itscamerontaylor

Not bad. I'd say some parts are off beat by a little but not bad!

Dope track fam, only one problem. I cant really hear your vocals im offering 5 dollar mixing and mastering and would love to help you out! This will make a major change in your music and have your fans listen to the whole track let me know if you want the service.

too soon.... hahah nah im kidding its pretty good bro and now you can dedicate it if your a fan you know

good work , keep it up

Dope flow and bars! I like how you mentioned that a lot of rappers are whack and you can't understand what they're saying, it's so true! Sounds amazing for a freestyle!

Good job on the track bro.really can't critique a freestyle too much, but I will say that it sounds better then a lot of our Hip-Hop industry leaders.

Lol dude i like it, made me smile, love the Willie Wonka bit. I am probably not the best one to provide feedback on pure rap songs, but I think it has good potential, look forward to hear how you develop it further.