this is very fine song, relaxing. to me from about 1:17 strings in the background are clashing with lower piano notes. there is no harmonic clashings of course but kind of overall mix 'overpower' happening. The sound is simply too fat (at least to me haha). It is good to somehow separate the layers to find the proper frequency range for each instrument inside the mix by equalizing instruments and analize the proper amount of reverb of them etc. That low acid bass that you are using seems to generate a kind of a distortion at places. synth melodies (from 1:56 and later along the track) are sweet and nicely played.
again overall this is very nice song but you may always consider adding drums and re-organize the material (to me there is not so much of space here regarding to the repetitive nature of this song). hope some of this is useful anyway...
I enjoyed listening. it is a favourite track of mine. Greetings, Alex
0:18 plucked strings are pretty nice. Good feel to them.
Afterward is a darker, less positive line.
0:48 Similar guitar line that sounds rather good, followed by more of the odd riff.
At the 2:00 mark, your cymbal cuts off unnaturally. You then reverse the same drum line, and have it come back into the forward drums. Nice idea. Could probably be done to sound more natural, but it's not bad!
I would add more, but you didn't, so I shall stop here. As said before, more parts and more time spent on the drums would benefit this track, but it's still pretty solid!
Commented on Wadda Ya Call It by Mokeone
I really like what you did here! Innovative sounds.
Commented on Lounge About by Mokeone
Awsome work!
Commented on Lounge About by Mokeone
I like the optomisim in this tune.. very happy jazz. Thanks for making it..
Commented on Lounge About by Mokeone
good! positive & relaxing
Commented on Lounge About by Mokeone
beautiful sound. thank you
Commented on Smooth Moves by Mokeone
... I like this sound!
Commented on Lounge About by Mokeone
So cool. Smooth!
Commented on Lounge About by Mokeone
Nice!!!
Commented on Lounge About by Mokeone
love the sounds
Commented on Lounge About by Mokeone
Love this Jazz track. Sounds awesome!
Commented on Lounge About by Mokeone
so dope!!!
Commented on Lounge About by Mokeone
This just gave me New Life.
Commented on Lounge About by Mokeone
Real smooth track from a fine musician. I like the DX sounding piano. PDMuzak
Commented on Lounge About by Mokeone
nice sound
Commented on Smooth Moves by Mokeone
My Friend mellow indeed. The sound is an amazing grace indeed. Love your work and yes it is relaxing....
JazzIs, cool
Commented on Lounge About by Mokeone
what an amazing work!
Commented on Lounge About by Mokeone
Smoooth...!
Commented on Lounge About by Mokeone
hello.
this is very fine song, relaxing. to me from about 1:17 strings in the background are clashing with lower piano notes. there is no harmonic clashings of course but kind of overall mix 'overpower' happening. The sound is simply too fat (at least to me haha). It is good to somehow separate the layers to find the proper frequency range for each instrument inside the mix by equalizing instruments and analize the proper amount of reverb of them etc. That low acid bass that you are using seems to generate a kind of a distortion at places. synth melodies (from 1:56 and later along the track) are sweet and nicely played.
again overall this is very nice song but you may always consider adding drums and re-organize the material (to me there is not so much of space here regarding to the repetitive nature of this song). hope some of this is useful anyway...
I enjoyed listening. it is a favourite track of mine.
Greetings, Alex
Commented on Lounge About by Mokeone
I am not really Jazz Fan, but this one is amazing. Good Work.
Commented on Hard Road Ahead by Mokeone
Hello.
0:18 plucked strings are pretty nice. Good feel to them.
Afterward is a darker, less positive line.
0:48 Similar guitar line that sounds rather good, followed by more of the odd riff.
At the 2:00 mark, your cymbal cuts off unnaturally. You then reverse the same drum line, and have it come back into the forward drums. Nice idea. Could probably be done to sound more natural, but it's not bad!
I would add more, but you didn't, so I shall stop here. As said before, more parts and more time spent on the drums would benefit this track, but it's still pretty solid!
Take care
Evan
Commented on Hard Road Ahead by Mokeone
This is really special...(for me)
Guitar chords and harmonies reminds me a Hungarian alt/rock band: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qBDwLLy_CXw
Get some bass for it and 1 more part and this will be a winner...but I still like in this state too...
Handshake, Danke
Commented on 2 left beat by Mokeone
Luv the drums and bass line!
Commented on 2 left beat by Mokeone
samples on point
Commented on down the rabbit hole by Mokeone
gets u instant into trance :) n1
Commented on down the rabbit hole by Mokeone
awesomely trippy stuff