well,.. the request for vocals as per your pre/de-scription at the moment of the supple load, er upload.. in my mind, contradicks itself.. you request a vocalist, then say you tighetened em up... so 1) many MAY think.. fck i can't calm pair to that.. or 2?) wtf is he in-secure ?
either way, you got a style man - stick to it NOW and write that friggin album... just rememeber, your styles will change and it's easy to start new sht... focus on this bro, give you 6m-1y... do it , do it now !
?(teh nwe'll go do the acoustic album, even tho I think you should do that first.. no biggie)
Really nice work. NV sent me this way, said you were related....I won't tell anybody if you don't, hahaha. Seriously, it looks like talent runs in the family. This one definitely has a soundtrack feel to it and that's a good thing. As far as the lyrics go....most lyrics make no sense to me anyway :)
I tried to keep our relation on the low, but he hacked my profile and posted links to himself everywhere, and keeps telling everyone... lol j/k. You are right, he is one talented mfr... Thanks for the review... and NV has nothing but great things to say about your talent. I'm going check out your page now...
Dammmmnn.. this is hit material and sooooo imaginative. Howlin out like there's no tomorrow man.. nv-ous of your skill, should help inspire many !
and those lyrics are genius poet like the Mick side would come up with.. from inside... thanks for posting this man, you have done the world a great service believe it or not
Yea, when all these lyrics fell out of my mouth, it was completely without forethought, and it felt like i was possessed by Zack de la Rocha and Marshall Mathers spawn. lol
Thank you! There is definitely room for improvement vocally, but it seems I am improving steadily. On my iPhone, so it is to check out your work right now, but I definitely will. Thx for the review!
Not bad, I really liked this. Lovin the raw sound and just pure good stuff. Scream it from the heart always man. Keep it real. That guitar and your vocals screams attention with the drums of pace!! Keep at it dude. This is my favorite so far tonight. Peace.
Killer work bro yet another great tune here. I have to go to work soon and don't have a whole lot of time for a detailed review but I really did enjoy this kudos...
Very good work, I like the tune. Particularly like your vocals. I see what you mean about needing a touch up, but it does sound like the whole song was recorded live - which is good.
You could make a more polished version, but do keep this one; there is a charm about it.
Thanks alot for the input. My heart wants to bellow out vocals without end... my voice just needs to catch up, but we are making strides together right now. Thanks again, I'm going to check your work out now.
Brian - awesome mate, thanks for commenting. Hate to say it but I've been in another planetsphere for years now and am not really sure who DoTN are, which elemnts reminded you of them btw ?
AD - can't f-in wait til we get the song tidy'd up man, this is VERY cool, but since we got some lyrics fleshed out and I got ideas for slight structure derangements, the next version will kill !
Nice work here! This took me back to the 90s and the band Days of The New... This is very similar to their style, I am not trying to dismiss your signature elements I am just saying it reminded me of the band Days of The New. ...And that band is very good so kudos!
Thanks alot man. NV's riff is the soul of the tune, I just wanted to jam to it and try not to ruin it. Gonna have to redo the vocals and lead and tighten it up.
performing open heart surgery on yourself - it's a risky procedure and executed only under the direst of conditions - will make headlines: AD Baby Lives, Speaks at Nine Hours Old
damn dude.... just damn... horny for this track.. please do a ND/AD/etc acoustic album quick before your styles change tooo much, it's and endless cycle, trust me.. still good, but gotta get that sht out there pleeease.. just drop 8 tracks for us and stick em on bandcamp for $ $seriously
hahhhh, yeah mf (mon frere). I told you you were a rapper bro, just a bit of work on the flow & stow & go yo.. just like you told me about polemic, and that I'm a drummer, and all the other stuff.
so yeah, a little restructuring and then BLAM, vocalize here & there, slam the chorus and f-us all up with your lead guitar part.. love you man !
welcome back mon frere, justarted coming back online myself.
I'm digginnit, nice laid back groove, yeah i know you're still holding back some on the vocals, but damn, you got it man.. SOOO glad you're singing man.. if I ever get a guitar maybe I can pull some lead or something someday, hmmmm
Commented on embodied by AdvanceDirective
hah, you send me the song in email and i comment via txt msg.. and forget to stop by to blow smoke up your ass, lol
pooof!
Commented on Writt by AdvanceDirective
my mistake, he was askin for lyrics un-vocals, chaka,, sorry for planting the seed in-fertile ground lol
Commented on Writt by AdvanceDirective
well,.. the request for vocals as per your pre/de-scription at the moment of the supple load, er upload.. in my mind, contradicks itself.. you request a vocalist, then say you tighetened em up... so 1) many MAY think.. fck i can't calm pair to that.. or 2?) wtf is he in-secure ?
either way, you got a style man - stick to it NOW and write that friggin album... just rememeber, your styles will change and it's easy to start new sht... focus on this bro, give you 6m-1y... do it , do it now !
