Hey I like this beat, it's pretty great. I like how it just jumps into the chorus too. The piano during the chorus is pretty tight. I feel like the singer should have been more powerful with it though. I like your voice, it's great! I feel like the first verse's flow was a little too mechanical so to speak, but it was cool overall. Your verses were tight though. Great pocket.
I would really like to hear this song with more mastering and production. I think its an awesome start! I love the mysterious, cinematic beginning and the sitar!
Wow, can't believe this was 5 years ago! Thanks so much for the feedback. It's great hearing completely unbiased opinions. It's really difficult finding people who are willing to give critiques. Anyway, I finally mastered the song, and uploaded to Youtube (along with others) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VVYnSycBWdA&feature=youtu.be. Thanks again. Cheers!
I think the beat is tight and the hook is tight. But! You should find someone else to rap on this track. Your voice just don't go with this beat. Just my opinion. "Keep'em comin & Keep'em movin".
Thanks for the review. I won't be finding another rapper, b/c that's me. I do this to avoid psychiatry! It's fun and therapeutic. Glad you at least liked the beat and chorus. I wrote the hook, my friend sings it. Be glad I didn't sing that part too hahahaha
Digging the mix of rap & singin here (wish more artists would do that, ya know). Oh, and the rapper on here sounds so familiar (kinda makes me think of that guy from The Bloodhound Gang). The piano & beat are cool too. Though yer def gonna wanna go back & remaster this coz you sound like you've got alotta clipping going on at the higher volumes (avoid those red spikes on the meter). Otherwise, this is a pretty nice jam. Keep bangin 'em out mate. Lates!
Thanks for listening and reviewing. I've never been compared to the BHG before but I'm not complaining. Thanks for the heads up on the clipping. I never even noticed that the red means above 0.0 db. You think by now I would've learned a thing or two. I'll try to post some more rap with singers. Cheers :)
Commented on Move On by eFFeX999
Hey I like this beat, it's pretty great. I like how it just jumps into the chorus too. The piano during the chorus is pretty tight. I feel like the singer should have been more powerful with it though. I like your voice, it's great! I feel like the first verse's flow was a little too mechanical so to speak, but it was cool overall. Your verses were tight though. Great pocket.
Commented on Perfect Clarity by eFFeX999
I would really like to hear this song with more mastering and production. I think its an awesome start! I love the mysterious, cinematic beginning and the sitar!
Commented on Madness in a Maze by eFFeX999
I think the beat is tight and the hook is tight. But! You should find someone else to rap on this track. Your voice just don't go with this beat. Just my opinion. "Keep'em comin & Keep'em movin".
Commented on Madness in a Maze by eFFeX999
Play 2 now...
Digging the mix of rap & singin here (wish more artists would do that, ya know). Oh, and the rapper on here sounds so familiar (kinda makes me think of that guy from The Bloodhound Gang). The piano & beat are cool too. Though yer def gonna wanna go back & remaster this coz you sound like you've got alotta clipping going on at the higher volumes (avoid those red spikes on the meter). Otherwise, this is a pretty nice jam. Keep bangin 'em out mate. Lates!