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Tags : | RnB | 3.62 MB | Has Lyrics | FL Studio

Description : so Maj sent me a track that he thought i may like, well here it is, so obviously, i liked it. wrote a new vocal for it, again R&B pop, easy to remember lyrics, along the lines of Hey Baby. ive put them up so you can follow along, the backing is overlays. tried not to make it to cluttered, its got more clarity just different fx on each vocal layer, bit of overdrive and reverb, no panning, added a couple soundgoodizers.

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  1. xstokes
    xstokes on Fri 26th Aug 2022 - 1 year ago

    hey Paul! haha, like ian i first heard this last saturday, blastin it out while waiting for my ride to come. had me grooving and now im here again getting recharged by the big zaps man youre like turning that microphone on, youll get shocked doing that shit! you got soul that dont quit, my friend! cheers!

    dimestop
    Reply by dimestop

    thanks for the listen bro, im having a ball at the minute singing, i'm sure i'm the biggest hater ive got, i think my voice is shite :)) but people want me to sing, FKY. they send me tracks, i love it. bro my next is fucking HUGE and i mean HUGE. its finished so it maybe later tonight or tomorrow latest its a collab so need the feedback off my partner on this first but ive chucked everything at it dimestop style

  2. pseudoble
    pseudoble on Tue 23rd Aug 2022 - 1 year ago

    Hey Paul - I listened to this the other day but doing ten other things so just revisted- it's very poppy - you sure have a knack for the ear worm. In terms of constructive feedback - You are continuing to get a more natural sound and tighter as a vocalist (and of course it doesnt matter if you have a golden voice or not, "all my favourite singers couldnt sing" as the silver jews sang). In terms of what I might change (but wtf do I know) personally I dont like the high pitched feedback like sound that comes in at a couple of points and I'd take it out and I think you should have another go with the panning and the vocal mix. I know that you have probably already improved the track with feedback and you might be over polishing it further (but you can always squirrel any useful feedback away the next track hey). Overall a nice original piece of rnb pop. Hope you are well mate : )

    dimestop
    Reply by dimestop

    thanks for the feedback Ian yeh the high pitched is not my cup of tea either, i like the song and have tweaked the layout slightly but i too question the pitch change, it was higher when i first posted, others dont mind it but within an hr i was like im not totally happy with that. i will have to start showing a little more faith in myself vox wise and stop messing with fx to try to disguise the fact, its not worth it, my voice is what it is, i should just concentrate on timing and delivery, because you can get a good result, so on to the next and remember these things. done it on Hey Baby dont know why i changed that approach the link is underneath and another ear worm :))

    https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/236266

  3. RitajustRita
    RitajustRita on Sun 21st Aug 2022 - 1 year ago

    I cant sing but i didd try 1 time and i
    want to explain you how i didd it to get my text to fit.
    I put my headphone on and volume not to loud so i can hear my voice.
    listen all the time to 1 bar
    and then sing..i got you baby ...for example. So you are sure you sing in that ritme and time.

    dimestop
    Reply by dimestop

    im giving them a shuffle Rita so may update it a little later. it was all one take the main vocal, I've now snapped it and just gonna space it better it dont need much, thanks for the support lady and your advice. check it tomorrow hopefully it will be better

  4. RitajustRita
    RitajustRita on Sun 21st Aug 2022 - 1 year ago

    Yo Paul.
    Everytime i hear some progression in your voice and how you play with plugins to get it better.
    Your voice begins to get clearer.
    I didn't hear anyone in the comment say it but I want to be honest with you anyway.
    Maybe it's just me and excuse me for that
    but I don't think the vocals are in the right place yet.
    I know you can get it better like another track before this one.

    dimestop
    Reply by dimestop

    Rita that is exactly why your my friend, because you dare say how you feel, as you know i dont take anything to heart, we have fun, and i value you as you well know, i dont need to excuse you, your right.
    i actually love this track its catchy, ive tried the vox in a few areas tbf this was about the best i got, i also took a few overlays out, ive realised finally, less is more, but im still learning and laughing. keep saying what you think Mrs, too me or anyone else :))

  5. theHumps
    theHumps on Sun 21st Aug 2022 - 1 year ago

    You've come a long way with your productions Paul. You are trying new things with your vocals, keep experimenting and having fun!

    This has a summer feel to it, Remember summer? It was when we used to go outside and not melt with the oppressive heat and firestorms and drought, lol.

    Keep up the good work!

    Wayne

    dimestop
    Reply by dimestop

    thanks Wayne im always experimenting and i always go too much with fx or overlays and trying to disguise my lousy voice but i think I've finally learnt, less is more, my vox is what it is but i'll keep going and having a laugh and not taking myself too serious

  6. kingmt77
    kingmt77 on Sun 21st Aug 2022 - 1 year ago

    Paul that sequenced entrance! Nice creative touch. You also have stepped up your vox effects game. Also so the de tuned vibe sets right here too. The heartbeat is the kick and that sounds great. With each new track you lay down your mixing chops are shining bright! I warned you before.. dem contract boys coming to get you to sign! Great work again Paul. Be safe.

