There's a beautiful feeling of a digital march going on here, I'm seeing visions of a dark production line making metallic dolls! You are definitely right to apologize for the track being too short though, this piece would have hit the 5 minute barrier easily, I would love to hear an extended version of this track. The rising and falling of the pads really bring the track to life and your synth lines are wonderful. The timing with the drums is perfect but it really does need to build up to a "pumping hook" pretty much where it drops out, maybe with some subdued electric guitars in the 3rd octave - loads of distortion and a heavy compressor would work wonders! All in all a brilliant effort, I'm going to go listen to your other tracks now!! Peace.
Thank you for your very nice comment on my track "Bulan Naik", it was such a long time ago but I've finally logged in after so long. I may work on some more later, so please check back soon. I'm glad you liked it!
Commented on Bulan Naik by xxxRAiDEN
There's a beautiful feeling of a digital march going on here, I'm seeing visions of a dark production line making metallic dolls! You are definitely right to apologize for the track being too short though, this piece would have hit the 5 minute barrier easily, I would love to hear an extended version of this track. The rising and falling of the pads really bring the track to life and your synth lines are wonderful. The timing with the drums is perfect but it really does need to build up to a "pumping hook" pretty much where it drops out, maybe with some subdued electric guitars in the 3rd octave - loads of distortion and a heavy compressor would work wonders! All in all a brilliant effort, I'm going to go listen to your other tracks now!! Peace.
Commented on Bulan Naik by xxxRAiDEN
well it sounds pro to me :)