Thanks for the compliment Greg. I'm happy you like the song. Ima keep doing what I do of course, and you keep doing your thing. I hope I make it through someday :p
Haha, hey bro I can assure you I don't have no particular talent, it's only hardwork. I worked my ass so hard to reach this level, and I still have a lot to learn still. Anyways, I'm glad you enjoyed it that much. And thanks for your feedback.
I see you told Pat you used a pre-mixed instrumental, so with that in mind, I think the result here is quite remarkable. The most difficult thing in the world is to add vocals to a completely mixed track. Things are a lot easier if you have all of the instrument stems so you can mix everything at the same time.
So, from a mixing aspect, outstanding effort. Really good vocal work on this. Very nice backing track as well. Keep chasing the dream. I hope all is well.
Thanks for the feedback. Just like you said it's really tough to mix on a pre-mixed instrumental. I think the engineer did a pretty nice job to work on this. I really like the outcome but you know, it is always good to have a different feedback from different people. I am glad you like it thank you for your review :) And of course, let's keep the dream alive.
It sounds good through my studio headphones, but I'd suggest taking it to a few different car systems and listening to it there. I've noticed a lot of things in the car that I don't notice in the studio - like too much bass, for instance.
Thanks for your review, there. You are perfect right saying I could take a few listen using different systems. I listened using two systems already and everything sound stable apart from the usual cymbal issue. Thanks again :)
Every thing sounds clear and balanced to me. The only thing that I might adjust is the level of some of the low frequencies (not 100% sure on that though). If you were going for an "old school" hip-hop vibe, then I'd leave every thing as it is. If you were trying to compare it to contemporary club hip-hop songs, then I'd boost the bass a bit.
Thanks for your feedback. I actually had the old skool feel in mind while recording this song. I think the Engg did understand the song the same way I did, trying to transcribe that feel. :) Thanks for your review.
I don't listen to hip hop all the time or anything, though I do enjoy certain songs or albums on occasion. I think this is sounding pretty good. Vocals are clear, so that helps a lot. The cymbals to me are a bit heavy on the ultra high frequencies, but that's only my ears... I've said that on other people's tracks before and they turn around and listen to one of mine and say basically the same thing to me. I'm guessing there is a certain frequency range that my ears are sensitive to that others' are not. Really other than that I don't have any criticism for you. Pretty enjoyable track!
Thanks for your review. I appreciate it. Yeah about the cymbals, don't worry, your ears are not fooling you. I figured the cymbals are pretty high too. Maybe that's due to the fact that I used a pre-mixed instrumental... So that's like the best the engg. could get out of the cymbals. I suppose you are a mixing engg yourself, so this review is much appreciated. If you have more input, you can send me a message :) I could always use an engg or two. Peace
Pretty cool track man,however I find it strange that you go out of your way in your bio after saying your African that your flows are totally American influenced..it would sound so much better and interesting if you used your own African influences instead,while this is a good track it sounds so much like all the other old school hip hop that's dished up on a regular basis,just about every producer out there wants to sound different and be apart from the pack,I'll bet you could do that just like stepping off the curb and blow people's minds if your own culture shone through and not this rehashed murika style....just my two cents cheers Dave
Yeah, I feel you on this. But you know, where I come from, there's no hiphop legacy. I grew up listening to hiphop from US, so yeah my style is influenced a lot by US cuz I didn't have a local rapper as an example to looks up too. I don't know how to rap as an African. My strength is in story telling and lyrics, unfurtinately African hiphop artists mostly do dance hall music which I can't really associate with. I reckon what you say tho, originality is what people look for when they wanna become famous. Me I just do what I like doing. And this track is a product of what I was feeling at the time I wrote it. You'll be surprised by my next track I guess. Thanks for your input. I was actually expecting this question, you can see how much I was prepared to answer it. Cheers dave. ;)
Thanks much man, sorry for the late reply tho. I'm glad you feel it how I feel it. Hmm, I don't have a release date yet. I'll let y'all know when it drops
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Nicely done, man. You've got a rapper's voice. Diggin the title and the content. Keep it up, guy.
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the WE ARE lyrics def. makes this track strong! Great job!
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Yoww, that beat and those lyrics man, you are an artist. I got a feeling man, you got potential for something. Keep doing what you are doing.
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Well done. Great track. Talent fills this track completely by way of vocals, music composition, recording and mixing. A+++
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I see you told Pat you used a pre-mixed instrumental, so with that in mind, I think the result here is quite remarkable. The most difficult thing in the world is to add vocals to a completely mixed track. Things are a lot easier if you have all of the instrument stems so you can mix everything at the same time.
So, from a mixing aspect, outstanding effort. Really good vocal work on this. Very nice backing track as well. Keep chasing the dream. I hope all is well.
Bear
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This flow is nice
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smooth
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It sounds good through my studio headphones, but I'd suggest taking it to a few different car systems and listening to it there. I've noticed a lot of things in the car that I don't notice in the studio - like too much bass, for instance.
Commented on Successfully Black by ThaTruth1
Every thing sounds clear and balanced to me. The only thing that I might adjust is the level of some of the low frequencies (not 100% sure on that though). If you were going for an "old school" hip-hop vibe, then I'd leave every thing as it is. If you were trying to compare it to contemporary club hip-hop songs, then I'd boost the bass a bit.
Commented on Successfully Black by ThaTruth1
I don't listen to hip hop all the time or anything, though I do enjoy certain songs or albums on occasion. I think this is sounding pretty good. Vocals are clear, so that helps a lot. The cymbals to me are a bit heavy on the ultra high frequencies, but that's only my ears... I've said that on other people's tracks before and they turn around and listen to one of mine and say basically the same thing to me. I'm guessing there is a certain frequency range that my ears are sensitive to that others' are not. Really other than that I don't have any criticism for you. Pretty enjoyable track!
Commented on Successfully Black by ThaTruth1
Dope tune man! Love that beat. Ryhme flow an delivery tight too
Commented on Black And Ugly by ThaTruth1
SWEET TRACK, Im totally digging on the vibe, its got DIBKIS all over it.
On a side note, I love tom's dinner, its got such a sic ass mellow vibe to it. Didn't think any one still rocked that kutt.
Keep up the great work. FT
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this is dopeness liking the underground vibe to it real raw hip hop good stuff ,peace bro
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Pretty cool track man,however I find it strange that you go out of your way in your bio after saying your African that your flows are totally American influenced..it would sound so much better and interesting if you used your own African influences instead,while this is a good track it sounds so much like all the other old school hip hop that's dished up on a regular basis,just about every producer out there wants to sound different and be apart from the pack,I'll bet you could do that just like stepping off the curb and blow people's minds if your own culture shone through and not this rehashed murika style....just my two cents
cheers Dave
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I'm feeling the lyrics man! A lot of heart in the song you can feel it.
When the tape dropping?
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LOVE!
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Props my man.Real good song.I dig that.The beat,the flow,the delivery,everything on point.good stuff.
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Tight track ThaTruth1! That beat is sick and you delivered on the flows. The mix sounds good too. Nice work.
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Love the beat bro but nice track overall, like your style.
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Loved it...
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Nice track, man. I like the old school hip hop sound you got going on.
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very nice sound. Love the kick, the piano, the vocals. basss goes hard too.