Sounds like the vocalist is afraid of the microphone. Vocal phrasing needs help, along with the general execution of the vocals. Music is not bad at all, needs clarity. Vocals are what broke this one. Lyrics are passable, it's the phrasing, notes and delivery that hurt this so much. I hear what you are trying to get at here, just have someone else with more experience do the vocals. Not wanting to hurt feelings, but coddling only hinders us after age 3.
The bass shouldn't be panned left. Disorienting. There's not alot of clarity in the guitars either. The drums, while off in parts, were very good. Nice double bass. Not to complain, but I feel you put your stuff on here for constructive criticism, just like me. Keep it up!
away from the fact that that ain't really my kinda music, I was a tad... confused. The Bass seems to only play from the left side, while the distorted guitare sits in the middle... to get a better sound you could try panning the guitare hard left and hard right (to seperate them you could add a slight non-feedback delay set to 100% wet and around 10 to 30 ms to one of the channels, instant seperation... or you could record the guitare a second time (possibly changing the effects slightly) and then pan the first hard left/right and the second record hard right/left, aka, double-track...) The Bass on the other hand: put it directly in the middle... especially the sub just needs to be there, you could pan the things above say 200 Hz a tad, but everything below should really stay in the middle. you would get a better sound instantly oO also, since the vocals seem to be center panned, this should give them a tad more space as well
the track itself sounds good thought, just not really my kinda music, as said.
also: I just try to be helpfull, not dissing you or something. xX
I feel like this after one too many cups of Java...needs work but I applaud your effort. Need to get the guitar level in check for sure. It's got a frantic feel to it though.
wow nice intro! as i closed my eyes i imagined it to be at some sorta part in a drama or adventure movie soundtrack. lovely and well put together,those synths are great :)
Nicely done. Working with all of those different loops had to be extremely difficult. You did a really nice job making a cohesive song out of them. Well done.
this is terrific multi-dimensional music - totally outta the park looping - my only gripe is post yr lyrics, that may seem dumb but i really dig this and would like to get a better handle on where yr coming from...
Commented on Enjoy The Ride by TheElectricNote
Thanks
Commented on Saturday Night by TheElectricNote
coollllllllll
Commented on Saturday Night by TheElectricNote
cool!
Commented on Stay True by TheElectricNote
I don't think my clip did justice to the melodic notes in your song. Nice composition, though. Thanks for using my clip :)
Commented on The Only One by TheElectricNote
Sounds like the vocalist is afraid of the microphone. Vocal phrasing needs help, along with the general execution of the vocals. Music is not bad at all, needs clarity. Vocals are what broke this one. Lyrics are passable, it's the phrasing, notes and delivery that hurt this so much. I hear what you are trying to get at here, just have someone else with more experience do the vocals. Not wanting to hurt feelings, but coddling only hinders us after age 3.
Commented on Wheres god at now by TheElectricNote
The bass shouldn't be panned left. Disorienting. There's not alot of clarity in the guitars either. The drums, while off in parts, were very good. Nice double bass. Not to complain, but I feel you put your stuff on here for constructive criticism, just like me. Keep it up!
Commented on Wheres god at now by TheElectricNote
away from the fact that that ain't really my kinda music, I was a tad... confused.
The Bass seems to only play from the left side, while the distorted guitare sits in the middle... to get a better sound you could try panning the guitare hard left and hard right (to seperate them you could add a slight non-feedback delay set to 100% wet and around 10 to 30 ms to one of the channels, instant seperation... or you could record the guitare a second time (possibly changing the effects slightly) and then pan the first hard left/right and the second record hard right/left, aka, double-track...)
The Bass on the other hand: put it directly in the middle... especially the sub just needs to be there, you could pan the things above say 200 Hz a tad, but everything below should really stay in the middle. you would get a better sound instantly oO also, since the vocals seem to be center panned, this should give them a tad more space as well
the track itself sounds good thought, just not really my kinda music, as said.
also: I just try to be helpfull, not dissing you or something. xX
~so far
Commented on Alive by TheElectricNote
The bass is in a different key, and the vocals are also in a different key from the muzic in the beginning. To be honest, it made me cringe.
Take a listen without the vocals. Good luck.
But it started out beautifully!
Commented on Hit And Miss by TheElectricNote
I feel like this after one too many cups of Java...needs work but I applaud your effort. Need to get the guitar level in check for sure. It's got a frantic feel to it though.
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Commented on Hit And Miss by TheElectricNote
i will try to sing along with this one track
Commented on Hit And Miss by TheElectricNote
this site wont let me download on an iphone. will have to wait until later to listen. im looking forward to it!
Commented on Hit And Miss by TheElectricNote
i will take a listen. thanks for using my track!
Commented on Realyze by TheElectricNote
Sounds good
Commented on Take Me by TheElectricNote
not to bad
Commented on Take Me by TheElectricNote
Noice
Commented on Take Me by TheElectricNote
Excellent piano loop! well done..
Commented on Not Your Normal Girl by TheElectricNote
Vocals are terrible with this track! Maybe...You can post this track without vocals...Looks interesting though ;-)
Commented on Not Your Normal Girl by TheElectricNote
wow nice intro! as i closed my eyes i imagined it to be at some sorta part in a drama or adventure movie soundtrack. lovely and well put together,those synths are great :)
Commented on Eye 2 Eye by TheElectricNote
Absolutely stunning track)))))))
i want to remix it))))))
Commented on Totally Twisted by TheElectricNote
Really interesting track. Nice how you mixed different things.
Commented on You Say You Love Me by TheElectricNote
i like the concept of the song, just feel levels are to high on some tracks. a re- mix it sound good
Commented on I Breathe by TheElectricNote
great stuff man. I really the piece. god bless
Commented on The Game by TheElectricNote
Nicely done. Working with all of those different loops had to be extremely difficult. You did a really nice job making a cohesive song out of them. Well done.
Bear
Commented on The Game by TheElectricNote
this is terrific multi-dimensional music - totally outta the park looping - my only gripe is post yr lyrics, that may seem dumb but i really dig this and would like to get a better handle on where yr coming from...
Commented on Sexy Jude (Version Piano) by TheElectricNote
That was so good, I won't mind you calling me a sexy Jude ;-)
Just kidding, great track.
John