Tskillz

nice 1

i digg that 808 bass so much man, what a bass

Thanks for the loop from DextDee, and u just turn it in a very nasty ghetto beat.

Cool man, keep it up

GAbz

Kicks are deep. Nice and smooth flow. I like how its not to over the top yet still has enough to complete the beat. well done

wow, now those second kicks are some nasty sub bass. they kick hard. and so do the first ones. they are right in ur face. u simplified the track. mostly i do a lot of elements in my track but then this one is simply effective.
a little more mastering and u are done.
byw, what is the tempo of this track??

DextDee

well, its not bad. but in my honest opinion alot more can be done with this piece of work. my suggestion with be adding a little harder kicks, adding more percussions such as hihats and cymbals wouldnt hurt either. i would also recommend adding a bit of your own melody along with the loop thats being played, as long as its in key there shouldnt be a wrong way of doing this. the only other thing i would add (but optional) would be a bassline, nothing too much maybe 1 or 2 notes on the bass would help fulfill the freq sprectrum of the track. just my 2 cents, thanks for reading!