Thank you very much Danke! , and do you mean where the music ends like I need to add more? If so I have been contiplating myself that myself if you mean something else please give me criticism ! Thanks in advance and thanks for listenening .
Really fantastic almost viking type warror feel to it. I think you have done an exceptional work here the vocals are in a different class faved best regards Robbie
Thanks for the feed back and I can totally understand what you mean about no chorus. Maybe I'll take a little longer to put this out and try to make more of a chorus in there.
Here are my 2 cents. Nice guitar riff. Nice concept. There are lots of gaps that need filling with either vocals or a melody instrument. Good luck with version 2.
I first heard this one today. And I must say the timing seems abit off throughout the song. But the part between 1:47 and 1:57 is insanely good. I would love to hear this with that sort of vocalstyle all the way! And to have the timing issue fixed :)
hey thanks for the feedback, much appreciated, and i can for sure see what you mean with it being a bit off, i guess i never noticed it until it was pointed out so thank you. I hope all is going well with your music Steinaa.
Man..The Power of the track is way too big for your voice, though you have a good one... These Guitars are... Bite your head off and pull your guts out by your neck... Your Voice don't say that, to me anyway... Good lyrics unless you change your vocal style, it's hard to make it believable...
I will be honest. The Music is really freakin good. The Vocals not so much. It sounds like there is potential there but they need to be refined and layered better in the mix. Just my 2 cents. Over all I dig it.
your singing kinda reminds me of Candlebox!!one of my faved bands that been around for about 20yrs!!im diggn this man!!ive done a few tracks lyricly wile having a cold an ish!!lol..nice job dude!!we should collab somtime!!pc
thank you very much for the kind words, i use to listen to candlebox back in the day and still will if they come on the radio so that's cool to be compared to. and yea collabing on something could be very fun, keep in touch.
Nice one, i love this track! The intro is especially excellent, im envy. :)
Respect for the vocal too! I'm not a vocalist, but i have just the opposite idea than theHumps. You don't have to sing louder - the more you do, there's a exponally higher chance for miss (less air :D). But if you cut a bit of the other track's volume, there is the same effect. And i can just join to the autotune-oppositional people, without effects, your voice sounds better - even if sometimes out of tune too.
Cool track...those instruments are awesome...is that you play? The vocs are your best so far, I know that we can't stop you from autotune :-) though I have to say this is your best attempt with this machine...:-) My only problem is that the vocs living another life in the verses...hope, you understand...
Commented on The Evil Inside by kriebel17
Sounds good. Not sure why you chose Rock as the genre though. More of a Pop feel for me.
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Commented on The Evil Inside by kriebel17
this is one of your best if not the best...clear vocals, cinematic music but the end is a bit unfinished I think...
congrats and handshake, Danke
Commented on The Monster Inside by kriebel17
Really fantastic almost viking type warror feel to it. I think you have done an exceptional work here the vocals are in a different class faved best regards Robbie
Commented on The Monster Inside by kriebel17
This is awesome, gives me a retro-techno kinda vibe. Great work!
Commented on The Monster Inside by kriebel17
Bravo. you authorize to apply it to my track. I'm writing trance music. of course, the name will be your name.
Commented on The Monster Inside by kriebel17
this is really cool...great vocs (don't calculate that f...ing autotune) and the music is stunning...I miss the huge chorus though...
like Stabbing Westward...
handshake, Danke
Commented on I Need To Hear You by kriebel17
Somehow reminds me to "all night doctors" by bush. Cool one mate !
Greetings !
Commented on The Pills They Kill by kriebel17
Great work bro! The mixing is A1. I'll be sure to check out your YouTube:)
Commented on The Pills They Kill by kriebel17
Hi man.
Loving your sound. It's somewhere between Kyuss and Soundgarden; a good place to be :)
TA
Commented on The Pills They Kill by kriebel17
Hello,
I think you've done a wonderful job here.
Well done.
Jamid
Commented on Drinking you away by kriebel17
Hey, I made a small remix of your song because I thought it was so cool. I would love for you to check it out!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a0I3BN9JAVk
Commented on Desperate For You by kriebel17
Here are my 2 cents. Nice guitar riff. Nice concept. There are lots of gaps that need filling with either vocals or a melody instrument. Good luck with version 2.
Commented on Tore my Heart by kriebel17
VERY NICE TRACK
Commented on The Fight For Love by kriebel17
I first heard this one today. And I must say the timing seems abit off throughout the song. But the part between 1:47 and 1:57 is insanely good. I would love to hear this with that sort of vocalstyle all the way! And to have the timing issue fixed :)
Commented on The darkest hour by kriebel17
Man..The Power of the track is way too big for your voice, though you
have a good one...
These Guitars are... Bite your head off and pull your guts out by your neck...
Your Voice don't say that, to me anyway...
Good lyrics unless you change your vocal style, it's hard to make it
believable...
Never the less nice project...
Peace...
Commented on The darkest hour by kriebel17
This is a great track, great vocals!
Actually found inspiration to attempt death metal vocal accompaniment to this xD
Commented on The darkest hour by kriebel17
This is a great track, great vocals!
Actually found inspiration to attempt death metal vocal accompaniment to this xD
Commented on run from him by kriebel17
I will be honest. The Music is really freakin good. The Vocals not so much. It sounds like there is potential there but they need to be refined and layered better in the mix. Just my 2 cents. Over all I dig it.
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Commented on A beautiful girl by kriebel17
More reminiscent of my style of writing, this works....nice job......lovely melody on the track!
Tune D
Commented on Paralyzed by kriebel17
if you ever need a singer lmk
Commented on So Sick by kriebel17
your singing kinda reminds me of Candlebox!!one of my faved bands that been around for about 20yrs!!im diggn this man!!ive done a few tracks lyricly wile having a cold an ish!!lol..nice job dude!!we should collab somtime!!pc
Commented on The darkest hour by kriebel17
Nice one, i love this track! The intro is especially excellent, im envy. :)
Respect for the vocal too!
I'm not a vocalist, but i have just the opposite idea than theHumps. You don't have to sing louder - the more you do, there's a exponally higher chance for miss (less air :D). But if you cut a bit of the other track's volume, there is the same effect.
And i can just join to the autotune-oppositional people, without effects, your voice sounds better - even if sometimes out of tune too.
regards, traz
Commented on The darkest hour by kriebel17
Nice intro man :) loved it overall!!!
XpekT.
Commented on The darkest hour by kriebel17
that intro was great. Loved those keys.
Commented on The darkest hour by kriebel17
Cool track...those instruments are awesome...is that you play?
The vocs are your best so far, I know that we can't stop you from autotune :-) though I have to say this is your best attempt with this machine...:-)
My only problem is that the vocs living another life in the verses...hope, you understand...
Congrats, Danke