First of all kudos for keeping up with the tempo haha. I know you said you recorded with your Iphone earphones so im not sure if you were looking for any feedback about the quality of your recording lol it was actually better than i thought it would be. But one thing especially rapping that fast it's hard to really decipher the lyrics. Lokey thought you were speaking Spanish half of the time.
Now that I replayed it I am pretty sure you were, so I guess what Im saying is just try to clean up some vocals? I don't really know how to explain. But nice work on the track my man!
Very fresh intro. The 808 is very present and gives a deep feel to the beat. The storytelling vocals are good and fit well to the track. I like how you changed something negative that happened to you into something positive.
Oh man, I haven't heard something with this style in too long, and it is so fresh at the same time! Very present and real, and I'm lovin it! I have to ask, did you do any vocal recordings of yourself in this? Either way, I'm tempted to ask if I can do some sort of remix. I'm on a major protest/nature/chemical high right now, but I usually am. I really dig what you are doing here. Just what I needed to hear today. Fave!
amazing-a review from @Spivkurl !! aaythanks man, its crazy, i got the vocals from my local varsity. it was students giving their opinions. its my way of venting,was wrongfully arrested after a racist incident occured at a rugby match...PLEASE remix!
Love that bass bro! You know I have a lot of random sample packs that sell online for stupid amounts, I think i'll make loops out of them & share them with you so you have more ammo to fire off daf beats like this!
thank you-GOTS to be hard bruh."im in love with the voco!" *coco voice* lol maybe i can do 1 or 2 more lol,thing is im in a time chamber,composing all genres then mixing them into one at a later stage to develop my signature Trap sound..so i will think of putting my other projects on hold till im completly done with this..buuuut TURN UP!
when i listn to this i feel i got the old sound :) but if you like my sound, i could put some effect on this track? but i would still say you did a great job, and you shouldnt give up on this genre.
what do you mean you feel like you got an old sound? like vintage sound type beats?i know what you mean,i think,this is REALLY new age,vocal chops and bass,hi hats and snare sooooo unrealistic but sounds soo good #EnterTheMatrix
"Check This Out Man!" Yeeeeaaaah Philly! NICE!! I'm loving the mid tempo groove you have going. Great short phrase vox too. All is fantastic as an instrumental, but hell yes, put you and your boys on the 1-2-3 on the M-I-C. Do up some vocals right! There's plenty of room for it! Well done son!
AAAAY!!!lol trust bruv, its nice i like it-glad you do too,i will talk to the guys and have them jump on this one too.its only gonna get better!do a tad bit more mixing,some vocals = radio ready material! thanks for the kind words man,highly appreciated!
i think the guitar doesnt fit too-i just put it there so it becomes a song haha,but ye,could have used like a piano or a dark riff rather than that pop type one. thanks bro
Commented on Tha Mafia by Philemonster1
nice beat
Commented on Olega Crank by Philemonster1
wow wow
Commented on Olega Crank by Philemonster1
First of all kudos for keeping up with the tempo haha. I know you said you recorded with your Iphone earphones so im not sure if you were looking for any feedback about the quality of your recording lol it was actually better than i thought it would be. But one thing especially rapping that fast it's hard to really decipher the lyrics. Lokey thought you were speaking Spanish half of the time.
Now that I replayed it I am pretty sure you were, so I guess what Im saying is just try to clean up some vocals? I don't really know how to explain. But nice work on the track my man!
Commented on Olega Crank by Philemonster1
Dope job man that got intense with the drop keep it up and you will make it far
Commented on Tswelo Tales by Philemonster1
wow! Crazy track!!!
Commented on Tha Mafia by Philemonster1
So cool
Commented on Tswelo Tales by Philemonster1
Very fresh intro. The 808 is very present and gives a deep feel to the beat. The storytelling vocals are good and fit well to the track. I like how you changed something negative that happened to you into something positive.
Commented on Tswelo Tales by Philemonster1
Oh man, I haven't heard something with this style in too long, and it is so fresh at the same time! Very present and real, and I'm lovin it! I have to ask, did you do any vocal recordings of yourself in this? Either way, I'm tempted to ask if I can do some sort of remix. I'm on a major protest/nature/chemical high right now, but I usually am. I really dig what you are doing here. Just what I needed to hear today. Fave!
Commented on Beyond Temptation by Philemonster1
You can't help but bounce to this...great production.
Commented on Tha Mafia by Philemonster1
excellent
Commented on Tha Mafia by Philemonster1
Nice n Bumpy ...
Commented on Tha Mafia by Philemonster1
Dig it!!!
Commented on Trap Cobra by Philemonster1
Nice!!!! i like how its not too deep
Commented on Tha Mafia by Philemonster1
i feel like you had a better sound before.
Commented on Tha Mafia by Philemonster1
Cool!!
Commented on Trap Cobra by Philemonster1
nice.
Commented on Trap Cobra by Philemonster1
Love that bass bro! You know I have a lot of random sample packs that sell online for stupid amounts, I think i'll make loops out of them & share them with you so you have more ammo to fire off daf beats like this!
Commented on Trap Cobra by Philemonster1
Wow, this is a pretty hard track bro! The vocal fits the track's mood perfectly! Good stuff here, I want more of this! Don't stop :P
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Commented on Trap Cobra by Philemonster1
Where did you find those vocals lol
Commented on Trap Cobra by Philemonster1
when i listn to this i feel i got the old sound :) but if you like my sound, i could put some effect on this track? but i would still say you did a great job, and you shouldnt give up on this genre.
Commented on OatMeal IceCream by Philemonster1
This track needs some rap vocals. Keep existing vocals, but will sound more lanks with rap in it as well. Aweee! ha ha
Commented on Rude Boi by Philemonster1
"Check This Out Man!" Yeeeeaaaah Philly! NICE!! I'm loving the mid tempo groove you have going. Great short phrase vox too. All is fantastic as an instrumental, but hell yes, put you and your boys on the 1-2-3 on the M-I-C. Do up some vocals right! There's plenty of room for it! Well done son!
Commented on Rude Boi by Philemonster1
really good
make some big room house stuff
it would be soo good ... like yellow claw good
Commented on Angela Simpson by Philemonster1
cool idea man, the guitar at the end sounds too happy for the track though, you know what i mean? haha.
Like you have this lady talking about torture and stuff then you have a happy guitar melody.
But other than that very unique track, awesome use of the sample. good work :D
Commented on Angela Simpson by Philemonster1
i would say you should set adult contest on.