Hell's yes dude, lovin' the vibe of this joint dude. Dreamy....the perfect stony, hazy vibe for your rhyme. Tights as hell....we're on some kindred s#@*, duder, me thinks. F*%$ dude, this is NICE. We should do some collaborating in the near future, sir.
Yeah man,...you should let me get this acapella. I have a cliche' weed song myself. I felt that is was pretty common myself to do a weed song. But I do have one ready to go. Let me know whats up.
Lyrics are amazing.. on your vocs, you have the delay/verb ... but I wanted it down.. just bein' honest. mixing at specific words? meh? lose some? but keep some! Your effect felt soo forward that it messed with the vocs.. just a little..
"whistle while you wilt, ... " ahh soo tight. high's down, volume down, but mids up, and vinyl distortion, "lightly" and then increase the volume for dynamics?
It might sound almost acoustic, but I thought about that listening. lol
alright man keep 'em coming, this is the kinda music I enjoy. Faved no matter, I love this track!
the highs are HIGH, but i mean freq's, and your compression is always wacky, but I like the compression.... let it turn red? for example? that one had this EPIC compression, and it really added to the dreamy dying thing... on this
you have the compression again..... I do like that.
but I do want to point it out? just in case you hadn't noticed it?
you are the dope underground raper. not one of or just a
but the dopest underground raper i have EVER heard.
and sh*t man, it isn't even like rapping.. it's like telling me a story.
I think a lotta rappers just boast and bully.. you f**king tell a story! :)
i don't smoke-- much.. but I am gonna smoke to this right now.
Weed is just a plant. I don't know how it relates to "jah". No one can explain Rastafarian-ism to me-- and i hang with allotta pot heads.
HIP HOP, HIP HOP....Real shit man, great work, love the drums, did you produce this track yourself, cuz i see you use garageband, i didnt know you can chop samples like that in garage band...anyways tight track
Finally a real HIP Hop track that i managed to listen to for more than 20 sec. Your vocals rocked, u have a the sound of a performer thats for sure. Look forward for more stuff. later... I downloaded this to let my peeps check it.
Thanks dude. I'm starting to get comfortable finally on what direction I wanna go. I've been experimenting for a year or so now and was kind of lost on what the hell I was musically. I may of found my niche finally. Dunno tho, we'll see. I'll hit u up with the Fixtape when it's done tho.
yo...this is sick. beat is nasty and the flow is tight. love me some blues music but cant ever get it to fit any of my tracks, this dude hit it on the nose. i can make that track as long as you want it to be by the way but i'll allow downloads on the one thats up at the moment. I just wana hear some one spittin on my shit, so just let me get a listen when you throw something together. 1
Yeah. this is a nice track. I like this it got that old backwood sound to it. this sounds like it would be performed in one of those wooden joints. You know the ones' right by the water and it's off the ground on cylinder blocks. Real funky nice job.
Thanks dude, By the way I just upped the REMASTERED version done by alividlife, the man hooked it up with his mixing skills which i sorely lack. Check it out again for a more refined track.
Deep and muddy, kinda drunk and lost, but your lyrics have such displacement but HOOKS!!!! (my sister says you sound like a slowed down lupe fiasco and jurrasic 5, of course, IN ALL THE GOOD WAYS)
never heard soo many hooks in a rap song in my life..
Dude, I am gonna try and tell you exactly how i feel about your tracks k??? No Great tracks for me and you.
DUDE, YOUR vocs need compression... More in the mix. Like at 600k drop that bar... make them punchy. they should STICK like glue. Like Humidity..
Your vocs should sound like gum on your balls...
lol did you ever do that one?
ok... so what you do... is the next time you are talking to a chick, and you are wearing shorts, you say "damnit I sat in gum..." and they are like... what?? then you roll up your shorts or reach, (but this takes composure, and needs to look REAL) and then you grab your nuts. and then pull on them..
and be like gahh I can't get it out..
HOPEFULLY... Maybe, the girl tries to help you, and YOU LAUGH and YOU POINT!!!!!!
