JamesDavies

Pots and pans banging together

This makes my head want to explode sounds like shit on top of shit

pretty good :)

Dude what are you using to make the beat? Your drums don't even make sense, out of beat totally. I don't mean to be harsh, and you should not be offended. I take it you just starting out.

you understand how to use space/silence. i like the hesitating, tripping feel you create. it's so hard to make 4 beats in a bar stay fresh and you really get that. i like the orchestral hits and I like the scratching! neat track. all the best! Dan

i like how the beat evolves. that is something i work towards. something is staying the same and something is changing. it's a great technique. that 'scraping' or 'scratching' sound that interrupts the beat now and then is a great touch. thoroughly enjoying your track my friend. peace.

im sorry but your track is way off..

I'm not a rapper but as a producer I would say that I would if it was me....go back to the drum loops and get everything in time..it seem off to me..I tried to follow the rhythm but I could not get a steady flow.

Tight track JamesDavies! ill beat and some dope flows. Nice work.

Being only 15, I think you might have exciting musical future in front of you. I guess you have a soft spot for inventiveness and experimentation which is an important phase in developing your own style and approach to music.Your execution of this particular musical idea shows a portion of good taste! Well done, James! We want to hear more from you.:)

All the best___Orlando

Sounds cool, man. I dig it.

different James...and thats always an accomplishment...I would not be a good source of advice on the genre..but my observation would be a bit similar to PDRaka..the beat and rap sound like they were recorded at different tempos that dont quite line up (I`m just listening to the vocal in the same context as a singer...so maybe thats not applicable)...keep on doing it your way....Ed

the beat is really good, the first rapper has a very weird original flow. the second rapper is good, this is is a well put together track that doesnt get repetitive hiphop wise.

This is pretty cool! I like the sort of dancey drums very much! Mind if I include it on my hip hop show on loopradio.net? Thanks for the DL!

dont stop making beats you will become a legend one day, your drums can use a little work, but this still sound very fresh

Keep on the good work. Back to the 80's! Love the simplicity of this song.

james I'm glad glad to find a new one from tallented U .
also I didn't know harry fraud & french montana & thnx for presenting this cool music & musicians to me . well I hadn't heared main version of track buT what I heared right now in your music was interesting & nice tunes & lovely for me . a terse track which has many potential to be mixed with many other musiX & I enjoyed..many thnx for sharing & all the best.___Behnam

Thank's. Keep it up...

Pretty good homie. The beat was nice,your flow was too, but like you said it was kinda short. If you want to get better at your freestyle then you should just grab a dictionary put a beat on and flip threw and stop and use the first word your eye catches. And just keep flipping threw the pages and using the words you land on, wile you spit. You will get a-lot better.

really diggn this man!!

Purely awesome!

2nd verse cranks hard as hell...

No the beat is perfect,i like the sample.This your first time and gotta say you did it justice.Well u can always improve from here,especially in delivery.But i like your writing skills.good job.

No the beat is perfect,i like the sample.This your first time and gotta say you did it justice.Well u can always improve from here,especially in delivery.But i like your writing skills.good job.

Sick shit man good job on your first trap.