I thought it was cool even if it's not what nightingale had in mind. I do agree about the complimentarty pad part (synth), but just play with it and have fun "in a craaazzy way"! lol...Nice work man!
Nice piece mate, you are improving all the time, this is big improvement since I heard some of your works, which is great to see, liking the beat and bassline, nice vocals, good listen thank you...Fav'd...Peace...Estefano...
Hey, this is alright for a start to a track. Don't take this in a bad way, I just wanna give some tips on the few things I know about song production. The track needs a few adjustments. First off, the timing isn't really in sync through the whole track. Fix the notes so that they fit in with the drums a little better. Second, there needs to be some more diversity in the track. Change up the notes.. I feel like you have a good rough outline, but in the end, there isn't really a melody. All of it seems more like background music to a complete song. Fill those gaps with some synths or something to give the track a more solid feeling. Anyways, I don't want to write a novel here..so I'll leave it at that. Hope some of the info I gave will be helpful. Take care.
not one for house usually.. but this has some nice potential in it bro.. maybe deepen that sound up in the mid to low end with a complimentary synth.. unless you goin for the minimalistic house then you got it down.. just a suggestion man really enjoyed the listen anyway keep it up bro
Thanx 4 the feedback. As a structure it is quite solid and bass'n'drum are good as well. I like you play with the voice, but you can do it as I sad in a CRAZY way, meaning much more. And maybe to put on some instruments too such as sax, harmonica etc. Anyhow as a step it's a right direction. Stepin' on.
Nice work you have done hear so fars, to me it does sound like it is not complete, intro is little long without much change, neeed to give little more changes through out the piece, does sound little like the same all the way through, I know we are all still learning here, Going by your description I was expecting vocals but no vocals???, that is poss what it needs to help with the changes in the track....Good work so fars...just needs to be completed...when you do please let me know and I will come back for another listen, dont agree with the guy that reviewed before me, reviews like that are not helpful, just plain rude, piece of advice on the other review, dont take them to heart or to serious, he is not showing you any respect :( Peace man....Estefano.....
Nice track fam, if it were mine I'd probably replace the guitar sound with something else. It's got some good ideas in there tho man, keep them coming.
Hey great job man i thought this track was excellent! I loved the way the guitar pieced in with everything it sounded excellent! Keep up the good work!
Some off the melodys are quite catchy in this track, but if im gona be honest, i would say that the synths u have chosen are pretty pants, i would also build on what pecussion u already have, but like u said you've only spent a few hour on it so far, so with a bit more time u could probally improve this ten fold, cos it's a good start, what you've done so far!
Four count drum bass. 1.2.3.4, then you filled the first three counts with what sounded like a string bass, and the fourth beat was solo. I liked that.
Commented on Thabang - Clouds Of Some Music by Thabang
this is deep. You put me under the sun so good.
Commented on Thabang ft Nightingle - BlowYouUp by Thabang
I thought it was cool even if it's not what nightingale had in mind. I do agree about the complimentarty pad part (synth), but just play with it and have fun "in a craaazzy way"! lol...Nice work man!
Commented on Thabang ft Nightingle - BlowYouUp by Thabang
Hey Thabang
Nice piece mate, you are improving all the time, this is big improvement since I heard some of your works, which is great to see, liking the beat and bassline, nice vocals, good listen thank you...Fav'd...Peace...Estefano...
Commented on Reverberation (Strike Again) by Thabang
Hey, this is alright for a start to a track. Don't take this in a bad way, I just wanna give some tips on the few things I know about song production. The track needs a few adjustments. First off, the timing isn't really in sync through the whole track. Fix the notes so that they fit in with the drums a little better. Second, there needs to be some more diversity in the track. Change up the notes.. I feel like you have a good rough outline, but in the end, there isn't really a melody. All of it seems more like background music to a complete song. Fill those gaps with some synths or something to give the track a more solid feeling. Anyways, I don't want to write a novel here..so I'll leave it at that. Hope some of the info I gave will be helpful. Take care.
~Influx
Commented on Thabang ft Nightingle - BlowYouUp by Thabang
not one for house usually.. but this has some nice potential in it bro.. maybe deepen that sound up in the mid to low end with a complimentary synth.. unless you goin for the minimalistic house then you got it down.. just a suggestion man really enjoyed the listen anyway keep it up bro
Commented on Thabang ft Nightingle - BlowYouUp by Thabang
Thanx 4 the feedback. As a structure it is quite solid and bass'n'drum are good as well. I like you play with the voice, but you can do it as I sad in a CRAZY way, meaning much more. And maybe to put on some instruments too such as sax, harmonica etc. Anyhow as a step it's a right direction. Stepin' on.
Commented on Reverberation (Strike Again) by Thabang
Hey mate
Nice work you have done hear so fars, to me it does sound like it is not complete, intro is little long without much change, neeed to give little more changes through out the piece, does sound little like the same all the way through, I know we are all still learning here, Going by your description I was expecting vocals but no vocals???, that is poss what it needs to help with the changes in the track....Good work so fars...just needs to be completed...when you do please let me know and I will come back for another listen, dont agree with the guy that reviewed before me, reviews like that are not helpful, just plain rude, piece of advice on the other review, dont take them to heart or to serious, he is not showing you any respect :( Peace man....Estefano.....
Commented on Thabang - Mid Nigth Love by Thabang
whats up man i listened to a few of your tracks and i really like this one its got a real positive vibe. Nice job man!
Commented on Reverberation (Strike Again) by Thabang
bra I'm sorry but I'ma have to crit ya..... your stuffs kinda wack dawg....but ey hope u dnt think I'm attacking you. peace
Commented on Thabang - Angels Joy Part 2 by Thabang
love the guitar melody line...really original!!!! Bouncy track too!
Commented on Thabang - Angels Joy Part 2 by Thabang
I like the track..nice lil bouunce to it. The kick could be a lil more heavier though. A break down would be killer. Keep it up. - P
Commented on Thabang - Angels Joy Part 2 by Thabang
Nice track fam, if it were mine I'd probably replace the guitar sound with something else. It's got some good ideas in there tho man, keep them coming.
Commented on Thabang - Angels Joy Part 2 by Thabang
Hey great job man i thought this track was excellent! I loved the way the guitar pieced in with everything it sounded excellent! Keep up the good work!
Peace Love Jesus!
Commented on Thabang - Mid Nigth Love by Thabang
It's nice man, you got yourself a couple of downloads already which is always a good sign. Keep it up man, looking forward to hearing some more.
Commented on Thabang - Mid Nigth Love by Thabang
Some off the melodys are quite catchy in this track, but if im gona be honest, i would say that the synths u have chosen are pretty pants, i would also build on what pecussion u already have, but like u said you've only spent a few hour on it so far, so with a bit more time u could probally improve this ten fold, cos it's a good start, what you've done so far!
Keep up the good work djs!
Commented on Thabang - Lolo (Original Mix) by Thabang
Four count drum bass. 1.2.3.4, then you filled the first three counts with what sounded like a string bass, and the fourth beat was solo. I liked that.
Commented on Thabang - Lolo (Original Mix) by Thabang
Like how you filled three of the four beats with the strings and built it.