Grimga on Thu 31st Dec 2009 -
14 years ago
Commented on Rain by techn1c
gotta love that hard bass!
bcway on Fri 11th Dec 2009 -
14 years ago
Commented on Again by techn1c
When I first started listening to your track, I though "oh no, not the same melody all the way through". But no, you changed it a bit which held my interest. I did enjoy your track. Oh yes, I completely agree with Blackryan about it being trance.
This has a very catchy groove to it! The tone on that bassline is super cool too. I like the filter sweeps, they sound quite nice. Hope this one gets updated!
Some awsome stuff goin on in this track...bassline really stands out for me, and i like the plucky synth thing you have goin on too....Think you need to pull back the mid range freq though..could feel it drill my skull a little when i listened...Not a critique...just seems too high if u know wot i mean....Lookin forward to hearing the finished version though..hit me up when its done!!
Sick bass line, catchy synth too. Sounds pretty cool to me the vocal bits blend very well, I'm assuming it will be longer, I def think you are onto something amazing. I like it! Good work!
Superb bass line on this track! The melodies are pretty cool too, and kind of old school. Seems like the drums could use a little more work though, like the frequency ranges could be more filled out. Nice work so far!
yo this track is sick man, u mind sendin me a copy of the individual parts of the mix( bass line, main synth etc..) to remix this? I might be able to get a good vocalist for it too if I think of any words. I've been needin sum practice Mixing and mastering techno anyways.
well, I could send you project file of that song .. but then I would need to know how to contact you .. with e-mail, msn, skype or sumthin like that ..
I like it bro...i think it had a lot going for it. I think you could use another drum layer so that the drum feels closer to me when i'm listening as opposed to far away. (if that makes any sense). And also it could use some more melody...just a tad, not too much because I already love the synth you have already. But another melody to compliment that synth you have with really take this from a track...to a REAL PIECE OF MUSIC. Just my opinion. Keep up the good work.
I like the synth but i think u need a bit more variation and length in the track
C69 on Wed 27th May 2009 -
14 years ago
Commented on Dreamin by techn1c
Great techno/dance track. Good melody, the pings in and out sound great. Nicely mixed and produced. Enjoyed the build up. Great effort!
fiery on Tue 26th May 2009 -
14 years ago
Commented on Kawaii by techn1c
About the only critique I have has already been said, it def could use some vocals to break it up. You need to find someone to work with to do some acapellas for you :) Hardcore isn't really my thing but I liked this a lot, keep up the awesome work!
Hey, you have a great beat here, very strong! a nice melody as well! I would say that you need to add in an aftertone after every beat to give it more energy, and a strong driving lead melody. Overall a good track though! check out some more hardcore tracks and emulate the techniques that they employ there!
Btw, i have made a few hardcore tracks, stop by my profile and tell me what you think?
Kawaii, is not really my type of music but I have a very open mind and so I'll listen all the way through. It's very danceable if you were in a club.The synth sounds are first class and very much of this era.Drums are up front and makes the track charge along. If you could get a vocal line that gave the tune a meaning it would improve it no end at present it is a bit repetitive but this would dissapear with a vox or another section. Indeed this could be an outstanding track with more work. Keep up the good work............just going to get some amphetamines..lol........dylanthermos.
The real problem with my producing is that I make my songs in couple of hours... never finishing songs completely... Now I'm trying to improve my patience while working with FL studio ..
about vocals, many have said this :) that I have to get vocals in my songs to make them sound better...
the only problem is, that I can't find solist for my songs..
and my own voice ain't so good, to be added as vocal in songs..
SoOren on Sun 24th May 2009 -
14 years ago
Commented on FTW by techn1c
Hmm nice track :D im not really into this kind of music but this track sounds nice in my ears ;> Good luck in the future /SoreN
PS: have a look at my tracks if you want :) aight.
Commented on Rain by techn1c
gotta love that hard bass!
Commented on Again by techn1c
When I first started listening to your track, I though "oh no, not the same melody all the way through". But no, you changed it a bit which held my interest. I did enjoy your track.
Oh yes, I completely agree with Blackryan about it being trance.
Commented on Hard bass (very short demo cut) by techn1c
This has a very catchy groove to it! The tone on that bassline is super cool too. I like the filter sweeps, they sound quite nice. Hope this one gets updated!
