Xzysin

Great job mate great job!

Hello,
Wow, Great track my friend.
Well done mate.
Maj

I really like this, the intro in particular is brilliant. Keep it up

yeah, this is outstanding ... one of the gems of an almost forgotten style I think ... at least for me ... full of energy and creativity ... but I miss the bass ...
huge claps and standing ovation
fistbump, Danke

It's got a head bobbing, toe tapping thing going on with some extras thrown in. Love the backwards slowdown at the end. Keep smiling man.

EXCELLENT WORK!!! KEEP GOIN!!!

NICE TRACK

Hello, Mate

This is a track is beautiful.

Really well-made mate.

Brilliant

Well done.

I think you were going for a lofi sound, but it kinda sounds like line noise in the beginning. I would turn down the bass kick a bit, it is clipping (you can see the top and bottom of the wave chopped off).
I like the breaks in the beat, very Aphex Twin.
You can turn the volume down a little on all the tracks, add a compressor on the master, and then turn the wet up a little, to get that hard bass without it washing out everything else when it hits (set a fast attack/release speed and about a 2DB knee). You could also just compress the kick and leave the rest alone, there are several different techniques.

This video thoroughly explains compression:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7oOmX3JHwtE

Lots of new sounding ideas here, keep it up.

One of the few tracks I've heard here that has a gradual tempo change, down with quantizing :)

Nice track, well mixed, good sound choices.

I noticed you bounce around on your DAWs. You could always try Reaper since it's free (you just click "still evaluating" when it loads, and you don't have to buy it unless you create music that starts making a bunch of money). It also has a thorough tutorial list on youtube and the reaper site, as well as a 400 page manual, a bunch of downloadable samples, loops, plugins etc.

Some complain it's not as user friendly, but I like the tech stuff.

It also has rudimentary video editing, which I used to make this music video:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YWUcET-N61w

Also if you are interested in sharing a folder or something to collaborate for fun I'm down for whatever.

I've made one visualization video, I'm working on plugin chains that convert audio to midi, and then trigger video tracks and effects in real time, and it's a huge pain :)

I would reduce the chipmunk vocals and reduce the volume and eq the lead that comes in at 58 sec. Watch out for frequencies in the 4K range (they damage hearing), electronic music is full of them.

Overall good track lots of good ideas.

Here's a video that might help with EQing (it helped me a bunch):

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EAGC2fUAU1M

Very cool love the song man.

That's a beautiful and well arranged track. And to me the sound is well enough to enjoy this superb sonic trip ... ;-)

Love the structure, this is VERY well composed and mixed. This can 100% get picked up by a label if you mastered it correctly. If you'd like, I can help you with that. No charge, I just hate to see such a well put together piece of art go unnoticed because it "isn't loud enough"

WELL DONE...ARE YOU PLAYIN SOME PARTS...IF NOT NO WORRIES..GREAT JOB PUTTING IT TOGETHER...IVE DONE THAT TIME TO TIME....YOUR VIDIOS ARE COOL... DO U DO THAT...SORRY I LOST MY QUESTION MARK

Some nice choice of sounds here! Well done!

want to download this track and mix it ! what do i need to get ahold of it , or mix it? beautiful work by the way!

One of those leads need to take a chill pill, good work though