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Description : So I just made another retro-styled pop beat, but I feel like it's still not my best. Meanwhile making this beat, I realized you can't make a good song by using VSTs. Anyway, I'm too shy to show you my lead vocals.

The lead vocals are actually pretty catchy, especially the bridge. I caught myself singing it randomly. I'll put the lyrics below, in case you wanna imagine it. I hope you enjoy my bcg vocals lol

I need feedback pleaseee

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  1. Danke
    Danke on Tue 14th Sep 2021 - 2 years ago

    this is a very good song ... absolute catchy ... vocs are so moody ... for my taste the master or mix is a bit overpowered though ...
    handshake, Danke

  2. Zootman
    Zootman on Tue 14th Sep 2021 - 2 years ago

    I'd agree this really starts to fly at that section at 1:48. Don't be shy, as Pseudoble says you can do all sorts to your voice. I hide behind shit all the time lol

  3. Bilbozo
    Bilbozo on Tue 14th Sep 2021 - 2 years ago

    Great dynamic vibe happening here. Great for singing vocals at any level. I'd really like to hear your vox on it. Vocally each step in overcoming that challenge is making the first leap of confidence. Cheers and great song

  4. ioncewas
    ioncewas on Mon 13th Sep 2021 - 2 years ago

    Hi MrRivus, I'd really like to hear the one with your vocals; which VSTs did you use on this one?

  5. dimestop
    dimestop on Mon 13th Sep 2021 - 2 years ago

    Nice to see you back MrRivus it's got the makings of something here,the first third is well after the initial inttro your like waiting for something to happen and it doesn't, it gets better as it goes, the poundin keys etc the vocal, makes it larger, this is in no way a diss it's a good track, maybe a couple tweaks and an early vocal will make it better. Keep sharing bruv, hope you get a collab

    MrRivus
    Reply by MrRivus

    Thank you so much for listening to my track! It means a lot... Well, I hope too that someday I'll get a collab lol

  6. pseudoble
    pseudoble on Mon 13th Sep 2021 - 2 years ago

    The last quarter works really well and lifts the song beautifully - before that it sounds pretty good but not really flying (if you know what I mean). Have you tried some of the vocal effects on your voice (ovox, vocal bender, etc.)- they might let you hide whatever it is that irks you and still work okay with the track : )

    MrRivus
    Reply by MrRivus

    Thank you ;)
    Well, the thing that annoys me in my voice is that it's kind of shaky and sometimes I get off the pitch, and it's not strong at all since I can't practice at home, and there's no place where I can practice... So I don't practice at all. So let's say my voice is kind of "unpracticed". Anyway, thank you for listening! ;)

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