?(teh nwe'll go do the acoustic album, even tho I think you should do that first.. no biggie)
spread the nv !
Commented on Peasants Hole - Soldiers Soul by AdvanceDirective
sounding good...
keep at it
Commented on embodied by AdvanceDirective
getting a grip around a burning stake - ecstasy the hard way - AD this is so right on!!
Commented on Burnt by AdvanceDirective
Really nice work. NV sent me this way, said you were related....I won't tell anybody if you don't, hahaha. Seriously, it looks like talent runs in the family. This one definitely has a soundtrack feel to it and that's a good thing. As far as the lyrics go....most lyrics make no sense to me anyway :)
Awesome work.
Bear
Commented on Titleist by AdvanceDirective
Dammmmnn.. this is hit material and sooooo imaginative. Howlin out like there's no tomorrow man.. nv-ous of your skill, should help inspire many !
and those lyrics are genius poet like the Mick side would come up with.. from inside... thanks for posting this man, you have done the world a great service believe it or not
Commented on Titleist by AdvanceDirective
fearless and kinda scary - the ballad of Payne Stewart - absolutely kicking ass - thoughtful slices into the rough
Commented on Peasants Hole - Soldiers Soul by AdvanceDirective
hahah hah ah...
"He's pointing his gun in the wrong direction..."
hahaha genius lyric man !
Commented on Titleist by AdvanceDirective
I like your voice dude. Definitely built for rock!
Commented on Titleist by AdvanceDirective
Not bad, I really liked this. Lovin the raw sound and just pure good stuff. Scream it from the heart always man. Keep it real. That guitar and your vocals screams attention with the drums of pace!! Keep at it dude. This is my favorite so far tonight. Peace.
Commented on Titleist by AdvanceDirective
Killer work bro yet another great tune here. I have to go to work soon and don't have a whole lot of time for a detailed review but I really did enjoy this kudos...
Brian
Commented on Clank - AD Collab with Neal Visher by AdvanceDirective
'clank' is right on - as opposed to 'clink' = yez a couple a hardheaded visionaries not winy poetasters - hard regards
Commented on Your Heart by AdvanceDirective
Very good work, I like the tune. Particularly like your vocals. I see what you mean about needing a touch up, but it does sound like the whole song was recorded live - which is good.
You could make a more polished version, but do keep this one; there is a charm about it.
Commented on Clank - AD Collab with Neal Visher by AdvanceDirective
Brian - awesome mate, thanks for commenting. Hate to say it but I've been in another planetsphere for years now and am not really sure who DoTN are, which elemnts reminded you of them btw ?
AD - can't f-in wait til we get the song tidy'd up man, this is VERY cool, but since we got some lyrics fleshed out and I got ideas for slight structure derangements, the next version will kill !
chaka !
nv
Commented on Clank - AD Collab with Neal Visher by AdvanceDirective
Nice work here! This took me back to the 90s and the band Days of The New... This is very similar to their style, I am not trying to dismiss your signature elements I am just saying it reminded me of the band Days of The New. ...And that band is very good so kudos!
Cheers!
Brian
Commented on Your Heart by AdvanceDirective
performing open heart surgery on yourself - it's a risky procedure and executed only under the direst of conditions - will make headlines: AD Baby Lives, Speaks at Nine Hours Old
Commented on Burnt by AdvanceDirective
Very nice track. I agree with confu - I can imagine a few movie scenes where this would fit in quite nicely :)
Commented on ifall by AdvanceDirective
damn dude.... just damn... horny for this track.. please do a ND/AD/etc acoustic album quick before your styles change tooo much, it's and endless cycle, trust me.. still good, but gotta get that sht out there pleeease.. just drop 8 tracks for us and stick em on bandcamp for $ $seriously
Commented on the end by AdvanceDirective
why 'are' we planning at all.... that's the dilapidated beauty of it all wha ? rock me amadaveus
Commented on dasperturbed by AdvanceDirective
mmmm, stillove thisong man, more bass !
Mick !
Commented on Peasants Hole - Soldiers Soul by AdvanceDirective
we should focus on thisong and do it rightogether !
Commented on Burnt by AdvanceDirective
hey,.. did i hear my name in there ? heheh, wish i had a copy/download
Commented on Peasants Hole - Soldiers Soul by AdvanceDirective
hahhhh, yeah mf (mon frere). I told you you were a rapper bro, just a bit of work on the flow & stow & go yo.. just like you told me about polemic, and that I'm a drummer, and all the other stuff.
so yeah, a little restructuring and then BLAM, vocalize here & there, slam the chorus and f-us all up with your lead guitar part.. love you man !
neal
Commented on Burnt by AdvanceDirective
welcome back mon frere, justarted coming back online myself.
I'm digginnit, nice laid back groove, yeah i know you're still holding back some on the vocals, but damn, you got it man.. SOOO glad you're singing man.. if I ever get a guitar maybe I can pull some lead or something someday, hmmmm
nv-us