Very interesting piece. I think your volume washes out some of your good ideas in the beginning. You can probably bring some levels down and not loose the intensity. j.a.
very deep and moving, i like the bell rings on intro, it builds very well as the freq comes u and i like the whole feel to it. dark and discordiant. film noir!
Good musical evolution, evidence that the advice and good reviews can serve and make a difference in the positive .... For cons, the mix is not so. Some saturation peak, and at 5' the intensity of the track volume falls, and finally a large crack in the end? ....
Thanks again for the help Dan, The volume falling and the crack are a function of not paying full attention when i was recording. Ableton is finicky like that. Good to know people are out there who are willing to help.
The concept is very good, although somewhat repetitive. Not enough transitions, in my opinion, and drums in back are not suitable. This track needs to be reworked in its entirety, but without losing the thread of musical history ..... This is only my humble opinion of course ....
Commented on Romeus-Flight From Exile- At Peace Again by Zarata
Very interesting piece. I think your volume washes out some of your good ideas in the beginning. You can probably bring some levels down and not loose the intensity.
j.a.
Commented on Romeus-Flight From Exile- At Peace Again by Zarata
very deep and moving, i like the bell rings on intro, it builds very well as the freq comes u and i like the whole feel to it. dark and discordiant. film noir!
Commented on The Loden by Zarata
Good musical evolution, evidence that the advice and good reviews can serve and make a difference in the positive .... For cons, the mix is not so. Some saturation peak, and at 5' the intensity of the track volume falls, and finally a large crack in the end? ....
Dan
Commented on The Loden by Zarata
The concept is very good, although somewhat repetitive. Not enough transitions, in my opinion, and drums in back are not suitable. This track needs to be reworked in its entirety, but without losing the thread of musical history ..... This is only my humble opinion of course ....
Dan
Commented on The Blue Elfstones by Zarata
I really enjoyed what I heard so far, I hope you are able to upload the entire piece soon.
All The Best
john