fits the description Sour theres a nice melody and your voice is nice under the screaming which made me smile, well done bro your own styling whats not to like
I didn't make the beat this time. This was actually the beat everyone had to use in the contest. I'm hoping to win Gold! Thanks for the voice compliment unfortunately I won't be able to scream anymore as there's a baby next door and I live in an apartment so yeah, fun while it lasted. I heard her cry and felt real bad because I knew I caused that.
Mate, I think the is one of the best you've done. Love your vox, such sweet unique phrasing, quite melodic too, you actually sound quite sweet when you sing and don't overdrive the production as I know you do on purpose. tho I've said that before about your voice anyway. Very cool bro well done.
Thank you Chris! What song of mine was your favorite if You don't mind me asking? I put a shit ton of mastering and mixing into this bro. I actually made this song for a contest and I'm hoping to win gold.
That track really kept me guessing! The intro sounded like a modern adaptation of any classic punk album but it then proceeded in ways that I would've never seen coming. Always cool to hear something that I can't predict as I'm listening.
Many thanks Cam, I believe this is the first time I had the pleasure to hear from you man! I completely agree with the modern adaptation to a classic punk song and that it's digress is quite beautiful... listen to Joshua Fit For battle bro... you won't be sorry if you really like this kind of stuff. Peace
Hello AJ. I'm sorry I had it in my head to tell I don't know how I missed it. don't worry about people like him who think by saying things like that will show him that he knows a lot about music which he doesn't. I think you are doing brilliantly my friend. Well done. Maj
It seems you've had a near-death experience before, maybe. I think the track conveys that well. Might be part of a whole series... To me it's an absolutely interesting piece of music. Good work.
it is for sure a part of a series, an album titled blackstar... turn it down, turn it over but you can't help to resist it's bittersweet friend, realize you're no longer alive and all you do is pretend... what a great fucking world to not live forever... if only
Hey buddy, sounds from the title and description you have a story to tell, and I'd love to listen, but the vocal is so loud in the mix that I can't, really. Remember that sopmetimes it sounds louder when you whisper. See if you can dial back the vocal a bit, get things a bit more in balance and people can hear what you have to say! Big hug!
im glad you told the tale behind the tail in yer response to zoots. my friend, i do know the feeling for once upon a time i fell in love at first sight and tho i knew i could only win for a short time and then the superflies would take me i did. i should have heard your song before that. fuck! you are a mighty bearer forther of soul brother.
I love how you used "superflies" to describe self esteem in a way that doesn't mean confidence rather just ability itself. That's how I feel about her. I'm happy for her. She's doing great. She doesn't need someone like me fucking that up. Thank you man. Btw I'm using superflies in a poem now and I'm giving you credit. Thank you brother. Love you man.
Well the story goes, there was a woman in love with an unfaithful man. he abused her socially in public and was a spoiled little bitch. Every time I saw it I defended her and made fun of her boyfriend. me and her even held hands while they were together after he threw a fit and left her. I always loved her. But, as much as I hate to say it and without any ego at all I must say I am not good enough for her. she's finally getting her life together and getting ahead in life and I, well I have plans to join an indigenous tribe and settle down there. She has hopes and dreams for society or perhaps a cabin in the woods at best but I can't force my way of life on her. She's an amazing beautiful sweet woman period. And another thing she's spoils all her boyfriends. I would hate myself. Because I know I would take advantage. I just hope she knows I love her.
always a trip man and this is no different. there's the occasional melodic element in the vox here which reminds me that I think you could probably sing like a canary if you wanted to. Nice one AJ
A canary, nahhh maybe like a fruity ogre lol. I'm glad you enjoyed man I gotta listen to your new stuff man its been a while ima post this song real quick and Ima look out for the three amigos heh heh heh you know the loop coup
I'd like my tranquilizer rum shotgunned straight from the barrel of a rifle my friend and to hell with blindness, that would be righteous, like this verse and the ambience running beneath it.
nice spitting AJ great intro ambience, i always give credit for creativity this could be placed in a bigger piece, the join on .45 needs smoothing maybe compress the vocal section with a low pass filter to rid the little hiss/white noise if it reduces the spoken section just add a 3db gain, dont consider this a negative, its not meant to be i like what you bring Captain, but thats what i heard on my jbls... Paul
Thank you Paul for listening! I understand you are trying to help me make better music. I appreciate it, really, but most of the time you guys say I should do this and that but I did it my way on purpose. For example in .45, I actually created the noise. It's a Brownian noise and I phased it until my vocals kicked in. It gives it a Lofi effect which is what I was going with and it is spoken word so that's why the beat is so minimal. Usually my spoken words are just a Brownian noise and a single beat with loud vocals. Once again thank you for your honesty and thank you for your kindness
AJ, valiant brother. damn that opening theme called to me from the corner of the forest where i met the survivor of the battle who spoke in tongues we won.
