AlfredTheButman

This is good and chill, with a nice groove to it! I like the synth stabs, they give it that pop edge. The vinyl effects are fun, I always love the effect that has! Very pleasant song!

i would love to write a song for this. please contact me i tried to message you but it wouldn't go thru. thank you.

Love this, really beautiful mix of everything, if you ever want vocals lemme know, but this is great on it's own.

J'aime bien la mlodie au piano. Je suis d'accord avec Bleep au niveau de la rythmique. J'accroche pas trop. Toutefois, avec un bon chant, tu peux faire un truc sympa !
A bientot !

Nice work

Loving what I hear... Nice work Alfred

Ronabo

You forgot to dust the record off, ha! It's cool that you made the noise in tempo for the most part. Nice song overall. It is wide open for some vocals, have you tried the a capella section? Even without vox it holds it own. Nice melodies, calming music!

Wayne

Awesome track, really feeling the drums in this one, over all hot track.

Bonne analyse de BLEEP.
Melody is good, beats needs more work.

i like vinyl effect..so chilly..

pas mal pas mal! j'avoue que pour ma part je prfre que la basse soit prise part entire par une guitare mais la faire au synth en accompagnement des accords de la mlodie, pourquoi pas.
par contre niveau rythmique, je n'accroche pas vraiment celle ci non pas qu'elle soit dplaisante mais elle ne se marie pas ncessairement bien la mlodie. Le plus tranchant ce sont tes "rolls" qui pour moi sonnent cot de la plaque.

Comme cris en dbut de commentaire, sur un plan gnral j'aime bien, bon boulot :)

bleep

very synth pop, nice smooth track and nice sound selection

Let me try again, so i was trying to say great choice of synth and guitar, the mix is spot on. I really like your style. Nice progression as well. Good luck on finding a vocalist. ;)

Peace brother.

Great soundingsm excellent melody. J'adore ;)
Bien vu,

Ludo.

A real beautiful summery vibe, which almost gives me the feeling of butterflies :)

Would like to hear some vocals over the top of this, as they could take it up a notch.

Thanks for sharing.

It is beautiful though!

Well done! The instruments are perfect. I think you should try improving on the drums. Better quality ones. Just my thoughts on it.

I apologize, i though you were french owing to the track title and the suggest about french lyrics... it doesn't change my meaning about the track of course, just it was necessary to erase my misunderstand :)

have a nice day
Bleep

hello Al,

Sympa d'couter une prod d'un autre frenchy, on est pas super nombreux mais force est de constater que tu t'inscris dans ceux qui se dmarquent comme Indieground (je t'invite le dcouvrir si ce n'est dj fait, il fait du son tomber lui aussi)

Bref, parlons de ta zik; d'ambiance gnrale, c'est trs planant, arien au niveau mlodie avec cette grosse caisse qui, elle, tape comme un mtronome, trs hypnotisante!

La ligne de basse, simple, efficace, vient ajouter la rondeur necessaire l'harmonie de l'ensemble! Les caisses claires par contre, ca sonne trs "midi son"... mon avis, avec toutes les banques de sons qui existent au niveau drums, tu as largement possibilit de trouver des caisses claires qui fonctionnent comme des "vraies" sauf si c'est un parti pris artistique, ce que je respecte.
Je ne sais pas ce que pourrait donner ta prod avec des vocals, mais cette version instrumentale, perso, je kiffe bien!

trs bon boulot! j'espre que tu nous posteras d'autres compos.

Bravo
Bleep

I like this tune. Really nice and relaxing to listen to.

So Chill! Amazing brotha! Keep it up!

I love it man, Keep the awesome work up

Ah, how refreshing to come back after awhile and hear this. It's so peaceful. I can hear dancing vocals all around as they sway with the wind in harmony. Makes me want to fire up my microphone. Great work. :-)

Some spoken word vocals might sound nice with this musical idea. Easy on the ears, chilled me out. Nice piece of music, liked the ending effects!

Wayne

Very good soundsouoosg