LOL that reminds me of the other night. I was at this party and these young ass girls kept coming up to me and kickin' the shit... I'm talking these girls were like... had to be 17, looked real young, and acted real young, i'm 5 years older you know? Even though in FL i think its all legal from 16-24 but i don't wanna chance anything haha, but they kept trying to act cool by saying how much they drank, smoked etc. etc. and i was like, "word? right on right on, well i'll let ya'll in on a lil secret i've learned over the years"... so they lean in and i tell them that the little bit of beer that's left in bottles, you know, the end of the beer that most people don't finish and just leave floating at the bottom (i dont do this, i heart beer, but everyone else does), but anyway, i point around the room at all the beer bottles around and most had that little bit of beer left at the bottom, which is actually more than likely backwash hahahaha, but i tell them that gets you more f'd up than the rest of the beer, so they get all excited and start running around the room DRINKING EVERYONES BACKWASH, i'm in the corner dying laughing, everyone was asking what was so funny and thought i was going into one of my crazy spells again and shrugged it off... hey, i'm doing the girls a favor, they wanna step up to the show you gotta teach em some lessons, they'll be better for it, hell that was fatherly advice in my book... someone will tell them at some time haha
ahhhhh, jailbait.
but uhhh... yeah, shot you back that email, can't wait to hear what you did with the track! and again, any pointers will go a lone way, i'm a fast learner.
Fantastic track real relaxing and the words are helpfull to get courage after a day of shit! And the day of shit are always backdoor so it's good thing to have ever music like this at home! After the philosophy i also can tell that the voices are mixed very well nice job! cheers!
yeah actually the voice is just two tracks, one is the main take without a double/backup vocal track with it to make it sound more full, i heard it and decided it didn't need it, and the other one just makes certain parts of each sentence stand out. pretty simple really. thanks for the comments, i'm really behind my lyrics here, straight from the soul, i wish i was as positive as i convey to people but the truth comes out in my personal songs. alienation galore. thanks for the review.
Hey Clay...this is tight,with some real presence..you've got the knack..I could tell that after about three seconds.....I've always been fascinated by the power and vision that speech can impart...breathing humanity literally into music...that's what you can do..I'll be checking all your work...great stuff!...cheers planet :)
thanks, same here as well, i've heard i think two of your tracks so far, and you definitely have control of what you want to convey and do, very skilled it seems as well, can't wait to dive in even deeper!
you have constructed a very good lyrical arrangement. flow is laid back, fits the beat, both verses relate back to the chorus. story is easy to picture which to me means it crosses over that line from music and lyrics to a song. good job.
hey, i read your comment which you've written in the "grotesk mc competition" and I wondered what kind of shit you've started. now i've listened to your track and it remembered me of the rap group "the streets" from uk, that's a style I like because it isn't typical for rap.
greetz isaak
EDIT: XD I just want to say that I'm surprised that you wrote a text which fits so exactly to the beat, cause I tried writing some texts again and again to it and not one fits and that I mean with shit/stuff or whatever you started/ you come up with!... that's fresh stuff ;)
appreciate it, what do you mean tho but what kind of shit i've started? like what songs? or beats? lost me with that one lol. thanks for the review and the compliment, i always try to switch it up and make creative different music.
Commented on Whistle While You Wilt by GotCheeve
Hell's yes dude, lovin' the vibe of this joint dude. Dreamy....the perfect stony, hazy vibe for your rhyme. Tights as hell....we're on some kindred s#@*, duder, me thinks. F*%$ dude, this is NICE. We should do some collaborating in the near future, sir.
Commented on Whistle While You Wilt by GotCheeve
Yeah man,...you should let me get this acapella. I have a cliche' weed song myself. I felt that is was pretty common myself to do a weed song. But I do have one ready to go. Let me know whats up.
Commented on Whistle While You Wilt by GotCheeve
Hmn.
Lyrics are amazing.. on your vocs, you have the delay/verb ... but
I wanted it down.. just bein' honest. mixing at specific words?
meh?
lose some?
but keep some! Your effect felt soo forward that it messed with the vocs..
just a little..
"whistle while you wilt, ... "
ahh
soo tight.
high's down, volume down, but mids up, and vinyl distortion, "lightly" and then increase the volume for dynamics?
It might sound almost acoustic, but I thought about that listening. lol
alright man
keep 'em coming, this is the kinda music I enjoy.
Faved no matter, I love this track!
Good Job scavengerdink too!
Commented on Whistle While You Wilt by GotCheeve
i gotta be honest with ya man
the highs are HIGH, but i mean freq's, and your compression is always wacky, but I like the compression....
let it turn red?
for example?
that one had this EPIC compression, and it really added to the dreamy dying thing...
on this
you have the compression again..... I do like that.
but
I do want to point it out? just in case you hadn't noticed it?
you are the dope underground raper.
not one of
or
just a
but the dopest underground raper i have EVER heard.
and sh*t man, it isn't even like rapping.. it's like telling me a story.
I think a lotta rappers just boast and bully.. you f**king tell a story!
:)
i don't smoke-- much.. but I am gonna smoke to this right now.
