DeeFlyy

Nice flow that lends itself to the performer, it's the lyrics that will add the dynamics to this wonderful heart-felt track!
Hot Beat!

Tune D

its very nice and smooth. But it is very repetitive. It might be a bit less repetitive with some vocals.
Other than that, good track

yo look on my page mane. i loved your instrumental so much i had to lay some vocals down. check it out

man u gotta get the vocals as crisp as possible because its like puttin old tires on a new car its just not right but if u couldnt get it any better than i understand but try to make everything crisp people will like it more i guarantee

great collabo bbetween tha two of u, really good sound, hot!

I like this I dont think you need that much autotune do. Less is more.Keep on making music

i like this very mellow and great flow dl it awesome job

really nice n smooth track i like this alot.nice work

Fl has some nice tools you can use for your mixdown to give this beat a little more umph, play with them cause this track is nice. A little more variation to the arrangement and a tighter break would be good. Turn up the other instruments just a lil. Against your lead, accapella and drums they are kind of hard to hear. Also, if you swing the hat just a little at the end, it would add more vibe to it. (t,t,t,t,t,t,t,t,[twice] then go double time with minor swing ttt,t,t,ttt,t,t back to normal)

good stuff man keep up the good work homie

I recognize the music from somewhere I just cant remeber right now. Mabey modern beats loops or something like that. Pretty cool hook. I was diggin that the most. If you get the right mix on your tracks you would be good to go! What DAW do you use? Mabey I could help you out.

Pretty cool. Nice bouce to it. Light and airy vibe. Girl can sing pretty nicely. I was diggin it. Kudos to yall.

it does have potential. keep working on it, don't let it rot away in the archives like I've done with so many of mines. i would recommend doing some work on the beat. a little more up paced and a harder kick and bass. Two Up Two Down

Yeah this is dope
Vocals are excellently mixed into the song
That piano is chillin' got a jazz vibe to it

Lyrics are top-notch too
Great quality overall bro

Much Respect from LA

Bro, this is ill right here.
Like the vibe i get off this
it's chilling

the guitar was sick too

Keep it up homie

Much Respect from LA

tie wrk muh man me myself Dirty south Crunk style But can actually call dis music.big ups Vocals sound like u didem at home so i understand. still fly doe.352ezy peace

Killer track my man! Only Critisim I have is that the intro could be alittle shorter maybe. Man if you sent me some clean Wavs (no FX) of some vocals and the beat I think I could clean this up real nice for ya. Let me know what ya think!

nice piece! i think anyone would be plesed with this one well done keep em flowing, stay blessed D. :0)

Keep it coming. What else you got?

REALLY NICE MAN 4 ONE YA 1ST TRACKS!! AYE I WOULD LIKE TO REMIX THIS IF YOU DOWN!

really nice its kinda dark but smooth..

I liked it a lot son...think your production needs a little work..
maybe invest in a better mic, this track has a lot of potential
work on ya flow some more...maybe turn the mic down and bring it
on ya verse a little bit more...I really liked the song, great concept on the superman...keep at it

stay mixing,
slo

Not bad. Not bad. Shows potential. Keep at it.

Cool piece Homie. The only problem was your vox, the sounded a little bit too high and slightly muffled. I'm preachin to the choir though cause I still struggle with my mic quality. Over all good track