ez fayz seriously kool tune love the different vibes youve got going in here the synth line that comes in 1.15 is as large as a house , like how it gets gradually more distressed defo hit fave
very nice rock type piece, personally I would not change anything with it except add vocals and fix the rendering probs when converting to Mp3 , pity Nuada not here still,dont know if he is here under a new artist name or not?, his vocal would suit this track perfect,but loving what you have done so far with this one, very nice work...Peace Mos formly ELSD..
Oh I love this. I absolutely love this. The production is fantastic.... It's just haunting. I want to hear more from you indeed. The beat and the feeling, especially when its just the beat and the guitar chords, and then the piano comes in... that's just beautiful. I'd love to work with you sometime!!
Hey hey. I kinda feel like I owe you a hundred reviews after your analysis of my track lol. Man, this is pretty sweet. Its packed with energy, and very punchy. Love the drum switches. It definetely has an intriguing arrangement keeping interest in throughout the track. I might wanna give this a listen before I jump into any type of competition, it really hypes me up haha. Great job!!
I really like this song despite the problems with the mp3. The bass is killer, and the progression is awesome! Nice ending too!
As far as the mp3 goes, it sounds like something may be clipping when you compress it. I would try using a mastering limiter on the main channel set to maximize to -.5 db or something. Then you know it won't clip when turned into an mp3. worth a try anyway.
Great guitar play in this one for sure. You know, the screaming was actually pretty good, I actually liked it.. it was weird but hey it sounded pretty darn good. Great job.
hey omar, im glad that you liked it, and the screaming, i didnt even have anything to say to it, but i had a rhythm in my head but no words that would match it so its really just me screaming into a microphone like a loser lol. but all in all it was fun and im glad you listened and reviewed my track and the favor will be returned
This is ultra creative! I really like the old school tone on the guitar! The screaming is crazy cool! I've never heard anything quite like this! The fusion of styles with the different vocals and the strings is really special! Well done my friend!
haha thanx its a rather old track of mine and looking back i feel ridiculous about it, im glad that you enjoyed it and the comment is very appreciative and the favor will be returned
Whenever I listen to tracks here, or am just listening to my tracks, I keep getting the feeling, that "It's O.K. or Cool or whatever... BUT there is something missing from it. There is something in the great artists' works that I simply can not put into my tracks. That's why i can tell if a track is made by someone at my level, or someone much above me.
While listening to this track, i didn't get that feeling. I was leaded by the fusion of intense rythm and powerful guitar sounds.
Although it's a demo, it showed me so much you put into it, that I can't wait for it to be completed.
hey thanks l!ght, im glad you took the time to listen to my track, i haven't posted in awhile because i've been working on perfecting my music more, and i feel that this track is a representation of me finally being able to truly reveal myself as an artist, its maybe about 16 bars of music i cant remember off hand but it did take me about a week to write just that, im still contemplating my second verse, my next rift or melody, and of course if the break down isnt sick, it aint worth breaking down for lol.
Dude, the break at 1.19 is ballz. This is a great track, kind of reminiscent of Fear Factory, but not exactly. You stamped it your own and it is totally badass. Well done. If you're playing all the instruments in this, my hat is of to you. I play bass and guitar, but drums baffle me. This track is tight (musically), and a very good listen. I play in a metal band and do Looperman as another creative outlet; I just enjoy music. I can truly appreciate this. Well done.
This doesn't need any critizism. The lyrics are fantastic, love the shouting parts. The music sounds really good. I recognize me some Magix Music Maker guitar and drum loops when i hear them :)
And you implemented them very well. Great job man. -Gabe
This is one really stylish track! I don't have any criticism at all, because it sounds really good as is! The vocals are especially cool! The part that's not screamed reminded me a bit of Bowie, which is very cool! I like the bass line a lot! Perfect title for this track! Really good work!
wow thank you, especially for commenting on the vox, i've been getting alot of dis on my singing lately, but its all good, just means i have to try harder ;) thanks again for the time to listen and review
Very interesting track you got here, I love the chaotic feel that the arrangement has going for it, made me want to get up and slam dance. Really a well put together track. Nicely done.
Kikajon on Sat 30th Oct 2010 -
13 years ago
Commented on so sick by Fayz
Hey Fayz, love the rhodes in the middle of everything. An emotional track with lots of energy. You're a talent. /pmk
thank you for the time to listen and review, im trying to find my level ground still, but im definitely finding out some new methods that work quite well.
sounds great to me, a bit too gritty, but for a mash up it sounds good, this can work out into something real fine! it's cool how there's sincere rawness in here, pure metal without too much on/at it. so as for me-good, not bad, but of course with things to improve. I like the build up, it could be better complimented with a few melodic flow overs in my opinion anyway. Only dabbled a slight bit in (making) metal so can't give any constructive thoughts about this so far, but sounds like a great start, I'm gonna grab it and listen some more when I need a break from this semi classical work I'm now into, god, it can piss me off at times, this is soothing compared to that. Definitely wanna see the original! keep this one in progress, neon
thanks for your time to listen and review, and i was thinking that myself with the melodic flow over. but im kinda torn between some different thoughts that almost completely change the mood. thanks again
really cool vox trax- doubled up added depth-"chorus" well done-intro is bit long mayb jus haveinstrument break in middle as bridge-well written piece keep it up dude
Commented on back again by Fayz
ez fayz
seriously kool tune love the different vibes youve got going in here the synth line that comes in 1.15 is as large as a house , like how it gets gradually more distressed
defo hit fave
Commented on deph stomp by Fayz
not usually my type of music but.....very interesting and well put together. enjoyed listening.
keep up good work
Commented on so soft by Fayz
Hey mate
very nice rock type piece, personally I would not change anything with it except add vocals and fix the rendering probs when converting to Mp3 , pity Nuada not here still,dont know if he is here under a new artist name or not?, his vocal would suit this track perfect,but loving what you have done so far with this one, very nice work...Peace Mos formly ELSD..
