BlakeStringer

I enjoyed the piece. Would have liked if it were a bit longer.

John

I'm really enjoying this track! And I feel where you're coming from. Absolutely nice work, and unique production.

>To Endtransmission : I hear what you are saying, but it's my opinion that we DO need the ego. Who is supposed to drag us all kicking and screaming into the future except for someone who KNOWS that they can do it? I just got fired for this same resistance to confidence. If you know what the future will bring and you try to change things are warn others, the problem is in the skepticism or the underlying resistance to change. Not saying you are wrong, just had to throw my opinion in.

I have to say, you come across as arrogant, and you seem to think that your some kind of profit. You didn't predict anything, you looked at information like everyone else and came to a conclusion. The same conclusion as most other intelligent people. This IS advice for your music by the way. It's not meant to be an insult. The song is pretty good, the lyrics are not bad but involve only information that you'd hear on the news anyway. I'd dig a little deeper and really find out whats going on, then put that in your lyrics. We NEED people like you that want to get the truth about the world out, but we don't need an ego to go along with it. Also the mix needs sorting out in the vocals.

... and that's the truth mate. Keep searching, keep doing your music, and don't hate me for trying to help you and being honest. : p

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REPLY TO BELOW: ""Goodbye" is about the world coming to end, which is something I predicted. However, no one believed me, and here I am gloating about how they should of listened. Any feedback would be great, as I feel like I'm improving as an artist as I create more tracks"

I'm getting two completely different pictures here. I'm going to just leave you to it mate, the reply you just gave makes me think that you're worse than I thought in the first place. You need to learn to accept critique. The people who have slagged me off the worst in my musical path have been the ones that helped me the most.

That's all I'm going to say on this.

Hi Blake...this is a cool tune..I think the music though relegated to the background is a perfect vehicle for your voice..I can see your really starting to get the inflections going with theatrical nuances all over the place...this particular style with the vocals front and centre (where they belong in my opinion)really has the potential to go places...some time down the track I'd like to feature you voice with some of my music...cheers planet :)

That shit was mental!

Interesting track man! Some cool sounds and effects. Vocals are cool and fit well. Well done man

this is some fantastic production.... everything has its own place in the mix, very good!!

nice tune!

this track is awesome i like the variant of the lead you putted on it , and the vocal is good too

is it you singin in this one.

I would love to produce something for your album!1!

Strait from the 80's! Nice, ever consider putting a bit of distortion on that vocal track, could give it an edge... anyhow enjoyed it thx.

man, your very brave doing lyrics...
but i think you have pulled it off on this one :) the smooth voice telling a story!

yep, this sounds quite pro man, nice melodies all round!

very well done, ima listen to this again ;)

PEACE!
Butcha

this tune just grows on you!!!!!

i remember it from last time i heard it...

i have to agree with Barry panning that bit is F****ing awesome ;P
had me going!

ma lady will love that trak, she'll be on the couch bouncin bout, singing that at me even tho its her that like that haha.
i love that sound youve used that makes it all bounce along nicely in that groove man, lyrics were nah, nah ah nah nah in a childish sort of way as if too say u cant touch me. would go down well in a club with all the posers in there pushing there weight about cuz peps cud sing it 2wards those who know who they are...reflections

Hey Blake....great feel and I dig your voice!...your hitting a good sonic zone here....this "works"...I guess when it boils down to it that's the main goal...great natural delivery..but with a sophisticated polish...the supporting beat is a cracker as well....nice one! cheers planet

When I got to the end of this, all I could think about was how much this sounds like a direction Trent Reznor might have expanded from post-The Downward Spiral. It almost feels like you are confronting someone because the music has this vibe like it's your "backup" or "muscle". Interesting.

Cheers.

I would love to play this for all the wacked ass candy kids out there in the world! They all need to reflect!
loved it bro!
-B-

I appreciate you vocals on this and your other songs. It's important to me when people speak their minds, and it shows. Entertaining track!

Neat vibe! The bass synth is played in reverse aKa "reflection" Very wierd and trippy sound. "Your Gonna Freak Out!" Keep up the new wave sound and groove shadow444.. peace, dance, and love-making... djcliff

I love it! this puts me in mind of shriekback or something, which is just great! And I completely hear what you are speaking about, I know people like this... too many people.

not bad brutha,
nice melodies, very catchy!
vox might be a little too loud, other than that i think you got ya self a good single there, which tells a common story, if you know what i mean, i see it all the time!

well done mate :)
Butcha

i dig this track.. but i have to confess i was singing with the beat and didn't listen to your vox much... just means i'll have to listen to it again.

i'm listening to your reverb nation account at the mollment.

hey bro,

sounds like a pretty good collection of sounds, with a lot of variety, which is good!
id say well done to you man for completing nearing 2 albums worth of decent sounding tunes!

quiet a talent mate, keep it up!!!

PEACE
Butcha

PS, ohh seeing as your also Aussie, i bet you listen to 'mix-up' on triple j on Saturday night. if not you definately should, there is heaps of electro tunes flying about, it sounds quite similar to some of your house tunes!!!!

that was very interesting!

personally the tunes changes to much for me, you have so many different melodies mix in there! that potentially could be other tracks! i liked certain parts a lot! but i can't say i liked the vocals, sorry!

id love to do a remix of it! however id only use a few of the several melodies you put in there, and make it darker.

well done mate!!
PEACE!
B.S

wow, something different:)

Keep making TECHNO