i noticed the volume level was a little low, may be you will change it at the final mixing? at the opposite, the drum kick crushes the other instruments.
Except these small aspects, the piece is particularly mesmerizing, highly-rated sound stabbing and soft create a kind of very pleasant hypnosis.
It promises a brilliant track at the final result! really good work!
This is the unmastered version. Usually I leave a ton of headroom during the mixing process so I have a lot more room to work with when mastering. So it does start out sounding quiet. And on that same note, that kick needs to be turned WAY down Haha Thanks for commenting
Definitely keep going with this one, Sheensheep! I think you are communicating the feeling/mood really well. I don't think you really need the "yeh" samples in it. I very much like the fact that you have a wide range of dynamics in the track. Makes it much more interesting to listen.
Thanks! Glad I'm achieving my goal so far. I've taken to adding the 'yeh' sample in my tracks as a tag, but honestly I think you're right that I don't need it.
someone said it in a comment! "i like how the track breaths" literally this is an amazing track, only thing on my end i feel like the male voice is on top on the track "sort of loud" everything else sounds very good and dynamic.
Thanks! I'm happy you enjoyed it. Dynamics were a big part of the track for sure. I made sure to give it a ton of range. The instrumentals on Fuentes's (the rapper's) parts are quiet so I can see how that would accentuate what you pointed out. Thanks for leaving your thoughts. Really appreciate it.
1:16 the effect that you used on the complete track just for 1 sec - i think you shouldn't do it on the vocals. It really sounds like a mistake in my ears. But that's just me and noting more. But all the rest fits for me. Good work, I like what you done with the vocals and the music gives a nice dreamy feeling with that cool groove.
Glad you liked it overall. I added that effect to break the flow a bit and give it a janky feel. It wasn't very noticeable when it wasn't affecting the vocals so I added it. Though looking back on it, I kind of agree with you. I wanted the track to feel janky but still somehow natural, and this may have pushed it a bit too far the other direction.
Thanks. I really liked the synths too. I spent quite a bit of time on them instead of using presets which I did in the hopes to make it sound more unique.
Damn this track is great. The female vocals are so good and well mixed in the track. The male vocals are good as well and together with all the variations you made in the beat this song is on my playlist for the next couple of days.
When I upload a track onto Looperman, I do it for feedback. I'll keep improving the track based on the comments I receive until I feel it's finally finished. At this point it's not "released".
When the track is finally done, I'll upload it to my YouTube and SoundCloud page, complete with artwork and all that stuff. That's when it's actually released. No more changes will be made to the track after that point.
Hope I managed to clear things up, though it's a little late Haha
Hi, Yeah...like this a lot:) I think you managed to achieve the 'weird and unique' that you were going for. It was more 'unique' than weird though. I found it an enjoyable and interesting musical journey. Enchanting, evocative, Imaginative, are a few words that come to mind..... Great arrangement. Love the vocals.......Excellent work:)
Thanks, we all worked really hard on it. I actually planned on using that break to add a sample from the show "Afro Samurai" that fit the theme, but I instead decided to stay within copyright law Haha I kept the silence since I thought it'd help the track breathe, which I feel is important for a song like this.
Commented on Sheen The Sheep - Grow -Re-Mixed by sheensheep
got this for my summer playlist now bro good work
Commented on Sheen The Sheep - Grow -Re-Mixed by sheensheep
Very good mix, great sound, professional. I would like to hear the piano more in the mix but that just my personal taste.
Commented on Sheen The Sheep - Grow -Re-Mixed by sheensheep
Very clean all around! Excellent mixing a great vibe!
Commented on Sheen The Sheep - Grow -Re-Mixed by sheensheep
lets gooooooo sheep! I wanna see this track on every platform available hahaha I'm definitely jamming this one around.
much love brother!
Commented on Sheen The Sheep - Grow -Re-Mixed by sheensheep
Very clean, professional sounding track. Great work
Commented on Sheen The Sheep - Grow -Re-Mixed by sheensheep
Sounds good. Seems like you fixed the issues you had. Congrats, great track.
