IM2H4U on Wed 30th Aug 2023 -
7 months ago
Commented on Electric by Jhet
Hello jet! I was inspired by your song and recorded the second verse. I think this is what you need)
I emailed you, but you didn't get an answer. If the collaboration is still relevant, please contact me and I will send you the song that we have turned out :)
Amazing track. I agree with Eric on the autotune, which is one of my pet peeves, but you know what, this track is so rock solid I don't even mind. Great job!
Saw your post in the forum and decided to check out your stuff. You are clearly a very good vocalist and definitely know how to compose a catchy, contemporary sounding melody. There is no question in my mind that this track is the best one you have posted here to Looperman. Vocal is clean, backing instrumental track works well. Definitely has a Weeknd feel and sound to it. Your vocal on your most recent track, Insecure has a Sam Smith flavour. Those are two great artists, so thats high praise in my opinion. For your own unique sound, I guess maybe a hybrid of the two would be a good place to try.
All that said, Im not a fan of the vocals on insecure or Dancing With the Devil because, in my opinion, youve largely, if not completely, masked your really excellent clean vocal delivery, with too much gimmicky processing, autotune, vocoder, or whatever. Its like you arent secure enough in the quality of your delivering just a clean vocal, like you did with Electric, so you think you need to tart it up so the track sounds more distinctive. I think thats a real mistake and if I was producing you, Id definitely try to convince you to drop all that stuff and just deliver vocals that really showcase your great voice. Clean, with the focus on communicating meaning and emotion. Thats not to suggest that you shouldnt use autotune sparingly, or reverb, double or triple tracking, compression, delays, tube-based saturation, etc. Just tastefully, and to make your vocals really shine in the tracks.
Thats my attempt at constructive comments. I realize that my reaction to your tracks might be out of touch with some of the more progressive music thats being produced now, but I can hear in your vocals and in your compositions, the potential for some really special music. I think you need to focus your tracks on your two great strengths - your sense of melody and your vocal ability. Dont let anything get in the way, or detract from those. If its not working in service to those, dont include them in the track.
And, if you ever decide to post an acapella here on Looperman please let me know via a DM. Id love to try my hand at doing a backing track for one of your vocals.
Regards from snowy (and soon to be very cold) Ottawa
Holy... At first it Sounds very 303 like but when the Vocals come in its pure Spark and Joy. I would put an more Harsh DeEsser on the Voice and watch the Phasing but other than that this Track is Amazing. If you need an Visualizer for that Track hmu and please send it to me when its done i will also share it for you everywhere. Absolute Banger!
There is a pop on my left ear around 4 seconds which could be fixed if it is not intentional. Also, could you maybe mention a few reference tracks on the style you are going for?
I do say that this beat 'tis to be busting. this shall be the spookiest of songs I've orienteered on this website application. this is the pinnacle of scary trap music. A job well done I suppose.
Commented on Electric by Jhet
Hello jet!
I was inspired by your song and recorded the second verse. I think this is what you need)
I emailed you, but you didn't get an answer. If the collaboration is still relevant, please contact me and I will send you the song that we have turned out :)
Commented on Insecure by Jhet
its very good. what do you think of mine?
https://youtu.be/uGZaSWLPZ-o
Commented on Electric by Jhet
Amazing track. I agree with Eric on the autotune, which is one of my pet peeves, but you know what, this track is so rock solid I don't even mind. Great job!
Commented on Insecure by Jhet
THIS IS SUPER NICE IS THIS IS YOU I WOULD LIKE TO GET ON A REMIX IF THATS OK PLEASE I HAVE A GOOD IDEAL
Commented on Electric by Jhet
Hi, Jhet!
Saw your post in the forum and decided to check out your stuff. You are clearly a very good vocalist and definitely know how to compose a catchy, contemporary sounding melody. There is no question in my mind that this track is the best one you have posted here to Looperman. Vocal is clean, backing instrumental track works well. Definitely has a Weeknd feel and sound to it. Your vocal on your most recent track, Insecure has a Sam Smith flavour. Those are two great artists, so thats high praise in my opinion. For your own unique sound, I guess maybe a hybrid of the two would be a good place to try.
