Thanks mate, what a great comment Rob, innocence, that's the perfect word. I wrote life long love story, your word is more fitting, just wish my voice could have been better lol. I'm closing in on 60 in a few years, so you gone and made my bank holiday weekend with innocence, I feel young and innocent today Jynkz thankyou

Cheers mate I'm definitely old and wrinkly :)) it was a decent effort tbf, I'm pleased with the warmth it's recieved and for BeatMaker it's his music and it's beautiful I'm glad he let me indulge, it's had a few listens

Thanks Ian hope your good mate, nice comment, I appreciate it, I wasn't too sure at first, I liked the layout and words just dissapointed in my voice hence Lionel Rich Tea comment, I try to do everything to the best of my ability, whatever I'm doing and try to improve continually even though me and singing should never be, I'll keep practising and yeh the comments are encouraging so that's a bonus for me, hope your good mate

Thanks for the lovely comment Mike, I was really pleased with the song I wrote, it was genuine like you say just wish I had I better voice, I could havereally done it justice even though I tried to put feeling into this

Speak Up nice to see you around bro, thanks for the comment, not bad words in this one eh, thanks for the listen, hope your good and bringing more fire

Thanks Michael, and thanks for the advice, I'm no singer :)) never will be, it's really for fun but I'll try to improve. I ll never be you for sure, but thanks for giving me your time it's appreciated, hope things are going well for you

Thanks Rita, I was quite happy with this considering I think I'm an awful singer :)) it's better just, but I'm having fun, would love to here you have a sing. I love broken English I'm sure you've chanted before,try a couple of ad-libs or a few phrases, I'm sure it would be a success, will check your latest in a bit lady, always a good listen

Captain thanks for the nice comment and for the listen, I liked the words in this track too, thought they came together well, bit like a movie gets the girl loses her through his stupidity but managed to get her back although she's a little damaged, predictable yeh, but what a story, in a song I made up in 30 mins thanks again really appreciate that lovely comment

Cheers mate just commented on your latest electronic offering, nice work. I'm trying bloody hard to sing, if that's what you call it, it's not easy cos it's not natural, I use a little reverb and alter the attack and release etc in fx but auto-tune, no, what's the point, I'll always think I'm shit anyway, maybe one day I'll get lucky and a good singer may sing my words, which would give me more pleasure for sure, for now I'll keep have a try :))

Thanks for the listen and comment mate, hope your good, I was quite pleased with this, there's still room for improvement I know, but it's a little more originality from me and I'll keep practising trying different styles and enjoying myself and having fun

My G, thanks for always showing me support, I love the fact you always give constructive critique, its massive in this cut throat industry we all love, if you can't take it, get out, you gotta have thick skin, I'll keep on practising dropping stuff and taking the advice good or bad as it's all part of learning, and thanks for the positive comment about my confidence, when I first came I really was afraid of what people would think but people like yourself and others have made this one of my most positive experiences I love you all for that i truely do and the fact your all great at what you do

Thanks Wayne, as I've said, its quite difficult to sing when it's not natural I've always been told I'm tone deaf :)) I know this, so never did it, but the more time I spend on my music and listening, the more my confidence grows,I know there's mistakes but if I don't upload I'll never get any better and the advice from everyone wouldnt be there thanks again for you supportive words and advice.

Thanks ZoSo, nice to see you around again and the nice compliment bro, I've tweaked this in a few places that I spotted issues it sounds ok but could be better but really glad you liked it, the comments have been positive with regards melody and wording so practise and improvement is the order of the day :))

Thanks so much Steven,everything you have said is so true, this was the first time I sang a song the whole way through and yes when I played it back, everytime it was off beat I was like what the fuk and had to move it around. Even tho I thought I was on time, I realise how difficult it is now we all sing along to tracks and think we're great until you listen back, the compliments about my dancing were lovely but I'll let you in to a secret there. I've danced for 40+ years on the street and at comps, I started to make music with the sole intention of dancing to my own track, but producing has taken over my free time I've not danced since the festival last year were I was in the headlines and on BBC news, so have got to start again even 30 second clips are cool to do and easy more palatable also if a longer watch is not you, I'll continue to practise and improve its gotten hold of me now and I too want to be one of the guys who is always there for others just like dancing, things that make me happy ;)))

Steven thanks for the great feedback, I think this could be better, no I actually feel it could be, i'm astonished a talent like you would give it some time you've been around from when I joined and we have become friends albeit virtual, your advice is priceless, I listen to all the guys with costuctive critique and advice because they want the best for you, I'd be a terrible producer my vocalist would have birch or cactus scars from me whipping and screaming again again with more feeeeling. Will check your latest chillout, I know it'll be good. My mail is in my profile thumbs up me on it and i'll send you these stems but will have to get a better mic mines tat and I can try it again, I'd be amassed to see what you would do

Thanks terry I've just tweaked the limiter on the vocal, I noticed a couple of slight peaks earlier, 2 second job. It's more balanced now, it's great to read positive comments about melody and wording, I'll keep pushing and learning I love all this music and community, in a world were fighting is common place, this is what music was meant for, whatever your flava

Thanks so much Johnnie, glad you liked the poetic lyric, the words came together well and surprisingly easy, I've had a good life compared to lots but have faced some extremely difficult challenges, maybe this helps me choose the right words to say. I too like the overly it was the last thing I done, was listening just before upload and decided to put it in for the outro. Listened to Walk in the park again just, it's fly bro, was singing bars smiling looking out the window it's a beautiful sunny day too

Thanks for the positive comment Chris, I think it's my best vocal performance, Cru's words ringing in my ears, from come join the party, pronunciation :)) his explanation about how abba done so good with their English pronunciation was a cool example, my accent doesnt help me so really tried hard this time and I don't think I'll have to put the lyrics up, everybody should be able to understand me this time, I do speak English really

Thanks bro, I appreciate that, my name and singer shouldn't even be in the same sentence :)) but what the hell, that's what music is supposed to do, lift you, take your mind away from the ugliness of real life, your music lifted me on Sunday, I felt happy, and I give it some time and effort as you know bro, thanks again for lowing me to indulge. I'll put it on my sound cloud too, obviously full credit will go to you for the beautiful music

Hey Tom nice to have you about, hope your move has gone well and exciting things are happening for you, same old players are here at different times it's still a great community. Thanks for your positive feedback and I truly hope you find time to join in again mate, take care whatever bro