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Description : A sad love song in the form of 4 verses each composed of a haiku

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  1. xstokes
    xstokes on Mon 2nd Nov 2020 - 1 year ago

    aj, you are a troubadour buddy. these are really really good haiku and your presentation is at once charmingly off-hand and totally sincere. very refreshing, man.

    CaptainSour69
    Reply by CaptainSour69

    Thank you for your detailed review. I appreciate your sweet feedback. It means a lot to me, really... Especially because this is sort of a true story.

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Trapped in her blues

Says she feels warmer with me

We sit in the spring

She washes my hair

I grasp her beat back and sing

Our frosted eyes meet

She whispers a poem

One that I cannot deny

The melodies cry

" I love you my dear

But if you look in the mirror

I will disappear"

 


 

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