I'd like my tranquilizer rum shotgunned straight from the barrel of a rifle my friend and to hell with blindness, that would be righteous, like this verse and the ambience running beneath it.
nice spitting AJ great intro ambience, i always give credit for creativity this could be placed in a bigger piece, the join on .45 needs smoothing maybe compress the vocal section with a low pass filter to rid the little hiss/white noise if it reduces the spoken section just add a 3db gain, dont consider this a negative, its not meant to be i like what you bring Captain, but thats what i heard on my jbls... Paul
Thank you Paul for listening! I understand you are trying to help me make better music. I appreciate it, really, but most of the time you guys say I should do this and that but I did it my way on purpose. For example in .45, I actually created the noise. It's a Brownian noise and I phased it until my vocals kicked in. It gives it a Lofi effect which is what I was going with and it is spoken word so that's why the beat is so minimal. Usually my spoken words are just a Brownian noise and a single beat with loud vocals. Once again thank you for your honesty and thank you for your kindness
AJ, valiant brother. damn that opening theme called to me from the corner of the forest where i met the survivor of the battle who spoke in tongues we won.
Description : Paul Dimestop told me to not care about my voice and rap.
So I made a little rap and this is just for fun only.
Everything made by me hope you like it :P
Description : HEY EVERYONE...BEEN A WHILE....HOPE ALL IS GOOD.....A CHILL TRACK WITH NICE MSG.....THATS HEMANIFEST ON VOX...AND A BEAT SOUPED UP BY REDOFFICIAL.....I PUT IT TOGETHER THIS WEEK,,,FEELS TO BE BACK...LIKE THE NEW SET UP
Description : Shades of HipnoSis is Sexy! Shades of HipnoSis is romantic, soulful, hip hop & R&B. It's also very poetical. He's talking about how this sensual female put him in a trance. After the initial lyrics,
Kamal let's the groove ride so you can ride with it. Enjoy the female neo soul voice on the hook as well.
Description : Retweaked the spoken word a litte April 2023 Also ADDED THE POEM in the lyrics section
My Guitar and Harmonica - both treated
Reading of Poem Softly by Aaron Kramer
Main beat is a drum loop, with a kick added and one sample - all manipulated
Other versions had more percussion but not needed I think
Description : Spoken Word with Rhythm. It's a song about dedication and being there for the one you love. People can easily say what they are going to do but not really mean any of the words. I learned a hard lesson in that today.
Description : I was writing another type of track and this "Spoken Word" I ran across kinda hi-jacked the track. At least I'll have the Genre right this time.
Description : Hi there! Well, this is a track for the phatkatz4's Halloween Track Challenge [https://www.looperman.com/forum/thread/183960/halloween-track-challenge]. It's not a music, but... it's a track :P . Sorry about my accent. My native language is spanish, my english is not perfect, so sorry for mistakes (grammar, pronunciation, etc). I hope you like it. Thanks! SUN & MOON... FIRE & ICE HEART... LIGHT & DARK FUSION...
Description : Having done a Robot Trilogy, maybe I’m now doing a Plant Trilogy, with this being number 2 following March of the Seedlings.
Samples used:
Rasputin - Krafty Bassline 2
Josee1969 - Drum And Bass 43 - Saluable Salt
xKingK420x - Tele 2
xKingK420x - Tele 1
lasse1011 - Dark Melodic Lofi Chords
ECKSjoe - Cymbal Roll
Schnatter - In A Cold Cold World There Is Someone
Arrant - Redpriest X Digicore Pluck Loop - Back Part 1
CelloCubano - Welcome Home Bongos
Ceezx - Triangle Ding
No doubt...a masterpiece !!!
Splendidly structured with brilliant buildup.
Well done mate.
Maj