LXjay

Cool man, I got into it no problem, feels good.
It needs some kind of jungle beat on there.

This was interesting for sure! It would not suggest house to me if you had not indicated this... but you are the artist, ha ha. I liked some of the synth work, it was nice and bright... good morning music. Could have a lot of potential to be "deepened..." not to say you should make it deep house, heh. Nice one!

If you don't mind me saying so, I found the intro overly long and the piece really needs some action in it. I liked the little arpeggiated high sounds at the very end. I would have layered them throughout the track. Have you seen Deadmau5's advert video about amateur music making? He makes one simple point. I like the bass line but again it is a little repetitive. All in all it's a nice piece but I think it really does need more...

Very nice minimalistic sound. Love the groovy bassline and buildup to the melody. Maybe a nice hook and your finished. Good job!

nice,a little bit of bright playing sounds. that is what i like too

I found it quite relaxing to listen too and could be mixed in a myriad of ways.
Cru

that 124 bpm prog house music

base trs intressante pour travailler dessus notamment une bonne rythmique, qqes vocals, qqes nappes de synths en plus, etc... il y a pas mal d'opportunits avec cette base ;)
j'aime beaucoup l'emploi du delay sur le synth

amicalement

bleep

Great, what kind of collab are you looking for?

very good vocal performance ,and interesting .
cool trap work LXjay .

I love the orchestrated anarchy of this. It kept me bouncin throughout. I don't how you rein in all those crazy sounds, but you do and set them bangin obediently in rhythmic harmony to a bad-ass beat. Great job.

Your writing and performance is powerful. The mix is professional. Nice work.

Good job bro. Really like the retaliation vibe from this.

Yup! That's coo work dude. Diggin it on the real, those synths are great. I enjoyed the mash. Good high right here. Keep doin it, thanks for sharing. Peace.

cool trap song .

Fun track you made. Did you use analog synths? Sounds like it and I like that. Not sure if it fits in the trap genre but it all has a nice flow to it.

def got the starts of something here. Ill play with some vocals if i get time today and maybe see if my partner wants in. either way keep making art and music my friend we are in a desperate shortage in the world right now. Cheers

For what you have here, it's pretty good. I would suggest layering your percussion. For as large as the bass and kick is, the snare has no punch or ring, and gets burried in the mix.

The kick is heavy, but it too is lacking punch. It has a great low end, but no upfront pop that gives it it's full power.

If you had a couple different drum sets and layered and processed them with some EQ'ing, it would really bring more life to this.

Again, what you have is good, but with some expirimentation, layering, and mixing, you could make it even better.

Good luck to you, and keep up the good work.

Skol.
V.

Hello,
I think you've done a wonderful job here.
Well done.