    Mark

    dimestop
    Reply by dimestop

    thanks for the feedback Mark, im having great fun, and yeh i always put heart in to my music, it wont get me anywhere :)) but im not in it for that, its all about having fun and getting the chance to make great friendships around the world, i love it in this place

  7. dvnmusic
    dvnmusic on Sat 20th Aug 2022 - 1 year ago

    Love this track. Its catchy in a new and unique way. The vocals aren't sitting too well in the mix but apart from that it sounds really good!! Good job!!!

    dimestop
    Reply by dimestop

    thanks for the listen dvn, im not really a singer just do it cos i can get away with it here, i mess to much with fx etc. but its fun and i dont take myself serious anyways, but i do try. i can write a good song, but think my vox are lousy :))

  8. BaoBou
    BaoBou on Fri 19th Aug 2022 - 1 year ago

    I like it a lot. The melody made me sit up straight right away and I really like how much you've learned to get the most out of your vocals (although the playing with the panning left/right was a bit much for me).
    Great stuff my friend!

    dimestop
    Reply by dimestop

    cheers BB ive got to stop with trying to overdrive with fx panning etc, maybe have a little more confidence in my vox just EQ, i do try but i get what your saying, its a bit much for me tbf, maybe just go for clarity. i really wanna do some old uk punk track maybe take a jam vocal and sham 69, it hurry up harry type :))thanks for the listen bro

  9. Angelusyeux777SC
    Angelusyeux777SC on Fri 19th Aug 2022 - 1 year ago

    Aw, thanks for the vote of confidence Paul regarding my singing, I am so humbled indee Both you & Maj are such good people & dear hearts for real!...I call you's the Dream-Team when you work together. Maj is a remarkable producer of some of the best! music here on LM and your lyrical skills are just Outstanding! music should be fun! that is what comes through when I listen to your creative gems, without a doubt it's a joy to listen, so thank you P, for always lifting up the peeps/friends of LM, what a trooper you are :)

    Angelus

    dimestop
    Reply by dimestop

    Angel you have no reason to thank me for stating the obvious, you are well liked by us all on featured great vocalist and you share the love too, we're lucky we've got so much talent here, thanks for your kind words about me and Maj, it also gives me the chance to say your new track is simply that title AMAZING i was singing ad-libs over it when listening, hubby should be well pleased with the dedication i faved it

  10. BeatMaker4real
    BeatMaker4real on Fri 19th Aug 2022 - 1 year ago

    What's good dimestop? great job on the track.
    Feel me now...

    dimestop
    Reply by dimestop

    I'm feeling you bro, you feeling me now yeah, yeah, :)) I'm having such a good time writing lately, thanks for the listen and comment bro its always appreciated hope your good

  11. crucethus
    crucethus on Thu 18th Aug 2022 - 1 year ago

    Very good Paul, vocal sound is improving each and every time, I had a thought. if you slow the BPM down just a tad, the groove would come through a little better and I think you would be able to sing it without feeling rushed to hit the beat and get that headbobbing booty shaking feel you want. IMHOP

    dimestop
    Reply by dimestop

    the bpm was 106.657 i pushed out to 110, but since i posted although its sounds ok i to think its a bit fast seeing your comment convinced me to change it mate, i was thinking about it anyway so ive dropped it to 107, its sounds better :))

  12. Angelusyeux777SC
    Angelusyeux777SC on Thu 18th Aug 2022 - 1 year ago

    Oooh this is a mind trip & in a real nice! way, go on paul strut your stuff vocally I'm truly loving this vibe...Keep up the good work & having funnnn!!!! all the way, such a GREAT track, BTW the lyrics are fun also. Kudos!

    dimestop
    Reply by dimestop

    thanks Angel, i really appreciate your comment being a singer i admire, and a friend, my vocal will never be great, dry wise, but you can do a lot when its wet with fx and you learn timing and being on beat, I've worked on both, and think I've improved a little, but your dead right about having fun, that's what its all about. maj' track was great i slightly lengthened it. i also mentioned on Rita' latest, i thought your vocal or ad- libs would fit great on it :)

  13. DijamMusic
    DijamMusic on Thu 18th Aug 2022 - 1 year ago

    Wow, mate you are driving me crazy with this brilliance.
    fantastic work my friend.
    Great track not just my work but the way you put it together mate.
    Well done.
    Maj

    dimestop
    Reply by dimestop

    mate the music was dynamite, thankyou, i loved it immediately. i was really pleased with how this came together, I've taken a piece from the middle to extended it by 30 seconds to get the extra verse, kept my vox clean not to many fx just EQ overdrive and reverb, and tiny pitch change. used a couple of soundgoodizers too, thanks Maj, I'm glad you like what I've done, i was quite pleased with my vocal this time also. thanks for the fav the A team are back :))

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