Musically you are on the right lines and the structure is sound, though I feel there is something missing to give it that extra edge. The vocals are great, but I don't think they sit totally right with this piece. that said a pretty good effort.
Drawn in right away by this chill musical vibe, I actually like the musical composition much better than the vocals and feel this particular piece needs custom made lyrics (though I am unable to offer at the time). Enjoyed the listen!
Thanks so much for your words, i'm glad to share my first upload with you on looperman ! this one is full of sub-bass so i hope you have listened to it with a subwoofer, it makes sens and balance with harmony and chords but anyway i have to get more bass on little speakers and improve my mastering's skills... Love your voice ! keep in touch JJ !
Commented on KumfortZone feat JJWeekz - Time to give it up by KumfortZone
Listening to this again, in love with the composition and so honored to be in your first upload on looperman!
Commented on KumfortZone feat JJWeekz - Time to give it up by KumfortZone
Hi,
Musically you are on the right lines and the structure is sound, though I feel there is something missing to give it that extra edge. The vocals are great, but I don't think they sit totally right with this piece. that said a pretty good effort.
Best wishes,
Mark/Larry!
Commented on KumfortZone feat JJWeekz - Time to give it up by KumfortZone
Drawn in right away by this chill musical vibe, I actually like the musical composition much better than the vocals and feel this particular piece needs custom made lyrics (though I am unable to offer at the time). Enjoyed the listen!