well the music has a great message in it. im not one to be a critic, but you must make your vocals stronger. practice everyday, dont eat sweets, it bad on you voice. honey green tea. start humming and then hold them. this teaches you to hold a note properly. sing from your the pit of your stomach. if you muffle your vocal by singing the way you talk, people will notice the differents.anyways try doing that for about 2 weeks and notice the difference.o and learn to catch the beat on point also.
what version of garageband do u have? because the slashing music box tune u got i also tried to use in garageband and it's 30 bit format or something wouldn't work. cool song btw, vocals may need a little work but hey what do i know.
Beat is good, very nice mix, I almost wanna say i hear a beat from my buddy califken...close to it...perhaps look for a vocalist to sing on this for you? Good tone but needs alot of work vocally...practice makes perfect:D Keep it up bro!!!!
Commented on Slave to my self by Mikhal7574
well you just go right ahead and spread your wings!
love the song concept, ima slave to myself! good job.
Commented on Yesterday by Mikhal7574
well the music has a great message in it. im not one to be a critic, but you must make your vocals stronger. practice everyday, dont eat sweets, it bad on you voice. honey green tea. start humming and then hold them. this teaches you to hold a note properly. sing from your the pit of your stomach. if you muffle your vocal by singing the way you talk, people will notice the differents.anyways try doing that for about 2 weeks and notice the difference.o and learn to catch the beat on point also.
Commented on Yesterday by Mikhal7574
you certainly get an "A" for effort!!! LOVE the message! yesterday's gone, today's here.
Commented on Yesterday by Mikhal7574
nice mate, were that vocal from very nice. The beat is nice just suits the vocals down to a t
Commented on Creeping on me by Mikhal7574
thanks for the download
Commented on Got To Have Time by Mikhal7574
Nice track, yea this is mos def hip-hop...good work.
Commented on These words will not define me by Mikhal7574
Love the track man, it's real smooth.....i really like when the hook comes in, crazy vocals fun to listen to.
Commented on The Bottom by Mikhal7574
Sounded certainly heart-felt. Very profound.
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Commented on Creeping on me by Mikhal7574
what version of garageband do u have? because the slashing music box tune u got i also tried to use in garageband and it's 30 bit format or something wouldn't work. cool song btw, vocals may need a little work but hey what do i know.
Commented on Creeping on me by Mikhal7574
Vocals need some work. Keep at it. :)
Commented on Creeping on me by Mikhal7574
yes thats little bit creepy:D but nice beat
Commented on The Bottom by Mikhal7574
souled - reaches down and wedgies up - yr aim is true brother
Commented on color by Mikhal7574
Beat is good, very nice mix, I almost wanna say i hear a beat from my buddy califken...close to it...perhaps look for a vocalist to sing on this for you? Good tone but needs alot of work vocally...practice makes perfect:D Keep it up bro!!!!
Commented on color by Mikhal7574
Dude what's was u thinking singing on the beat the beat sound good do
Commented on Your Life by Mikhal7574
Vocals in the intro, a little flat, but i still loved this song,
I'm no singer so who am i to say anything about flat singing :)
The vocals do get better though, they actually get quite good :)
a very nice track
theFISHface
Commented on Got To Have Time by Mikhal7574
Electronic ? this sounds like hip hop the voice is to low try to fix that it sounds like a good song,Good luck''