OmegaKlash

this beat got potencial..fo su. for the first not bad bro.

the kick is to loud. try to make a nice transition from verse to hook.

just play more with fruity loops around and look some tutorials. may it helps. :)

holla

IBoBeatz

Pretty good 4 a first track with a new program. Yeah, frooty loops is pretty in depth in comparison 2 a lot of other stuff out there.

Send me this track and i will hook this sucker up

I disagree with Taurus, cus I like the old school keyboard digs. That break from :45-1:10 sec is hot if you ask me son. The baseline/drum beat had me ready to turn on the mic. You got a full track with that baseline worked into it? Holla. Nice track kid.

The synth is too heavy and monotonous throughout, but the work you did past 1:25 is decent. Lose the break at around :49; it sounds like an old keyboard. The breakdown at 1:13 is the best part, mainly because the synth is absent. But the beat has potential at that point and beyond.

You have some serious sounds bud..didnt kno magix music maker was possesed such quality lol I have to ask...where...wheeere did you find those video game effects lol

this track is very well produced and i liked the strings. it was interesting and entertaining the whole way. nice one keep em coming