Commented on A Letter To Aunt Stephanie by CaptainSour69
fits the description Sour theres a nice melody and your voice is nice under the screaming which made me smile, well done bro your own styling whats not to like
Commented on A Letter To Aunt Stephanie by CaptainSour69
Mate, I think the is one of the best you've done. Love your vox, such sweet unique phrasing, quite melodic too, you actually sound quite sweet when you sing and don't overdrive the production as I know you do on purpose. tho I've said that before about your voice anyway. Very cool bro well done.
Commented on A Letter To Aunt Stephanie by CaptainSour69
Hi AJ
I love the intro.
Great track.
Well done.
Maj
Commented on Skramz 5 Mixed Mastered By Me by CaptainSour69
That track really kept me guessing! The intro sounded like a modern adaptation of any classic punk album but it then proceeded in ways that I would've never seen coming. Always cool to hear something that I can't predict as I'm listening.
Cam
Commented on Skramz 5 Mixed Mastered By Me by CaptainSour69
Hey AJ.
This is a great track, my friend.
You did well here.
Well done.
Maj
Commented on Skramz 5 Mixed Mastered By Me by CaptainSour69
puts my coked up luggis in a fuckin line, bro. fine stuff, buddy
Commented on Skramz 5 Mixed Mastered By Me by CaptainSour69
original and nice track !
Michael
Commented on Death by CaptainSour69
aj, this is my death theme now. holy shit that means im going to die. goodbye, aj!
Commented on Death by CaptainSour69
Hello AJ.
I'm sorry I had it in my head to tell I don't know how I missed it. don't worry about people like him who think by saying things like that will show him that he knows a lot about music which he doesn't.
I think you are doing brilliantly my friend.
Well done.
Maj
Commented on Death by CaptainSour69
It seems you've had a near-death experience before, maybe. I think the track conveys that well. Might be part of a whole series... To me it's an absolutely interesting piece of music. Good work.
Commented on Death by CaptainSour69
Hi Captain! criticism is easy, art is more difficult, keep on making the music you like! good job dude!
Michael
Commented on Death by CaptainSour69
Sounds like SHIT bro lol.
Commented on Court of Debauchery by CaptainSour69
aj, brother your heart an eviscerating raptor wrapped in fire. rising.
Commented on Court of Debauchery by CaptainSour69
RIP MY EAR :D
Commented on Court of Debauchery by CaptainSour69
Hey buddy, sounds from the title and description you have a story to tell, and I'd love to listen, but the vocal is so loud in the mix that I can't, really.
Remember that sopmetimes it sounds louder when you whisper. See if you can dial back the vocal a bit, get things a bit more in balance and people can hear what you have to say! Big hug!
Commented on Unnamed Knightress by CaptainSour69
im glad you told the tale behind the tail in yer response to zoots. my friend, i do know the feeling for once upon a time i fell in love at first sight and tho i knew i could only win for a short time and then the superflies would take me i did. i should have heard your song before that. fuck! you are a mighty bearer forther of soul brother.
Commented on Unnamed Knightress by CaptainSour69
Wow AJ.
You have done it again my friend.
Great track.
Great guitar as Chris said.
Well done my friend
Maj
Commented on Unnamed Knightress by CaptainSour69
Yo, the frustration of unconsummated desire, even if it was just a dream. Maybe that's worse than reality? Crazy vox brother.
Commented on Unnamed Knightress by CaptainSour69
I love this! the guitar is smooth!
Commented on Fallen Angel by CaptainSour69
always a trip man and this is no different. there's the occasional melodic element in the vox here which reminds me that I think you could probably sing like a canary if you wanted to. Nice one AJ
Commented on Fallen Angel by CaptainSour69
Hey AJ.
Another masterpiece mate
Truly a fallen angel brilliant.
Well done mate.
Maj
Commented on Kotaro Fuma 3 by CaptainSour69
I'd like my tranquilizer rum shotgunned straight from the barrel of a rifle my friend and to hell with blindness, that would be righteous, like this verse and the ambience running beneath it.
Commented on Kotaro Fuma 3 by CaptainSour69
nice spitting AJ great intro ambience, i always give credit for creativity this could be placed in a bigger piece, the join on .45 needs smoothing maybe compress the vocal section with a low pass filter to rid the little hiss/white noise if it reduces the spoken section just add a 3db gain, dont consider this a negative, its not meant to be i like what you bring Captain, but thats what i heard on my jbls... Paul
Commented on Kotaro Fuma 3 by CaptainSour69
Hey AJ.
No doubt...a masterpiece !!!
Splendidly structured with brilliant buildup.
Well done mate.
Maj
Commented on Kotaro Fuma 3 by CaptainSour69
AJ, valiant brother. damn that opening theme called to me from the corner of the forest where i met the survivor of the battle who spoke in tongues we won.