Very inspirational lyrics. Both of the artists delivered extremely well. I saw your forum about for a hook, and a third verse. After you get the hook from the person I can possibly deliver you a third verse. Just let me know if that's alright with you. Check out some of my tracks on here to see where I'm at.
Thanks for the nice words, listened to a couple of your tracks and think you could fit on there for sure. Yea someone is just starting to work on a hook so I will repost it afterwards or just send it to you.
Hey man im feeling this, those lyrics are real. i wish i could sing or rap but just because for the inspiration i got from it i uploaded something real quick: https://soundcloud.com/sonnychapelle/i-dont-test
Your vocal and studio qualities are way better and you are probably looking for a rapper. In any case, you can message me about the soundcloud upload and what not, i'l remove it it if you want or change the name.
Overall good production , also the 2nd voice sounds good dont type that out unless you need to.
Hey thanks for trying it out, I don't think it fit very well with the overall feel of the track though. You don't have to worry about taking it down if you like it :D Again thanks for giving it a shot, noone else has done a damn thing lol.
onlyhits on Mon 3rd Oct 2016 -
7 years ago
Commented on I dont by SJW
This is golden man! Lyrics are tight, flow is on point, and beat is perfect. Can't wait for a great hook and third verse!
OmarMuk on Thu 1st Oct 2015 -
8 years ago
Commented on I walk by SJW
Man Im telling you your talent is pure. The hook is cleverly worded and rapped/sung. Its not just your delivery and flow thats amazing your lyrics are deep as well. You need more exposure for real.
SJW! Bro I mean Im speechless... This is pure talent. Man. Wheres your other stuff I know you have more than just this and "walk" which is fire as well by the way. You remind me of another Canadian rapper who goes by Emsee (Mathew Cathcart). He got a little big through Canadas Got Talent.
Except your rapping is faster but your flow is more rhythmetic and the whole truth is that I think your better. Your flow reminds me of Eminem. Its clear smooth and delivers emotion. Man I need to listen to more of your stuff.
Now you got me speechless lol! I don't have much out there, couple little things on soundcloud (https://soundcloud.com/idontremember-1), I'm just getting into recording more the last year or so :) Thanks for checking the tracks out!
i'll toy around with a bridge or a chorus type piece for the open part. i would suggest you do the same and we'll see what sticks. it should turn out to be a monster track.
i hope you enjoy it. this is a rough mix for you to vibe off of. i'll take it down after you hear it and if you like it we can move forward. i personally think its a great match up. either way, thanks for creating this and giving me endless inspiration.
Fucking yesss, liked it alot man. Now I actually have pressure to make this sound good haha. I'm going to have to re record some if not all of it as it peaks out sometimes and parts were recorded on different days and don't sound as good as they could. Will have to figure out what to do with that empty space inbetween as well, but I like where it's heading man, really liked your verse, really wasn't expecting anyone to get on this at all, let alone with that kind of quality writing. Im gonna go get to work !
Commented on I dont by SJW
Oh, I probably should have clarified I'm going for hook and third verse.
Commented on I dont by SJW
Hey who's the second artist? It's probably in my best interest to know :P
Commented on I dont by SJW
Very inspirational lyrics. Both of the artists delivered extremely well. I saw your forum about for a hook, and a third verse. After you get the hook from the person I can possibly deliver you a third verse. Just let me know if that's alright with you. Check out some of my tracks on here to see where I'm at.
- Billion
Commented on I dont by SJW
Hey man im feeling this, those lyrics are real.
i wish i could sing or rap but just because for the inspiration i got from it i uploaded something real quick: https://soundcloud.com/sonnychapelle/i-dont-test
Your vocal and studio qualities are way better and you are probably looking for a rapper. In any case, you can message me about the soundcloud upload and what not, i'l remove it it if you want or change the name.
Overall good production , also the 2nd voice sounds good dont type that out unless you need to.
Commented on I dont by SJW
This is golden man! Lyrics are tight, flow is on point, and beat is perfect. Can't wait for a great hook and third verse!
Commented on I dont by SJW
You should probably also put the lyrics to your second verse in the Song Lyrics tab.
Commented on I dont by SJW
digging it bro
Commented on I dont by SJW
These lyrics are dope man
Commented on Open collab- by SJW
nice track, like it!
Commented on Open collab- by SJW
Nice track bro.
Commented on I dont by SJW
Throw the acapella I uploaded yesterday on there. I think it will synch well.
Commented on Open collab- by SJW
c'est tres bon track.
Merci
Commented on I dont by SJW
Whats up man, I really liked our last collab.. I have a homie working on a chorus but here's a verse. https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/176719
Commented on I dont by SJW
Yo, When I try to download the track it doesn't work. Can you email it to me or something? Maybe that'll work.
Commented on I dont by SJW
I'd be down to jump in on this. Let me know if you're still looking
Commented on I dont by SJW
Man I like this, Im down for a collab, i could add some vocals ? here's one of my popular tracks. https://soundcloud.com/emperor-nightshade/looking-good-prod-vrodmusicals
Commented on I walk by SJW
Oh, my god. This is amazing!
Commented on I walk by SJW
Man Im telling you your talent is pure. The hook is cleverly worded and rapped/sung. Its not just your delivery and flow thats amazing your lyrics are deep as well. You need more exposure for real.
Commented on Open collab- by SJW
SJW!
Bro I mean Im speechless...
This is pure talent. Man. Wheres your other stuff I know you have more than just this and "walk" which is fire as well by the way.
You remind me of another Canadian rapper who goes by Emsee (Mathew Cathcart). He got a little big through Canadas Got Talent.
Except your rapping is faster but your flow is more rhythmetic and the whole truth is that I think your better. Your flow reminds me of Eminem. Its clear smooth and delivers emotion. Man I need to listen to more of your stuff.
Im a fan. Keep bringing the fire!
Commented on Open collab- by SJW
Did U hear the verse on "Walk" ? anyway, I like your verses and I cant wait to write to this one! https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/162344
Commented on Open collab- by SJW
id like to help with this song i think i can put a nice verse on it or even help with a hook. let me know
Commented on Open collab- by SJW
i'll toy around with a bridge or a chorus type piece for the open part. i would suggest you do the same and we'll see what sticks. it should turn out to be a monster track.
Commented on Open collab- by SJW
i hope you enjoy it. this is a rough mix for you to vibe off of. i'll take it down after you hear it and if you like it we can move forward. i personally think its a great match up. either way, thanks for creating this and giving me endless inspiration.
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/169556
Commented on Open collab- by SJW
I'm going to bless this track. i'll put up a rough draft shortly. this has truly inspired me.
Commented on I walk by SJW
I've listened to the original, wherever that beat is from (I forgot the artist name) but I don't remember it sounding this good! Brilliant work.
- JAweGuy