You've done a great job, I really like that reverse syth at 1:01, could be twice as long good for a build up riser type of progression imho. Needs some kind of bridge also at 2:01. Or not :) I also like your choices of instruments. Alien.
This is very lovely. But I do think it's like a stock that needs another hour of cooking, to bring out the beauty of the vocals more. I think the vocals could come up a touch - just a touch - in volume relative to the music. (This is all totally subjective.) And I think there's room for some thicker vocals and harmonies here and there. As a thought. Sometimes I've written songs in 15 minutes but then spent 2 months revising them. I think you're onto something here and can revv up its savoriness even more.
Thanks! I appreciate the feedback and encouragement. Working on getting those vocals to pop a bit more for sure. All the comments have really helped me make this a better track already. Thank you again!
A lot of cool stuff here. The panning of the pad from 1:00 - 1:15 is awesome. At 0:37 I feel like some lower tones could add punch to the chorus. Great track.
Commented on Falling Into Myself - Feat Sarah English by tomplets
You've done a great job, I really like that reverse syth at 1:01, could be twice as long good for a build up riser type of progression imho. Needs some kind of bridge also at 2:01. Or not :)
I also like your choices of instruments.
Alien.
Commented on Falling Into Myself - Feat Sarah English by tomplets
Nice track and very beautiful voice.
Commented on Falling Into Myself - Feat Sarah English by tomplets
This is very lovely. But I do think it's like a stock that needs another hour of cooking, to bring out the beauty of the vocals more. I think the vocals could come up a touch - just a touch - in volume relative to the music. (This is all totally subjective.) And I think there's room for some thicker vocals and harmonies here and there. As a thought. Sometimes I've written songs in 15 minutes but then spent 2 months revising them. I think you're onto something here and can revv up its savoriness even more.
Commented on Falling Into Myself - Feat Sarah English by tomplets
cool ballad track. bella musica ,bella voce !
Commented on Falling Into Myself - Feat Sarah English by tomplets
I really like it, my favorite: 2: 02 - 2: 16.
Commented on Falling Into Myself - Feat Sarah English by tomplets
id say pretty good job!i like the track..prd sounds deacent ..vocals sound great
Commented on Falling Into Myself - Feat Sarah English by tomplets
A lot of cool stuff here. The panning of the pad from 1:00 - 1:15 is awesome. At 0:37 I feel like some lower tones could add punch to the chorus. Great track.
Commented on Falling Into Myself - Feat Sarah English by tomplets
very clean, professional sounding track. Great work.