, but I'm happy for you to use this track if you want to. Heard some of your music and i like what i hear. Keen to see what you come up with =)
hi RampatheSwift, very nicely done, chill, easy, relaxing vibes. I like how you work with all the samples and elements of the song. Nice e-piano rhythms and motifs that you're playing. This fat synth bass-lead maybe stands out a bit by first listening, but still provides more 'gravity' to the composition... nice glassy pad. Looking forward to hear the complete song. I thought you might just remove some parts and 'compress' it in 4min. That could be good for finding even some better balance and sound in the final mix. But you could extend the song as well! Very creative work - Im enjoying it a lot. Alex
Thank you for your comments Alex! Yes i do have problem with having super lengthy songs and i agree it could make for a better arrangement of instrumentation and bigger impact if it were shorter. I did take into account the synth bass being sort of out of place but i will try mix in better. Great that's something to focus on.
Hey thanks man. I just do my own style of music and whatever comes out, comes out. You know? I don't try too hard to stick to any genre. Thanks for listening.
Commented on Sumassun ft Larry Barrow by RampatheSwift
just shared your track on facebook! thanks for even allowing me to do vocals to this track and keeping it fam....meant a lot to me! hot track! larry
Commented on Sumassun ft Larry Barrow by RampatheSwift
Good work , now take a deep breath ;)
Commented on Sumassun ft Larry Barrow by RampatheSwift
Omg, good quality music man. You are amazing for putting this together, this going to be on repeat ^-^
Commented on Looper Saong by RampatheSwift
Haha, really funny track in a unique style! Nice work! I feel the first section a bit too long after a time, but cool track overall. The intro is especially superb.
Regards, traz
Commented on Sumassun - WIP by RampatheSwift
I feel in no way qualified to critisize anyones stuff but I'm going to.
This is to long.
If this were chopped down into smaller pieces I can hear it at the begining of a comedy sit com or advertising something.
What I'm saying is with a bit of something and I don't know what .... I smell something very very commercial not cheesy.
A sellable product is not to be sniffed at and marked down as cheesy!
Commented on Sumassun - WIP by RampatheSwift
Ill tell you whenever I have something with it ^^
Commented on Number One Champion - WIP by RampatheSwift
I can hear few electronic genres combinated here. Much energy in every part of this track! It seems like you have good music theory knowledge. That high pitched synth around 0:20 has really nice melody... Like something you can hear in russian folk songs. Anyway, this is some really good work!
Commented on Number One Champion - WIP by RampatheSwift
Very interesting idea here! But for a phrase as powerful as "number one champion" I was expect some louder buildups and more powerful sections. But that's just my opinion. Great start!
Commented on Number One Champion - WIP by RampatheSwift
Great job on this one. FT
Commented on Sumassun - WIP by RampatheSwift
u did a god job on this! really like that sweet melody!
Commented on Number One Champion - WIP by RampatheSwift
Creativity is power. Remember that. And this was track displays just that. This is has many flavors. Reggae and Trap influences indeed, as DJ-SLT-UK mentioned. I liked this alot. Very interesting how this came together. I cannot say I've heard anything like this, but for my first time of this type of infused genre, I am very VERY pleased. I'm not sure what I can say as far as improvement, for the song sounds great in my ears. Keep this up, man! If you want to work on this track with others, I'd love to be able to help in any way. Faved, and peace!
~Ookami
Commented on Sumassun - WIP by RampatheSwift
this is awesome!!loving the beat..
Commented on Sumassun - WIP by RampatheSwift
Ficou pesada...
Commented on Sumassun - WIP by RampatheSwift
This is rad:)
Commented on Sumassun - WIP by RampatheSwift
Loving this.. really I would die for the audio stems and to remix it
Commented on Sumassun - WIP by RampatheSwift
Very nice I can listen to this all day man.
Commented on Sumassun - WIP by RampatheSwift
hi again, I like some of the changes you've made here by rearranging the song. Sounds really good like this. The only thing would be that the e piano which I particulary like (the one playing some nice rhythm) seems be a little bit less present here. Synth bass and pad blend-in very nicely in the recording. Im really enjoying this one. NIce work. Congrats, Alex
Commented on Sumassun - WIP by RampatheSwift
this is such a cheerful song...
great to listen to when u r with ur mates riding down the country...
Its great
Commented on Sumassun - WIP by RampatheSwift
ok, I listen to it again, I gotcha. nice work!!
Commented on Sumassun - WIP by RampatheSwift
super, super nice track, I would love to lay some vocals on this.
Commented on Sumassun - WIP by RampatheSwift
awesome tune dude!
Commented on Sumassun - WIP by RampatheSwift
Shout out from me.I love it.The overall mix is great.
Commented on Sumassun - WIP by RampatheSwift
hi RampatheSwift, very nicely done, chill, easy, relaxing vibes. I like how you work with all the samples and elements of the song. Nice e-piano rhythms and motifs that you're playing. This fat synth bass-lead maybe stands out a bit by first listening, but still provides more 'gravity' to the composition... nice glassy pad.
Looking forward to hear the complete song. I thought you might just remove some parts and 'compress' it in 4min. That could be good for finding even some better balance and sound in the final mix.
But you could extend the song as well!
Very creative work - Im enjoying it a lot.
Alex
Commented on Sumassun - WIP by RampatheSwift
HAVE GREAT RHYTHM
Commented on Sumassun - WIP by RampatheSwift
Cool vibe here. Sometimes is nice to hear some relaxing hip-hop in bunch of gangsta rap. Really good job done here.