This track is built nicely, good instrumental but the first thing I noticed is the vocal is too quite. I'd say bring it up a few dBs to get it to take front. Overall, with a few tweaks this one will really shine! Keep it up,
Production is great, lyrics are consonantly spot on, but what else is going to happen in this tune, a chorus?, it will just blend in with the rest of the Hip Hop magma unless you have something special hidden. Cru
Thanks dude, your lyrics really had a way of shining through. If you wish to go full force and finish this track with your lyrics let me know. Till then I think I will leave as is or find an artist that wants to do a full track on it.
nice start. you have a nice feel for lyrics. and yea the background is very chill. i love the "point" you get on the bass. it's sweet. good luck with more development.
Dj Phil only had these lyrics for his track. I added a guitar to it so far to give it more of a chill feeling as well. Hopefully a lyricist is interested in collaborating and we can use this as a hook. Thanks for checking it out.
Thanks TeeGee, I will boot up Reaper and see what I did. Might have lowered the master. Thought I fixed that originally but maybe not. Appreciate the help big time.
Thanks for listening, the rest is locked up waiting to be mastered. Waiting to see if Hemanifezt wants to spit over this track itself to breath like into it instead of reworking his vocals in my DAW.
The Groove is great in this one :-). The vocals fit great to the track and really gives color to the track. Maybe the vocals starting around the 1 minute mark is a bit off(in my humble opinion). The break is awesome and the open hihat is so clear and vivid. The breakbeat is the cherry on top. Great track!
Thank you for listening Mudhoen, I just listened to the minute mark "If You Can" and it is a bit off. Also the bass just doesn't want to burst through the way I am trying to, maybe the way I renedered it at 192000. Going to keep playing around with it and get some better quality out of it.
Hi mate, great track. Bonnies pella is just amazing you have worked it really well. Not too crowded in the mix and all the elements blend to give a haunting atmospheric sound!!
You weren't wrong at all. The humming she did is the closest thing you get to a pad from the human voice. I did add a small part but the main body of it is her voice. =)
Thank you for checking it out. I did use a pad but it is very small. I used the Harmony/Main and Wait Echo of hers and created the beat around her vocals. Reason for my drum samples and VSTs for my bass and volin.
Commented on Jay Will - Vision - Observe Remix by Observe
Nice track..love your flow.
Commented on Jay Will - Vision - Observe Remix by Observe
This track is built nicely, good instrumental but the first thing I noticed is the vocal is too quite. I'd say bring it up a few dBs to get it to take front. Overall, with a few tweaks this one will really shine! Keep it up,
Brado
Commented on Observe Feat DJ Phil - Pass the Cup by Observe
Production is great, lyrics are consonantly spot on, but what else is going to happen in this tune, a chorus?, it will just blend in with the rest of the Hip Hop magma unless you have something special hidden.
Cru
Commented on Observe Feat DJ Phil - Pass the Cup by Observe
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Commented on Observe Feat DJ Phil - Pass the Cup by Observe
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Commented on Observe Feat DJ Phil - Pass the Cup by Observe
Oooh, I could work with that
Commented on Observe Feat DJ Phil - Pass the Cup by Observe
Suuuuuper dope... I applaud your production skills.
Commented on Observe Feat DJ Phil - Pass the Cup by Observe
Let's have the full track, will be a good one I think!
Commented on Observe Feat DJ Phil - Pass the Cup by Observe
need to hear more, nice track well done. i'll be watching for the full track
Commented on Observe Feat DJ Phil - Pass the Cup by Observe
nice start. you have a nice feel for lyrics. and yea the background is very chill. i love the "point" you get on the bass. it's sweet. good luck with more development.
Commented on Observe Feat DJ Phil - Pass the Cup by Observe
Very good stuff. Laidback beats with chill vocals. Would love to hear this in a complete track. Please put it on here when it is finished!
Commented on Observe Feat Sehya - All These Years by Observe
Hi. For me is good sound.
Commented on Observe Feat Sehya - All These Years by Observe
No, the overall volume is a bit low I think, compared to other tracks but not a big deal.
Commented on Observe Feat Sehya - All These Years by Observe
very good sound quality, maybe a bit low on volume? Good production!!
Commented on Observe Feat Sehya - All These Years by Observe
this was really nice to listen to, sounds so official!
Commented on Observe feat Hemanifezt - Thank You by Observe
Sick beat!
I would only make the vocals a little louder.
You were kind of overpowered by the instrumental.
Commented on Observe feat Hemanifezt - Thank You by Observe
Nice teaser, where is the rest??
Commented on House of Looperman by Observe
The Groove is great in this one :-). The vocals fit great to the track and really gives color to the track. Maybe the vocals starting around the 1 minute mark is a bit off(in my humble opinion). The break is awesome and the open hihat is so clear and vivid. The breakbeat is the cherry on top. Great track!
Commented on Observe ft Janis71 - Superman by Observe
Nice definelty not rusty
Commented on Observe ft Bonnie Rabson - Ill be waiting by Observe
Hi mate, great track. Bonnies pella is just amazing you have worked it really well. Not too crowded in the mix and all the elements blend to give a haunting atmospheric sound!!
Commented on Observe ft Bonnie Rabson - Ill be waiting by Observe
Cool mix! I like your bass line! I used these vocals recently too, they're very good! Nice one!
Commented on Observe ft Bonnie Rabson - Ill be waiting by Observe
Oh, sorry for calling it pads! My musical vocabulary is very...hmm small, so I just guessed that that was what I was hearing. Anyway - great track!
=)
Commented on Observe ft Bonnie Rabson - Ill be waiting by Observe
I so love this pella by Bonnie - and you have done a good job fitting it in in this song.
Great pads!
Commented on Observe ft Janis71 - Superman by Observe
Hey Observe. This is sounding awesome already! Yea Looperman is great for non-mainstream stuff. Don't think you're rusty at all! :)
Commented on Observe ft Janis71 - Superman by Observe
I'm kinda trancin' out a little bit. very heavy.