ProdTRAPDOC

No worries mate you are good.

Very nice track Mate.
I love the intro.
Maj

nice track dude !
Michael

Great vox mix at 1:40 of so, great track overall. Cool transition to the rock section and that coda is beautiful. Really well thought out and structured piece.

Really digging that piano at the start. You did a great job painting a picture with the music. The distorted drums at the beginning, the voices, the uplift at 1:45 really brings the song to a whole. Great work here!

At the beginning of the composition, I saw the image of Jimmy Morrison)

Man, this is a lovely track. Less avant-garde than your latest track but this is so pleasant to listen to and I think it could do well on the various platforms if you decide to publish this!

Hey man, very brave and interesting harmonies and interesting effects. I like music that challenges the brain and this one definitely is in that category. Great stuff!

At the beginning I had no idea that this would become an indie rock song, but then the picture came together around 2 minutes in... very creative work, the vocals are really great... however, I think the part after 2 minutes is a bit too loud in the mix (or master) ...
congrats and fistbump, Danke

Sounds beautiful

I like the track a lot.... sounds like a lot of work. The beat in the first longer part grabbed me right away... then the transition to the second, fast beat - wonderfully resolved. The incredibly awesome guitars that pop up... do you play them yourself?
All in all a successful track that was fun to listen to.
Cheers,
Micky

Hello and welcome back.
This track sounds cool.
Great beat and nice vocals but i think its more the genre pop?
Well the genre doesnt matter as long the track sounds nice.

Nice track bro, welcome back to LM, the vocal is cool, fresh and current, nice beat and melody. Yes it's hip-hop-ish :)) with a dollop of pop though. Ended abruptly, maybe let it run a little longer and fade. Another 14 seconds and you got yourself a good 3 min track then

Great pop sensibility demonstrated in this one

The lyric and vocal performance really nice too

Really nice work : )

I see the potential of this song and I'd be interested in Co-producing it hmu on IG: @michaelmayomusic

Cool!

Agreed with mostly said below!

Either way really nice sound choices
and also arrangement!

Legendary!

Nice track to start a band with. There are a lot of positive points to my liking. You have a nice and warm sounding voice. It has a nice tembre to listen to but sometimes when you go up a few notes you have a little false note in it. Not much and definetly not that bad sounding, just wanted to point it out. The vocals are a bit on the mix instead of in the mix. Maybe stereoize the vocals would do the trick. The instruments are well chosen and well played. Very much luck with the band! Definetly a good start!

Catchy bro. Fuxwitit

It's a good start! Production standards for pop are pretty high, so you'll need to work on that a little to attract people who work in pop. The basic idea is pop friendly. I would suggest adding some key changes for a bridge, pop is key change crazy right now. Seems you can't push a pop track without a bridge that goes everywhere and somehow lands on its feet and goes into the hook. Keep on it! :D

Sounds ok, good luck on your project.

that distort on that bass

SWEET CREATION MY BROTHA!!!!!

there really is no quick way to do it mainly you just market ya self.

i started locally first then branched off

Legendary!

Nice trackman I don't know much about what your question. I do know that selling for free in the beginning is good
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