Chasmchaser

nice track using the drum part for my school project :)

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Fantastic track my friend!

The complexity of those drums is actually nice. Adds a cool flow to the track

I really love that guitar!
This reminds me of Satellite empire, have your heard of them?

I would add a hint of dubstep influence on some of the drum sequences and bass at some point during that middle portion to add a little avant-garde but that'd be taking it in a completely different direction.

Overall big fan of this especially the reverb on the guitar..were you just freestyling the guitar riffs then?
-Z

i like the feel of the mix with the ambient sounds n groove of the melody and beat,very nice!!

This was a great listen for me. Your guitars are sounding really good, I liked the flow of the composition. Semi ambient really, which I always enjoy. Nice reflective track.

cool electronics and really nice work on the structure and flow of the track. i thought you might go full dubstep for a moment in the beginning! a well-wrought depiction of your meteor

nice track bro with lots of positive vibes great mix and production love that bright punchy synth, the angelic vocal ad-libs are good and the forced pushed one is fresh, really good work

Hello Chasmchaser,
this is a very well done track, with a nice structure. I particularly liked the use of the guitars, which make the whole thing sparkle even more. The background actually suggests something spiritual, at least that's how I perceive it. I'm looking forward to more of this...
Peace,
Micky

Smooth groove, great vibes with a little mystery mixed in for good measure. I really like everything that kicks in after the 1:56 mark. Very nice and I enjoyed this,

Great Job

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well the description caught my eye, i can get behind that. damn i like this lots. really original sounds esp after the 1.00 mark and plenty of gnarl along with the positive vibe.

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There's quite a bit going on in this. Has a great groove & manages to hold itself together throughout. Great job.

The Freddy Kruger theme type is tight. Should've kept it longer. But hear the experimentation. Great rock part

Tres belle composition, belle harmonie, moi je ne suis pas doue pour l'EDM, j'aimerais bien savoir en faire autant...

Very cool music, I liked it.

Love what you did around 1:56, also the guitar solo from around 2:26 is great. I love how you took 2 fairly separate genres and combined them.
I didn't fully understand it (I couldn't really tell when you would be going from techno to guitars and back) but I guess that doesn't matter, and I certainly had fun listening. Kudos, more of this!

This is really good, as much ambient as chill out in my book. Good guitars. Funnily enough it isn't dissimilar to something I've started working on. Maybe a bit of arrangement to do but I like it very much.

in my opinion, this is very good

I like the piano loop, I like the drum, I like the guitar... But they don't seem to fully cooperate yet. Maybe it's on purpose but they each seem to follow their own speed/rhythm.
See if you agree and whether you can align it more, that would (to me anyway) be even more chill :)
Good luck!

nice chill track , surely to work but the theme is there!
Michael

Nice track and i love that bass.
From 2:40 is crazy!!

nice track Chasm, i like what you got here sounds good as is, the vocal is cool from Dylan, the intro was a little to long for my liking, that's not a criticism, just personal choice really, i'd take 20 seconds off it, when it pumps up its good bro nice job

Hey that's a great song, very inventive.