Commented on Hard bass (very short demo cut) by techn1c
sweet bass
gonna fav and d/l
off to a great start, where did you find that bass? or did u make it?
g.
Commented on Hard bass (very short demo cut) by techn1c
I like what I hear so far, has a lot of potential to sound really great.
Commented on Reality by techn1c
I thought it was well produced, Just keep rockin out my friend style and skill all evolve together
Commented on Reality by techn1c
All the track is fine...Good work
Commented on unique sound by techn1c
Some awsome stuff goin on in this track...bassline really stands out for me, and i like the plucky synth thing you have goin on too....Think you need to pull back the mid range freq though..could feel it drill my skull a little when i listened...Not a critique...just seems too high if u know wot i mean....Lookin forward to hearing the finished version though..hit me up when its done!!
Commented on unique sound by techn1c
Sick bass line, catchy synth too. Sounds pretty cool to me the vocal bits blend very well, I'm assuming it will be longer, I def think you are onto something amazing. I like it! Good work!
Commented on unique sound by techn1c
Superb bass line on this track! The melodies are pretty cool too, and kind of old school. Seems like the drums could use a little more work though, like the frequency ranges could be more filled out. Nice work so far!
Commented on to be by techn1c
contact me @
Commented on Rain by techn1c
dope kicks, you think you can send me an mp3 of em?
Commented on to be by techn1c
yo this track is sick man, u mind sendin me a copy of the individual parts of the mix( bass line, main synth etc..) to remix this? I might be able to get a good vocalist for it too if I think of any words. I've been needin sum practice Mixing and mastering techno anyways.
Commented on Words by techn1c
this track i belive it has potential.
if you work on it a little more im sure it will sound freakin awesome.so i'll wait....
good luck
Commented on Reality by techn1c
Oh, this is epic!
My only problem is, towards the end, you finished off on those high notes in a way that didn't quite match my taste. Hard to describe.
But it's still really great! 8D
Commented on Reality by techn1c
I don't hear any glaring errors, all I hear is a killer techno track. Nice kick drum by the way. Thanks for sharing!
Commented on Kawaii by techn1c
I like it bro...i think it had a lot going for it. I think you could use another drum layer so that the drum feels closer to me when i'm listening as opposed to far away. (if that makes any sense). And also it could use some more melody...just a tad, not too much because I already love the synth you have already. But another melody to compliment that synth you have with really take this from a track...to a REAL PIECE OF MUSIC. Just my opinion. Keep up the good work.
Commented on Kawaii by techn1c
I def just favorited this, hey do you mind if i remix it because i need your yes or no inorder to remix it
Commented on FTW by techn1c
I like the synth but i think u need a bit more variation and length in the track
Commented on Dreamin by techn1c
Great techno/dance track. Good melody, the pings in and out sound great. Nicely mixed and produced. Enjoyed the build up. Great effort!
Commented on Kawaii by techn1c
About the only critique I have has already been said, it def could use some vocals to break it up. You need to find someone to work with to do some acapellas for you :) Hardcore isn't really my thing but I liked this a lot, keep up the awesome work!
Lisa
Commented on Again by techn1c
I've listened 2 a couple of ur tracks. I think they r trance not techno.
Commented on Rain by techn1c
Hey, you have a great beat here, very strong! a nice melody as well! I would say that you need to add in an aftertone after every beat to give it more energy, and a strong driving lead melody. Overall a good track though! check out some more hardcore tracks and emulate the techniques that they employ there!
Btw, i have made a few hardcore tracks, stop by my profile and tell me what you think?
Commented on Kawaii by techn1c
Kawaii, is not really my type of music but I have a very open mind and so I'll listen all the way through.
It's very danceable if you were in a club.The synth sounds are first class and very much of this era.Drums are up front and makes the track charge along.
If you could get a vocal line that gave the tune a meaning it would improve it no end at present it is a bit repetitive but this would dissapear with a vox or another section.
Indeed this could be an outstanding track with more work.
Keep up the good work............just going to get some amphetamines..lol........dylanthermos.
Commented on FTW by techn1c
Hmm nice track :D im not really into this kind of music but this track sounds nice in my ears ;> Good luck in the future /SoreN
PS: have a look at my tracks if you want :) aight.