Foreman

LMAO LMAO

That beat is pretty sick. Def needs some mixing to bring out the vocals. 8/10. PM ME FOR A COLLAB.

i like the theme, words,yet you remind me of the beastie boys far as rap style (fun) not grading you but you did ok. i like the verse, funk these haters, im getting paper. I wrote a song called "haters" might put you on if it jumps off

im diggin the side chained pad. i could use this for a car video nice work

or maybe il do the hook maybe that might sound better,idk man,all i gotta know is,the hook has to change somehow for this track to be a heavy hitter

my honest opinion man,and please dont take this wrongly,but the hook at the start of the song (still listening to it while commenting) is not good at all,vocals are to high,its obnoxious,n just honestly wack,in my opinion,now..with that said,ima have my girl do the hook n show u how it sounds see if u like it better,again dont be offended home boi just give u my musical advise,the lyrics are on point the verse is straight on point,i like it,and i want to see more of it,il hit u up sometime when i got it

both of my ears are bleeding and i need new speakers.... fuck you dude

nah jk you did a good job on the bass which was your intention
the other sounds need a compressor real bad though

OH SHIT... KILLT IT...

AYE SIC BEET MAN WOULD IT BE POSSIBLE TA GET THE BEAT WITHOUT THE BUILDUPS?

FOREMAN!!!! WOW HOMIE!!!..LOL I appreciate the shout out and you did a nice job on the verses hard lyrics bro keep it up!!! that was hard my dude, one advice make the verse dry and the hook reverbed...but i appreciate that track bro...ill keep posting my beats vary in style so enjoy the all.

Madnezz

shit brother you have a voice made for music good skills tight track be proud!

fuccs wit it, make sure u checc me out to my dude

Great track, I've got another looperman version on mp3 and listen to it a lot but this one too is a good version... They seem to each give different impressions this one sounds more serious rap whereas the other one is more of a clubbibg track;
great rap too here & the chorus is really catchy I find...

aye bruh good shit pretty tight man u got skills i got some advice i mean from my opinion if u wanna know hit me up on my email other than that good job man. 2 thumbs up

Bro, what makes you think this is dub?

Nice work for your first track! I like the synth work on it a lot! The drums get kind of lost in the mix at times. This doesn't sound like dub really, more like electronic or something! Good work though!

wow cool im not much a duby person,but this track right here right here man sounds goooooooooooooooooooooooooood.

All i here is sub ?? , tho who am i to judge peoples personal taste . . .

sterling.

try to put a reverb inside, its a channel effect. you sometimes can make breakes between the sounds slighty disappear with it. when you are new, try to work with the metronom to hear where your sounds are in the bar and if they fit to the beat. your kick overlays due to its a sample and you make it few times. try to use the granulizer or the direct wave and put your kick in there when you make the bar less long it will stop right where u made it, so its easier to make a double kick without overlays^^ when you dont understand everything just tell me, i hope i made it understandable for you :D

The melody are verry good but this stop betwen melody parts is sucks and the bass желоцитъ is to high I dont here the Dubstep beat for 3 mouts producing is good ..
Note The Sub Bass must be 2db(decibalс) lower than Kick and for the basic dubstep beat you can use only kick and hard snaere ..
Keep it up

Fukn sick bro... nice work. This is goin on my ipod.

Keep 'em comin bro!

I really like this eything on point man keep it UP!

mafi

Great track, great hook and great vocals.

Keep the hits comin

john

Great track man, nice smooth flow. I'd love to collab sometime, I like to produce hip hop tracks with a electro/dub feel and can always use lyrics on some bars, I'm normally good on the hook. Good lookin out man.

-TJ