At 0:00 to 0:56 i was a bit bored by the long intro. But after that when the lyrics started, it sounded interesting again. The beat on itself is solid. Which i do find important as well. Mixing has been done properly to. So yeah a job well done. Keep up the good work.
Rap not being my scene I was almost going to pass this over. But I'm glad I didn't. Great track. The rap is awesome, clear concise, lyrically intelligent, with a smooth flow. Backing track is snappy, sparse and just right. Interesting intro, and slick production. Super job.
I think it's awesome, great top end sparkle but didn't hurt my ears with spikes. Everything I have to say from here on is a matter of absolute taste I think it's great just the way it is if you like the sound, IMO though I would lose the reverb and make it in your face! At the very least you should eq out some of the high's in the verb trails. (Again unless you were going for that). Also, it's "glue" seems a little weird to me? Probably just my listening environment which is awful but I'd personally use something different on your bus for a better glue, again just IMO. Other than that very good clean sound that I like. (I've decided to not comment on tracks I don't like since that doesn't seem very constructive.)
Even though you say it's only taste, I appreciate hearing others' take on what can be done better for the next one. Honestly, I was slapping buttons left and right to get something that sounded semi-listenable (and I mean slapping in the most sophisticated form). I typically try to leave the highs untouched or slightly boosted for clarity as it's something I struggle with most times.
I will say your comment on the glue nature of the track spurred a weekend long study session into how to get better at it so thank you for pointing me in that direction.
Again, thanks for listening and commenting! I'm feeling a little honored to be on the like side of your preferences.
Sounding good i like it. Love that Sample in Portuguese from Brazil. As for the Rap You got a good voice and your flow is neat. The only thing i would say is that the track needs is some variation on the instrumental and a slight improvement on the mastering for overall clarity. Regards
Mate first off don't listen much to this genre so no constructive feedback, but really loving the sound of this one, mainly one loop, but you have managed to get it to work, without it becoming boring, which is a credit to you and the brilliant loop maker Danke...Very nice track mate...Fav...Peace n Respect...Mosaic...
@BEATZMODE and @donfons ...I want to put this on my mixtape I'm working on called VINDICATION...I want it to be the first track...n @donfons ...I want it as a collab with your verse...so let me know how we can go about this..n what legal issues need to be handled.. Preciate it
if you could keep that flow that is at 0:32 to 0:36 and just keep all the way on the main part and make like two main parts and a nice chorus that goes betiwn.
I've been brainstorming some ways to extend this to a fully featured track for another project I have coming up. I will definitely consider this approach!
Much appreciated Yung. Just left a comment of your track "life..."
You remind of this other cat on here Thatruth1 (His joint "black and ugly" features the stacking effect I was mentioning). Anyways, thanks for listening and commenting!
Commented on Fruit by donfons
AMAZINGGGG!!! work here, this whole track is delicious and well put together, the quality is so crisp and vocal/lyrics are on point!...Bravo!
Commented on Fruit by donfons
Nice.
Commented on Fruit by donfons
Congrats on doing everything yourself! Sounds good, love the message too. Peace.
Commented on Fruit by donfons
Nice track Donfons! I like the rap vocals and the lyrics.
Good Job!
Ronabo
Commented on Fruit by donfons
At 0:00 to 0:56 i was a bit bored by the long intro. But after that when the lyrics started, it sounded interesting again. The beat on itself is solid. Which i do find important as well. Mixing has been done properly to. So yeah a job well done. Keep up the good work.
Commented on Call Me Snippet by donfons
damn. such a vibe even from this snippet
great job imma definitely try and find your project.
cheers man good work
-CAP
Commented on FirstSpring by donfons
Rap not being my scene I was almost going to pass this over. But I'm glad I didn't. Great track. The rap is awesome, clear concise, lyrically intelligent, with a smooth flow. Backing track is snappy, sparse and just right. Interesting intro, and slick production. Super job.
Commented on Rap Monster -- danke Singing Monster by donfons
This one is really good mate. The production is solid. Good work!!
Commented on FirstSpring by donfons
I think it's awesome, great top end sparkle but didn't hurt my ears with spikes. Everything I have to say from here on is a matter of absolute taste I think it's great just the way it is if you like the sound, IMO though I would lose the reverb and make it in your face! At the very least you should eq out some of the high's in the verb trails. (Again unless you were going for that). Also, it's "glue" seems a little weird to me? Probably just my listening environment which is awful but I'd personally use something different on your bus for a better glue, again just IMO. Other than that very good clean sound that I like. (I've decided to not comment on tracks I don't like since that doesn't seem very constructive.)
Commented on FirstSpring by donfons
Sounding good i like it.
Love that Sample in Portuguese from Brazil.
As for the Rap You got a good voice and your flow is neat.
The only thing i would say is that the track needs is some variation on the instrumental and a slight improvement on the mastering for overall clarity.
Regards
Commented on Rap Monster -- danke Singing Monster by donfons
Hey Don
Mate first off don't listen much to this genre so no constructive feedback, but really loving the sound of this one, mainly one loop, but you have managed to get it to work, without it becoming boring, which is a credit to you and the brilliant loop maker Danke...Very nice track mate...Fav...Peace n Respect...Mosaic...
Commented on Ups and Downs by donfons
@BEATZMODE and @donfons ...I want to put this on my mixtape I'm working on called VINDICATION...I want it to be the first track...n @donfons ...I want it as a collab with your verse...so let me know how we can go about this..n what legal issues need to be handled.. Preciate it
Commented on Ups and Downs by donfons
Digging it!
Commented on Ups and Downs by donfons
you loss the flow some times.
Commented on Rap Monster -- danke Singing Monster by donfons
another dope beat could hear some tech n9ne on this awesome track
Commented on No Games - Colorboi X donfons by donfons
damn this is pretty sweet lovin the whole vibe
Commented on Ups and Downs by donfons
A catchy tune. Good lyrics :) Well done.
Commented on Ups and Downs by donfons
if you could keep that flow that is at 0:32 to 0:36 and just keep all the way on the main part and make like two main parts and a nice chorus that goes betiwn.
Commented on No Games - Colorboi X donfons by donfons
Now that's cool. Like what you did with it. Took it to a chill place but real moment.
Thanks for posting it here Donfons. Good job dig it.. Peace.
Commented on No Games - Colorboi X donfons by donfons
Dope bro! fell free to throw it on SoundCloud or whatever!!!
Commented on Ups and Downs by donfons
I like the delivery on this one..clarity and production z great. A+ for me.
Commented on Ups and Downs by donfons
1st time it sounds off to me is at the lebron line
those words just need some more spacing
maybe replace it with "gunna bitch slap lebron next" then the beat stops. * WHAP * beat starts again
solid vocals
Commented on Ups and Downs by donfons
Good joint...Love the flow.The delivery is on point.
Commented on Rap Monster -- danke Singing Monster by donfons
man this is hype head knoddn kinda beat!!damn im lovn this lol!!!killa sh#t fam
Commented on Rap Monster -- danke Singing Monster by donfons
I can see a sick rap being laid over this.
Very well done!