not a bad tune mate but your melodies are to high in the tune and your drums are low im more drawn to your melodie when i feel i should be dwran to the whole tune if you get what i mean plus maybe you should put more bass and different melodies in there also because the track is basicly the same from beggining to end you need a bit more variation in the track arrangment mate but respcet for trying yeah check back on you soon ok
Cheers m8 lol i know what you mean this was something i threw together in couple of hours sommat to do while i waited for the bank to open lol sat in costa coffee for two hours with laptop n earphones thats why sounds are bit out
The melody and the electro bass line are near perfect. It might be a taste, but overall i like it already. Hope to hear some nice string pads or something. Keep at it!
Thanks for the review my friend now i did say its unfinshed this is why its so short lol but its in progress i just uploading tasters for peoples listening :)
Thanks again dude and this is unfinished too i normally work on 3 / 4 different tracks at any one time as to not get too caught up in them lol as soon as one or all are finished ill update the situation lol
If ya don't know genre it electro or electronic most of the time fits with your track.
At 0:15 in your track there starts this leading-loop, you can use this to be alone, you know everything else stops (slowly or at once, not important just use some crashes and stuff) and you just let that loop loopin' alone a few secs and then you build up your track again with the beat and stuff, it always is cool because you can hear some loops alone and see how great they are and whats also cool is that you can expand your track with another 15-30 seconds, you can also put another loop in and let it slowly build up with the beat, so many possibilities. Hope i could help you and also hoping that my english isn't that bad.
Thanks man im so gutted my sound library has been aniahlated but lucky for me my cous has copy on backup but lost all my works in progress so but peeved off and mind not on the ball yet
All the makings of a hot time on the dance floor. As Spivkurl suggested, it could use a bigger build - maybe pads, but maybe something a little unexpected...?
hey sorry but this does not sound like deep house to me . kick is far to bassy and the percussion is too simple. however i like your bassline, try and build your track around this by adding a lead , melodies and more percussion .
fook yeah! I like the bass line on this track! Very nice choice of synths too. I like the hard edge you've put on this cool house track. Sounds like it could use some big sweeping pads or something like that, it might allow you to build the progression even further. Nice work!
thanks for advice i was thinking pads but couldnt sem to find wat i wanted in my sample list i must have thousands but i never seem to b happy lol ill refresh this track soon so keep eyes open
This is the only trance track in your track list and sounds ok too, it needs little work to sharp it up, but it's already good. Nice sequence to start up, progressive acid-like..., maybe a punchy bassdrum will do the magic ;) It's short but powerful...
Dude someone of ur caliber and the tracks u bang out saying that has made me smile :) bang on bro and thnx for advice new one just uploaded its work in progress
the intro just drew me in but i think the drums n bass could have been better..it sort of took away dat r&b feel..just my opinion but solid track cuz..keep doin wat u do.
Commented on Future by FruitlessRecords
The brake at 1.03 kinda removes the flow of the track but i couldnt whip any thing like this atm so well done nice track :)
Commented on Tunnel Vision by FruitlessRecords
im liking what you've done so far m8, hopefully you will finish it so we can all have a listen in full.
Commented on Twist your mind by FruitlessRecords
Nice bass, putting in ur note in triplets really gives it that electro groove.
Commented on Tunnel Vision by FruitlessRecords
love that bassy kick you use....great work man!!!! Nice synth choice too..
Commented on Fires Burning by FruitlessRecords
I really like this!Has a feel good vibe to it.And the vocals were very good,I was sorry that it ended abruptly.
Commented on Back 2 Square by FruitlessRecords
not a bad tune mate but your melodies are to high in the tune and your drums are low im more drawn to your melodie when i feel i should be dwran to the whole tune if you get what i mean plus maybe you should put more bass and different melodies in there also because the track is basicly the same from beggining to end you need a bit more variation in the track arrangment mate but respcet for trying yeah check back on you soon ok
Commented on Trancendial by FruitlessRecords
The melody and the electro bass line are near perfect. It might be a taste, but overall i like it already. Hope to hear some nice string pads or something. Keep at it!
Commented on Trancendial by FruitlessRecords
Also real great, you got skillzzz, but you should make it longer, yeah yeah yeah
Commented on New Era by FruitlessRecords
Good but short, i like your synths you got in here!
Commented on New Age by FruitlessRecords
If ya don't know genre it electro or electronic most of the time fits with your track.
At 0:15 in your track there starts this leading-loop, you can use this to be alone, you know everything else stops (slowly or at once, not important just use some crashes and stuff) and you just let that loop loopin' alone a few secs and then you build up your track again with the beat and stuff, it always is cool because you can hear some loops alone and see how great they are and whats also cool is that you can expand your track with another 15-30 seconds, you can also put another loop in and let it slowly build up with the beat, so many possibilities.
Hope i could help you and also hoping that my english isn't that bad.
greetings from mister fujisam
Commented on Fruitless Extortion by FruitlessRecords
Some techno elements shown of there.....
Nice rising-modd track.....perfect for dancing & stuff...
Btw, check out my new track https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/39000 .........
Cheers...
Commented on Lost Everything by FruitlessRecords
I like the feel of this track, sounds like you are bouncing back from the HD loss... Doesn't it suck relying on technology?
Commented on fooking hard work by FruitlessRecords
All the makings of a hot time on the dance floor. As Spivkurl suggested, it could use a bigger build - maybe pads, but maybe something a little unexpected...?
Commented on fooking hard work by FruitlessRecords
hey sorry but this does not sound like deep house to me . kick is far to bassy and the percussion is too simple. however i like your bassline, try and build your track around this by adding a lead , melodies and more percussion .
Commented on fooking hard work by FruitlessRecords
fook yeah! I like the bass line on this track! Very nice choice of synths too. I like the hard edge you've put on this cool house track. Sounds like it could use some big sweeping pads or something like that, it might allow you to build the progression even further. Nice work!
Commented on Sanction (opener) by FruitlessRecords
This is the only trance track in your track list and sounds ok too, it needs little work to sharp it up, but it's already good.
Nice sequence to start up, progressive acid-like..., maybe a punchy bassdrum will do the magic ;)
It's short but powerful...
Cheers
Commented on Rewind (Unfinished) by FruitlessRecords
I actually like the drums n bass. The synth/piano intro is nice, but switch it up throughout the track - gets a little repetitious.
Commented on Wind Up (Rough) by FruitlessRecords
This track would mesh nicely with female trio vocals. Even just a few "ooh's" and "ahh's". Great track over too soon.
Commented on tING tANG by FruitlessRecords
Aw dude, just as I was getting into the groove it ended. Sweet, sensual beat. Fill this puppy out.
Commented on Rewind (Unfinished) by FruitlessRecords
the intro just drew me in but i think the drums n bass could have been better..it sort of took away dat r&b feel..just my opinion but solid track cuz..keep doin wat u do.