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17th May 2021 15:26 - 3 years ago
Description : Let me know what you think. Does it sound professional? Could you hear it on the radio? Any advice on how to improve it are welcomed

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2Sisters
2Sisters 27th Jun 2024 20:43 - 2 months ago
Hi, it seems like it's an older song of yours. I'm not sure if you've made any changes to the song since then? The comments here are a bit hard for me to understand. The song definitely doesn't need autotune. I would use reverb and echo effects very sparingly, if at all. The only thing I would recommend is to make the song a bit wider when mastering. That way the sparingly used effects would come across better and the vocals would stand out more clearly from the music. Nice song! It has a pleasant rhythm that immediately got me hooked. Perfect for dancing!
Best wishes, Manuela
tsochai
tsochai 10th Jul 2021 16:46 - 3 years ago
had to come back to jam out to this. love this track man
-CAP
CINCOCENT
CINCOCENT 24th May 2021 09:18 - 3 years ago
Dope my friend! Doesnt beat CHANGES but still dope especially the rap part
DijamMusic
DijamMusic 23rd May 2021 23:52 - 3 years ago
Wow man, your voice is really good and fits this track really well my friend.
If I could sing like you, I would never stop mate.
Great track and brilliant mix my friend.
Well done
Maj
tsochai
tsochai 18th May 2021 23:32 - 3 years ago
sounds amazing my guy
craftin some FIRE

definitely showin much love
-CAP
Zootman
Zootman 18th May 2021 20:28 - 3 years ago
Smooth beats. I thought your vocal was fine, and u nailed the rap. Sounded genuine and heartfelt, a rare thing sometimes. My ears prob aren't well learned but yr mix and prod sound good to me.
Danke
Danke 18th May 2021 18:28 - 3 years ago
obviously you won't agree with me but I would definitely put a little autotune on the singing plus some effects ... say reverb but only tastefully ...
by the way the music is classy ...
fistbump, Danke
KnightHeir
KnightHeir 17th May 2021 22:25 - 3 years ago
I hear a lack of compression in the track. It's usually done in the mastering phase coupled with fine tuned EQing and metering. Think this would make the track more competitive as almost all major releases have it. Youtube search "compression vs. no compression." You can start training your ear to hear it and how it makes a track sound. As with all things in music the amount needed will vary with every track, voice, mix exc.
CelestiaAngel777
CelestiaAngel777 17th May 2021 22:04 - 3 years ago
B, you are seriously dropping some of the smoothest/freshest beats ever!...this one is no exception. No side-eye for this track haha...seriously your vocals/rap are really nice!...I love music so much and if it moves me in some way, I'm there for it, some of the best music here on this site doesn't always get a look in and those are the ones I seek out sometimes. In my book the music speaks for itself and your track/s here certainly speak volumes, don't let anything hold you back, you have so much talent & I very much enjoyed my listen. A Fave!
ClickbaitCabaret
ClickbaitCabaret 17th May 2021 16:20 - 3 years ago
Smooth man.

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