This has character and floats super nice as indie dream pop. I really like your voice. I think I said this before, but you have a very genuine vocal delivery that is easy to connect with.
I'm at a loss on how to even describe this song. I ended up liking the vocals a whole lot more on a second listen, and I really like that clean trem guitar, I had a cream colored Mexican Strat years ago, and I swear those chords made me think so vividly of it. Overall, this song is well done, unique, and memorable. Those are all qualities one needs when taking their music to new heights. This earned a fav from me. I love it. -Aaron
This is a nice! tune & as always your vocals are soaring, such a sweeett! track. I think you could sing the whole song yourself but I understand you want to collab with another vocalist, If I did collabs I would probably do it but I don't but in any case fingers crossed aye. Nice track all the same. Kudos!
hey bro, thanks for the comment. the collab request is for someone to fill in the second verse with vocals. if i cant find someone ill have to do it myself, but would like to collab w another vocalist and possibly release. hope that clears that up :)
As far as the technical aspects are concerned, BeatMaker4real is definitely right. But as far as the artistic side is concerned: In terms of composition, this is your best track so far. I think your singing is absolutely appropriate here, and it doesn't bother me that it's repetitive and so sparingly orchestrated... in my opinion, that's exactly the right level of relaxation and openness that the track needs. What I mean is: If the track is technically correct, I could definitely imagine it on the radio or officially on the web. Very well done!
I don't normally have anything to say about another persons productions, we all have our own ear..but you did ask..lol
The beat is hot, but the vocals are sitting on top of the track, which to me, makes me feel like I'm listening to two different things instead of just one. I would lower the vocals a bit..do some subtractive eq of the beat so the vocals could sit better in the pocket.Treat the vocals just like another instrument you adding to the track...but this is a hot one for sure.
I think the vocal would be improved with some additional processing. A wee bit of reverb (not too much), some different EQ applications for different parts of the track (to accentuate the very intimate vocal delivery in parts), introducing some additional instrument sounds as the track progresses to create more variety and build to a higher level in the latter half of the track.
I'd be tempted to try double or triple tracking the vocals in some places and also try adding some delay. Basically experimenting with different treatments in different areas.
The entire track has a really nice laid-back feel to it, but the vocal needs to have more variation in delivery to maintain and build interest I think.
Don't mind me, I had to come back for seconds :) usually once I hear a track once is enough but this is just too AWESOME! it's what I do when a track is that BRILL! one of your BEST!
Another masterpiece with that cool delayed vocs again ... huge bass, minimalism on it's best :-) and that VOCAL ... bro you're getting better and better ... what is the goal? :-) fistbump, Danke
That bass thats what I'm talking about! Oh yeah so you on this vibe! Perfect I have to say I dig this one alot! Love these trapsoul or Chillhop lofi type vibes! Excellent! More please thank u homie
Mammamia!! wow! B, this is what I'm talking about, my goodness! listen to that voice of yours :) every box is ticked on this golden nugget, just bellissimo! on every level, I'm floored by this beauty! so EXQUISITE!!! Instant Fave wow! :)
Commented on i dont need to know by BONEZONMARZ
*CRISP* I meant to say :)
Commented on i dont need to know by BONEZONMARZ
Ahhh, this is so pristine! & crip a truly BEAUTIFUL! track! indeed.
Commented on i dont need to know by BONEZONMARZ
ayee nice work!!! what a tune, i like the lead guitars throughout
Commented on i dont need to know by BONEZONMARZ
This has character and floats super nice as indie dream pop. I really like your voice. I think I said this before, but you have a very genuine vocal delivery that is easy to connect with.
Commented on i dont need to know by BONEZONMARZ
I'm at a loss on how to even describe this song. I ended up liking the vocals a whole lot more on a second listen, and I really like that clean trem guitar, I had a cream colored Mexican Strat years ago, and I swear those chords made me think so vividly of it. Overall, this song is well done, unique, and memorable. Those are all qualities one needs when taking their music to new heights. This earned a fav from me. I love it.
-Aaron
Commented on i dont need to know by BONEZONMARZ
Not vocal collabs I meant to say :)
Commented on i dont need to know by BONEZONMARZ
Hey B,
This is a nice! tune & as always your vocals are soaring, such a sweeett! track. I think you could sing the whole song yourself but I understand you want to collab with another vocalist, If I did collabs I would probably do it but I don't but in any case fingers crossed aye. Nice track all the same. Kudos!
