The music is allright - excelent bassline! (thumbs UP) But I don't think the acapella is fitting to the track. (May be if you can find something with lower and darker voice)
First to review one of your piece's, really like what you have attempted here, nice beat and arrangement, sweet pad and synths...You need to relook at the vocals, as there is a click on the end of some of them, not really sure what tempo you have this piece at(sounds like it is about 128bpm?)but it needs to be bumped up more, try bumping it up to about 140 bpm it will give it more drive, at moment sounds little like a pop song, with all that said, a very good attempt for your first piece, look forward to hearing more from you mate, and welcome to the Loop, good to have another here that does trance...Good work...Peace n Respect...Estefano...
Thanks for the review and for pointing out the clicks on the vocals because I didn't notice them. Also the tempo for the song is 140.614bpm because when you upload the vocal piece to Fl Studio and hit Detect Tempo, that's what it gave me.
Commented on Trancy Lifestyle (Looperman Exclusive) by DrekDigital
The music is allright - excelent bassline! (thumbs UP)
But I don't think the acapella is fitting to the track.
(May be if you can find something with lower and darker voice)
Commented on Our Destiny by DrekDigital
Hey Drek
First to review one of your piece's, really like what you have attempted here, nice beat and arrangement, sweet pad and synths...You need to relook at the vocals, as there is a click on the end of some of them, not really sure what tempo you have this piece at(sounds like it is about 128bpm?)but it needs to be bumped up more, try bumping it up to about 140 bpm it will give it more drive, at moment sounds little like a pop song, with all that said, a very good attempt for your first piece, look forward to hearing more from you mate, and welcome to the Loop, good to have another here that does trance...Good work...Peace n Respect...Estefano...