Commented on Sheen The Sheep - Grow -Re-Mixed by sheensheep
I like it very much, great track all around.
Commented on You Make Me Sick by sheensheep
I love your music brother. Keep creating. What you are doing is important.
Commented on Waking World final version by sheensheep
Hey there!
unexpected, surprising, unusual, really interesting how you melted genres. Really modern approach, i was totally absorbed during the hearing!
Congrats for the great work
Bleep
Commented on Waking World final version by sheensheep
Very very interesting.
Held my attention easily.
Sounds very well put together.
TV stuff this.
Commented on Waking World final version by sheensheep
Very futuristic, I love it. Keep it up!!!
Commented on You Make Me Sick by sheensheep
Hello Sheen,
Mate, this is great I love it.
I must say I do agree with EricMilligan on this one.
Great Job.
Fav's
Jamid
Commented on You Make Me Sick by sheensheep
nice trip, really nice trip!
i noticed the volume level was a little low, may be you will change it at the final mixing? at the opposite, the drum kick crushes the other instruments.
Except these small aspects, the piece is particularly mesmerizing, highly-rated sound stabbing and soft create a kind of very pleasant hypnosis.
It promises a brilliant track at the final result! really good work!
Bleep
Commented on You Make Me Sick by sheensheep
Definitely keep going with this one, Sheensheep! I think you are communicating the feeling/mood really well. I don't think you really need the "yeh" samples in it. I very much like the fact that you have a wide range of dynamics in the track. Makes it much more interesting to listen.
Commented on Tranquility Ft Fuentes and Luna Harley by sheensheep
someone said it in a comment! "i like how the track breaths" literally this is an amazing track, only thing on my end i feel like the male voice is on top on the track "sort of loud" everything else sounds very good and dynamic.
Commented on Tranquility Ft Fuentes and Luna Harley by sheensheep
1:16 the effect that you used on the complete track just for 1 sec - i think you shouldn't do it on the vocals. It really sounds like a mistake in my ears. But that's just me and noting more. But all the rest fits for me.
Good work, I like what you done with the vocals and the music gives a nice dreamy feeling with that cool groove.
stay tuned
joe
Commented on Tranquility Ft Fuentes and Luna Harley by sheensheep
Sehr interesant!
Commented on Tranquility Ft Fuentes and Luna Harley by sheensheep
Really nice track, i like the synth sounds used... the vocals go very well together !
Commented on Tranquility Ft Fuentes and Luna Harley by sheensheep
Damn this track is great. The female vocals are so good and well mixed in the track. The male vocals are good as well and together with all the variations you made in the beat this song is on my playlist for the next couple of days.
Commented on The Moments That Take Your Breath Away Ft Eshar by sheensheep
very nice!!
Commented on Tranquility Ft Fuentes and Luna Harley by sheensheep
People keep talking about not released yet or just released and so on.
What do you mean?
Do you mean what I call uploaded?
Commented on Tranquility Ft Fuentes and Luna Harley by sheensheep
I like how this track breaths. Overall it sounds pretty crisp and clear with some pretty good mixing. This is also a great collaboration!
Commented on Tranquility Ft Fuentes and Luna Harley by sheensheep
Hi, Yeah...like this a lot:) I think you managed to achieve the 'weird and unique' that you were going for. It was more 'unique' than weird though. I found it an enjoyable and interesting musical journey. Enchanting, evocative, Imaginative, are a few words that come to mind.....
Great arrangement. Love the vocals.......Excellent work:)
Commented on Tranquility Ft Fuentes and Luna Harley by sheensheep
deep ambiance with nice vocals: singer and flow.
about your break @ 1:27: brilliant idea this silence during 3 seconds
solid work
congrates
bleep
Commented on Tranquility Ft Fuentes and Luna Harley by sheensheep
Really dig your track mate
both Music and vox
I got nothing to add to what i just said
Keep on good job !