Weed is just a plant.
I don't know how it relates to "jah". No one can explain Rastafarian-ism to me-- and i hang with allotta pot heads.
Amazing
I am going to review again
Commented on Cosmic Dust by GotCheeve
HIP HOP, HIP HOP....Real shit man, great work, love the drums, did you produce this track yourself, cuz i see you use garageband, i didnt know you can chop samples like that in garage band...anyways tight track
Commented on Muddy Waters by GotCheeve
Damnn this song is real hot. The beat and lyrics are firee. really nice job
Commented on Cosmic Dust by GotCheeve
Finally a real HIP Hop track that i managed to listen to for more than 20 sec. Your vocals rocked, u have a the sound of a performer thats for sure. Look forward for more stuff. later...
I downloaded this to let my peeps check it.
Commented on Muddy Waters by GotCheeve
this track blew my mind...i'm honest i'm high ;) this is my sound, man, straight on my ipod!can't say any more i'm to impressed...thanx 4 sharing!
Commented on Muddy Waters by GotCheeve
yo...this is sick. beat is nasty and the flow is tight. love me some blues music but cant ever get it to fit any of my tracks, this dude hit it on the nose. i can make that track as long as you want it to be by the way but i'll allow downloads on the one thats up at the moment. I just wana hear some one spittin on my shit, so just let me get a listen when you throw something together. 1
Commented on Muddy Waters by GotCheeve
Sick shit player.
Commented on Muddy Waters by GotCheeve
chilled out. i like this its got a good vibe. whos doing the chorus i love it
Commented on Muddy Waters by GotCheeve
great job man, really creative. I like it, and u have a great voice for these lyrics.
Commented on Muddy Waters by GotCheeve
Yeah. this is a nice track. I like this it got that old backwood sound to it. this sounds like it would be performed in one of those wooden joints. You know the ones' right by the water and it's off the ground on cylinder blocks. Real funky nice job.
Commented on Muddy Waters by GotCheeve
I need song installment warnings.
Deep and muddy, kinda drunk and lost, but your lyrics have such displacement but HOOKS!!!!
(my sister says you sound like a slowed down lupe fiasco and jurrasic 5, of course, IN ALL THE GOOD WAYS)
never heard soo many hooks in a rap song in my life..
Dude, I am gonna try and tell you exactly how i feel about your tracks k???
No Great tracks for me and you.
DUDE, YOUR vocs need compression... More in the mix. Like at 600k drop that bar... make them punchy. they should STICK like glue.
Like Humidity..
Your vocs should sound like gum on your balls...
lol did you ever do that one?
ok... so what you do... is the next time you are talking to a chick, and you are wearing shorts, you say "damnit I sat in gum..."
and they are like... what??
then you roll up your shorts or reach, (but this takes composure, and needs to look REAL) and then you grab your nuts.
and then pull on them..
and be like gahh I can't get it out..
HOPEFULLY... Maybe, the girl tries to help you, and YOU LAUGH
and YOU POINT!!!!!!
hahahah...
I should be banned.
GREAT SONG!!!
FAVED!
DOWNLOADED!
your fan,
abe
Commented on Muddy Waters by GotCheeve
Fantastic track real relaxing and the words are helpfull to get courage after a day of shit!
And the day of shit are always backdoor so it's good thing to have ever music like this at home!
After the philosophy i also can tell that the voices are mixed very well nice job!
cheers!
Commented on Muddy Waters by GotCheeve
Hey Clay...this is tight,with some real presence..you've got the knack..I could tell that after about three seconds.....I've always been fascinated by the power and vision that speech can impart...breathing humanity literally into music...that's what you can do..I'll be checking all your work...great stuff!...cheers planet :)
Commented on Sing My Song by GotCheeve
you have constructed a very good lyrical arrangement. flow is laid back, fits the beat, both verses relate back to the chorus. story is easy to picture which to me means it crosses over that line from music and lyrics to a song. good job.
B.O.L.O.
Commented on Sing My Song by GotCheeve
MAN I LIKE THAT BEAT AND VOCALS
Commented on Sing My Song by GotCheeve
hey,
i read your comment which you've written in the "grotesk mc competition" and I wondered what kind of shit you've started.
now i've listened to your track and it remembered me of the rap group "the streets" from uk, that's a style I like because it isn't typical for rap.
greetz isaak
EDIT: XD
I just want to say that I'm surprised that you wrote a text which fits so exactly to the beat, cause I tried writing some texts again and again to it and not one fits and that I mean with shit/stuff or whatever you started/ you come up with!...
that's fresh stuff ;)