Commented on i dont need to know by BONEZONMARZ
Yeah this style goes with you too
And you sound really relaxed
Commented on i dont need to know by BONEZONMARZ
Lady in red that one lol
What? Morrissey? Dope!!!!
Hella dope!!!! U on MARZ again!!
Commented on i dont need to know by BONEZONMARZ
great, thogh I'm a little sorry that you don't need some instrumental help (saxophone solo, for example), but I'll forgive you anyway... :-):-)
Danke
Commented on i dont need to know by BONEZONMARZ
Despite the fact that I came across another brilliant song, I would like to know what the collab request refers to?
Fistbump,
Danke
Commented on die for me by BONEZONMARZ
Hi BonezOnMarz,
As far as the technical aspects are concerned, BeatMaker4real is definitely right. But as far as the artistic side is concerned: In terms of composition, this is your best track so far. I think your singing is absolutely appropriate here, and it doesn't bother me that it's repetitive and so sparingly orchestrated... in my opinion, that's exactly the right level of relaxation and openness that the track needs. What I mean is: If the track is technically correct, I could definitely imagine it on the radio or officially on the web. Very well done!
Commented on die for me by BONEZONMARZ
Good vibes. Make it a bit more interesting, not just repeating your loops all time. Voice a bit down into the mix. Cheers...
Commented on die for me by BONEZONMARZ
I don't normally have anything to say about another persons productions, we all have our own ear..but you did ask..lol
The beat is hot, but the vocals are sitting on top of the track, which to me, makes me feel like I'm listening to two different things instead of just one. I would lower the vocals a bit..do some subtractive eq of the beat so the vocals could sit better in the pocket.Treat the vocals just like another instrument you adding to the track...but this is a hot one for sure.
Commented on die for me by BONEZONMARZ
Very nice vibe going on this track, for sure.
I think the vocal would be improved with some additional processing. A wee bit of reverb (not too much), some different EQ applications for different parts of the track (to accentuate the very intimate vocal delivery in parts), introducing some additional instrument sounds as the track progresses to create more variety and build to a higher level in the latter half of the track.
I'd be tempted to try double or triple tracking the vocals in some places and also try adding some delay. Basically experimenting with different treatments in different areas.
The entire track has a really nice laid-back feel to it, but the vocal needs to have more variation in delivery to maintain and build interest I think.
Definitely sounding good so far.
Regards from Ottawa,
Eric
Commented on die for me by BONEZONMARZ
Sounds rly nice :)
Commented on die for me by BONEZONMARZ
The sound efx is brilliant!
YESIRIBOBSKIES! My Boy with a hit right here! Vibes like these are just euphoric! On goin bass is dope!
Commented on dont you worry by BONEZONMARZ
catchy groove, voice nicely blend. Good vibes.
Commented on thieves by BONEZONMARZ
nice work dude, enjoyed this one. i feell you bro they stole that shit piece by piece
Commented on thieves by BONEZONMARZ
Don't mind me, I had to come back for seconds :) usually once I hear a track once is enough but this is just too AWESOME! it's what I do when a track is that BRILL! one of your BEST!
Commented on thieves by BONEZONMARZ
Beautiful beat. I'm instantly getting visuals off this. Great job!!
Commented on thieves by BONEZONMARZ
Another masterpiece with that cool delayed vocs again ... huge bass, minimalism on it's best :-) and that VOCAL ... bro you're getting better and better ... what is the goal? :-)
fistbump,
Danke
Commented on thieves by BONEZONMARZ
Nice work on the track BONEZONMARZ.
Commented on thieves by BONEZONMARZ
That bass thats what I'm talking about! Oh yeah so you on this vibe! Perfect I have to say I dig this one alot! Love these trapsoul or Chillhop lofi type vibes! Excellent! More please thank u homie
Commented on thieves by BONEZONMARZ
Mammamia!! wow! B, this is what I'm talking about, my goodness! listen to that voice of yours :) every box is ticked on this golden nugget, just bellissimo! on every level, I'm floored by this beauty! so EXQUISITE!!! Instant Fave wow! :)