vocals need moved just alil to the right like a hair about a half sec or so and have you let jenna the girl that singing hear it? she likes people to send her what people have done with her stuff.
Let me be the first to break the ice mate! Nice bass tones.. need to tighten up the vocals. It's a good singer and a good sound but needs a lot more takes I would think to get perfection in consonant placement. (unless of course, it's a loop you are trying to fit, and that's a whole other animal.) Cool string stabs give a nice haunting feel. I do like the drum breaks, they are unique with a cool slapback echo. Overall I do like the song. (it is catchy as I find myself humming the melody and keep repeating something about a pedestal in my head) What do you see that you would want to change in this one? Cru
Thanks you , honestly yuou comments apprecioated, Unfortunately Im working with a sample from here for the vocals, so I think I need to spend a bit more time getting it to fit, Its the first song I have done for a good while so im not really sure what I want to change I think im more worried about the mixdown and if anything clashes, I have listened to is so many times its all ablurr now :D:D:
MrC, hello my friend. Hey this track is good. If you wanna "change" it a bit try a few different mixes on it along the lines with what Stereo suggested with the drums. Maybe layer the drum track a bit quieter behind the main and put some delay in places, boost the kick, top the snare that kind of thing? But this sounds more then just OK. You've produced a good track mate.
Thank yu so much for the advice, and as soon as I get a chance (when the kids are in be and the missus is at the gym) ill implement all the advice from you guys.
Thanks again!, if you ever need any bass or guitar etc on ya tracks let me know :)
Just have to say this is the only forum that i have really participated in, it really is a notch about the rest!
Hi, thanks for the comment:-) totally see what your saying about the drums, I'll have a work on them and see if I can give em a bit of variation, thanks again for the advice,...and gotta love the stupid PIC...if I got you laughing my work here is done!:-)
This is an interesting take on this song. Listened to it to the very end. The drums are nice and full and the arrangement is pretty good as well. Don't beat yourself up too much. You're on the right path. Will be keeping an eye out for new material from you.
Thanks for the comment its appreciated, i think I have listened to it to much so it just sounds like a noise to me now lol :-) ill keep working on it tho:-)
Commented on Falling by mrchewson
vocals need moved just alil to the right like a hair about a half sec or so and have you let jenna the girl that singing hear it? she likes people to send her what people have done with her stuff.
Commented on Falling by mrchewson
Let me be the first to break the ice mate! Nice bass tones.. need to tighten up the vocals. It's a good singer and a good sound but needs a lot more takes I would think to get perfection in consonant placement. (unless of course, it's a loop you are trying to fit, and that's a whole other animal.) Cool string stabs give a nice haunting feel. I do like the drum breaks, they are unique with a cool slapback echo. Overall I do like the song. (it is catchy as I find myself humming the melody and keep repeating something about a pedestal in my head) What do you see that you would want to change in this one?
Cru
Commented on Sound Escape by mrchewson
Cool ambient trip-hop vibe. Nicely layered, evolves smoothly. Enjoyed!
Thanks for the DL!
Commented on Goatee ay by mrchewson
i am working on this remix too and i found as always your work very inspirating!!!the voice need some process but the rest is killing!
Commented on Goatee ay by mrchewson
MrC, hello my friend. Hey this track is good. If you wanna "change" it a bit try a few different mixes on it along the lines with what Stereo suggested with the drums. Maybe layer the drum track a bit quieter behind the main and put some delay in places, boost the kick, top the snare that kind of thing? But this sounds more then just OK. You've produced a good track mate.
Commented on Goatee ay by mrchewson
sounds solid. drums could use some more noticeable variations. whats the original song?
your cat has a look in its eyes that says "dont just sit there fool, save me." couldnt stop laughin.
Commented on Goatee ay by mrchewson
This is an interesting take on this song. Listened to it to the very end. The drums are nice and full and the arrangement is pretty good as well. Don't beat yourself up too much. You're on the right path. Will be keeping an eye out for new material from you.