Im going to be like Simon whatever his name is on that TV show and say that it needs a lot of work!! you have just one drone instrument playing a repetitive motif and there is no melody. I cannot feel a beat, I don't even know what the time signature is.
I agree with the commenter above. I loved the end from the 1:00 min mark the sustained chord sounds cool. I see you asked somewhere if you should give up. If you enjoy it, don't. Music takes practice, it's work but it is rewarding. I practice hours a day and should be better than I am but it has become a part of who I am. I could never give it up. And for some forms you are more restricted by your equipment but that is pretty easily remedied these days. Good luck!!
I think the intro needs more variation. It goes on for too long and becomes repetitive really quickly. I would suggest adding some percussion or perhaps another synth to make it more interesting.
The mix sounds a little bit muffled and as the song progresses it gets harder to hear everything clearly. This happens specifically around the 0:58 mark. I think you should EQ things that should help.
Overall, you're off to good start and if you keep working on it, this track can be really good.
Commented on Storm unofficial by bennycauthen
Im going to be like Simon whatever his name is on that TV show and say that it needs a lot of work!! you have just one drone instrument playing a repetitive motif and there is no melody. I cannot feel a beat, I don't even know what the time signature is.
Commented on Storm unofficial by bennycauthen
NEEDS A BEAT INVITE ME IN TO FORUM
Commented on Storm unofficial by bennycauthen
This track drags and has no climax.
Commented on Storm unofficial by bennycauthen
I agree with the commenter above. I loved the end from the 1:00 min mark the sustained chord sounds cool. I see you asked somewhere if you should give up. If you enjoy it, don't. Music takes practice, it's work but it is rewarding. I practice hours a day and should be better than I am but it has become a part of who I am. I could never give it up. And for some forms you are more restricted by your equipment but that is pretty easily remedied these days. Good luck!!
Commented on Storm unofficial by bennycauthen
I think the intro needs more variation. It goes on for too long and becomes repetitive really quickly. I would suggest adding some percussion or perhaps another synth to make it more interesting.
The mix sounds a little bit muffled and as the song progresses it gets harder to hear everything clearly. This happens specifically around the 0:58 mark. I think you should EQ things that should help.
Overall, you're off to good start and if you keep working on it, this track can be really good.