THanks, and yea PianoSounds is pretty amazing, i am working with a few of his other samples now. I'm really glad i found htis ste, trying to make some connections, and hopefully I will have another track up soon.
Hi, your words are very powerful great lyrics. Your track is off balance your vocals are much louder than the music. The words are very deep, so you can captue people with the innotation in your voice, some parts can by loud, some soft, some angry some painful.. ect. Your vocals are loud mostly, so innotate and prononciate your words. Respect ~Effluence~
Thank you, and yea, i know the levels are all off, i was just excited to get a track up you know, hopefully i will learn to balance it out more with practice.
Commented on Dear Mother pt 1 by Writenow921
this is pretty sick!
Commented on Dear Mother pt 1 by Writenow921
Nice effort..try again.
Commented on Conformity by Writenow921
Great words, my friend, and well spoken. The backing track would be more effective it came a little more to the forefront.
All The Best
John
Commented on Dear Mother pt 1 by Writenow921
I love the George Bush line!
Commented on Dear Mother pt 1 by Writenow921
Something that I love and appreciate about your poetry is that you but feeling into it. Whether pain, love ect. great job
Commented on Dear Mother pt 1 by Writenow921
dude, your poetry is so moving. keep doin what you do man.
Commented on Dear Mother pt 1 by Writenow921
Man this is very deep I can hear the strength in your voice
Commented on Dear Mother pt 1 by Writenow921
i think the vocals are little to loud, good lyrics though. just needs to be compressed i think.
Commented on Conformity by Writenow921
Love the way the voice was recorded guy! really makes the track!
pianosounds has monster ears big time donet he? nice track, like the reciting!
Bm;)
Commented on Conformity by Writenow921
Hi, your words are very powerful great lyrics. Your track is off balance your vocals are much louder than the music. The words are very deep, so you can captue people with the innotation in your voice, some parts can by loud, some soft, some angry some painful.. ect. Your vocals are loud mostly, so innotate and prononciate your words.
Respect
~Effluence~
Commented on Conformity by Writenow921
I'm feeling this if you can get someone to balance your track out then it would be awesome