All that said, Im not a fan of the vocals on insecure or Dancing With the Devil because, in my opinion, youve largely, if not completely, masked your really excellent clean vocal delivery, with too much gimmicky processing, autotune, vocoder, or whatever. Its like you arent secure enough in the quality of your delivering just a clean vocal, like you did with Electric, so you think you need to tart it up so the track sounds more distinctive. I think thats a real mistake and if I was producing you, Id definitely try to convince you to drop all that stuff and just deliver vocals that really showcase your great voice. Clean, with the focus on communicating meaning and emotion. Thats not to suggest that you shouldnt use autotune sparingly, or reverb, double or triple tracking, compression, delays, tube-based saturation, etc. Just tastefully, and to make your vocals really shine in the tracks.
Thats my attempt at constructive comments. I realize that my reaction to your tracks might be out of touch with some of the more progressive music thats being produced now, but I can hear in your vocals and in your compositions, the potential for some really special music. I think you need to focus your tracks on your two great strengths - your sense of melody and your vocal ability. Dont let anything get in the way, or detract from those. If its not working in service to those, dont include them in the track.
And, if you ever decide to post an acapella here on Looperman please let me know via a DM. Id love to try my hand at doing a backing track for one of your vocals.
Regards from snowy (and soon to be very cold) Ottawa
Eric
Commented on Insecure by Jhet
really nice
Commented on Electric by Jhet
Hey, great track. Enjoyed it! Where did you get the vocals from?
Commented on Electric by Jhet
if you give the vocal for remix or flip that will be appreciated :)
Commented on Electric by Jhet
HMU BRO! @michaelmayomusic
Commented on Electric by Jhet
hey!! i recorded it and it sounds awesome i think, send me your email if u want so i can send u the song xx
Commented on Electric by Jhet
Damn good vocals!
Commented on Electric by Jhet
Really dig your stuff. I make pop too, and would love to work with you. Do you have an instagram (or any other way to quickly reach yo)?
Commented on Electric by Jhet
I'm totally recording a verse
Commented on Electric by Jhet
i enjoyed that. well done
Commented on Electric by Jhet
oh dont worry i got it its 106
Commented on Electric by Jhet
whats the bpm im going to have a shot at getting on the track?
Commented on Electric by Jhet
Your vocals go really well with this, added with a nice beat edm style. Good luck with it. Interesting.
Commented on Dancing With The Devil by Jhet
Love the vocals!
Commented on Dancing With The Devil by Jhet
Holy...
At first it Sounds very 303 like but when the Vocals come in its pure Spark and Joy.
I would put an more Harsh DeEsser on the Voice and watch the Phasing but other than that this Track is Amazing.
If you need an Visualizer for that Track hmu and please send it to me when its done i will also share it for you everywhere.
Absolute Banger!
Commented on Dancing With The Devil by Jhet
Hello Jhet! I would love to be a guest on your single. Would there be any way we could get in touch with each other to discuss?
Commented on Dancing With The Devil by Jhet
not bad)))
Commented on Dancing With The Devil by Jhet
There is a pop on my left ear around 4 seconds which could be fixed if it is not intentional. Also, could you maybe mention a few reference tracks on the style you are going for?
Commented on Dancing With The Devil by Jhet
Like it!
Nice flow with a soft stomping 4/4 Kick. Like youre on the way to a have nice party in a sunny afternoon, Friday!
good job, go for it!
Commented on Run Instrumental by Jhet
Hey, I think I sent it to you but if not here's the link. Came up with it and recorded it all in about an hour but I really enjoyed it.
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/225972
Commented on Run Instrumental by Jhet
I do say that this beat 'tis to be busting.
this shall be the spookiest of songs I've orienteered on this website application.
this is the pinnacle of scary trap music.
A job well done I suppose.