Commented on this moment is ours by Fayz
I love the emotion in this track!
Commented on this moment is ours by Fayz
Oh I love this. I absolutely love this. The production is fantastic.... It's just haunting. I want to hear more from you indeed. The beat and the feeling, especially when its just the beat and the guitar chords, and then the piano comes in... that's just beautiful. I'd love to work with you sometime!!
Commented on Cold and Dark aka bleeding demo prt2 by Fayz
Hey hey. I kinda feel like I owe you a hundred reviews after your analysis of my track lol.
Man, this is pretty sweet. Its packed with energy, and very punchy. Love the drum switches. It definetely has an intriguing arrangement keeping interest in throughout the track. I might wanna give this a listen before I jump into any type of competition, it really hypes me up haha.
Great job!!
Commented on so soft by Fayz
I really like this song despite the problems with the mp3. The bass is killer, and the progression is awesome! Nice ending too!
As far as the mp3 goes, it sounds like something may be clipping when you compress it. I would try using a mastering limiter on the main channel set to maximize to -.5 db or something. Then you know it won't clip when turned into an mp3. worth a try anyway.
Great song though, with much potential!
Commented on so soft by Fayz
Wow!!! luv that track it's got a lot of feeling in it' really a moving song.
Commented on Egyption Eyes by Fayz
Great guitar play in this one for sure. You know, the screaming was actually pretty good, I actually liked it.. it was weird but hey it sounded pretty darn good.
Great job.
Commented on Egyption Eyes by Fayz
This is ultra creative! I really like the old school tone on the guitar! The screaming is crazy cool! I've never heard anything quite like this! The fusion of styles with the different vocals and the strings is really special! Well done my friend!
Commented on Cold and Dark aka bleeding demo prt2 by Fayz
I keep listening to this XD
Commented on Cold and Dark aka bleeding demo prt2 by Fayz
Whenever I listen to tracks here, or am just listening to my tracks, I keep getting the feeling, that "It's O.K. or Cool or whatever... BUT there is something missing from it. There is something in the great artists' works that I simply can not put into my tracks. That's why i can tell if a track is made by someone at my level, or someone much above me.
While listening to this track, i didn't get that feeling. I was leaded by the fusion of intense rythm and powerful guitar sounds.
Although it's a demo, it showed me so much you put into it, that I can't wait for it to be completed.
Thanks! L!ght
Commented on spring morning rain by Fayz
Vary interesting tunes are here puted together...
Hmmm....I like it...
RGDS
SERGEJ
Commented on Dont stay cover by Fayz
I'm sorry it ended so quickly. Sounded quite good, my friend, keep them coming.
John
Commented on spring morning rain by Fayz
Awesome guitar! The drums sound a bit to fake for me, but then again im a drummer mainly and im critical of it.
Good job!
Commented on spring morning rain by Fayz
Enjoyed the track, my friend, well done.
John
Commented on spring morning rain by Fayz
Sweet, really enjoyed the guitar
I like the ending as well,
KEEPitUP
theFISHface
Commented on Nightmare by Fayz
There some moments when this reminds me of old school Pink Floyd. I like the track.
Well Done
John
Commented on so sick by Fayz
Dude, the break at 1.19 is ballz. This is a great track, kind of reminiscent of Fear Factory, but not exactly. You stamped it your own and it is totally badass. Well done. If you're playing all the instruments in this, my hat is of to you. I play bass and guitar, but drums baffle me. This track is tight (musically), and a very good listen. I play in a metal band and do Looperman as another creative outlet; I just enjoy music. I can truly appreciate this. Well done.
-36
Commented on Nightmare by Fayz
This doesn't need any critizism. The lyrics are fantastic, love the shouting parts. The music sounds really good. I recognize me some Magix Music Maker guitar and drum loops when i hear them :)
And you implemented them very well. Great job man. -Gabe
Peace Love Jesus!
Commented on Nightmare by Fayz
This is one really stylish track! I don't have any criticism at all, because it sounds really good as is! The vocals are especially cool! The part that's not screamed reminded me a bit of Bowie, which is very cool! I like the bass line a lot! Perfect title for this track! Really good work!
Commented on so sick by Fayz
Very interesting track you got here, I love the chaotic feel that the arrangement has going for it, made me want to get up and slam dance. Really a well put together track. Nicely done.
Commented on so sick by Fayz
Hey Fayz, love the rhodes in the middle of everything. An emotional track with lots of energy. You're a talent.
/pmk
Commented on Egyption Eyes by Fayz
sounds great to me, a bit too gritty, but for a mash up it sounds good, this can work out into something real fine! it's cool how there's sincere rawness in here, pure metal without too much on/at it. so as for me-good, not bad, but of course with things to improve. I like the build up, it could be better complimented with a few melodic flow overs in my opinion anyway. Only dabbled a slight bit in (making) metal so can't give any constructive thoughts about this so far, but sounds like a great start, I'm gonna grab it and listen some more when I need a break from this semi classical work I'm now into, god, it can piss me off at times, this is soothing compared to that. Definitely wanna see the original! keep this one in progress,
neon
Commented on Egyption Eyes by Fayz
really cool vox trax- doubled up added depth-"chorus" well
done-intro is bit long mayb jus haveinstrument break in middle
as bridge-well written piece keep it up dude