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16th Oct 2020 07:05 - 3 years ago
Description : I am making this track and it's not finished yet. I feel like it's missing something somewhere so I need some feedback. please listen and give any suggestions in the comments.

Comments (13)

If you have time take a listen and give Polairis some feedback.

BAKITTO
BAKITTO 21st Nov 2020 19:47 - 3 years ago
JustH01 stolle your track first of all so i didnt see this until scrolling through the track section.

This is a really good idea. The vocals fit well but I would recommend compressing them a little and turning the volume down slightly in order make them cleaner. The drop is also a good idea, I find the drums a little lacking but at the same time that is an easy fix. Finally I find that the intro is a little to simple and that the idea deserves a little more filling. Some natural sound effects such as water flowing down a stream, thunder off in the distance, even a busy street would give it more life. All in all though well done, keep on producing.

Also if you wouldn't mind could I try taking a crack at it. I also use fl studio and thought of some ideas.
Polairis
Polairis replied 4th Dec 2020 - 3 years ago
Honestly, it would be sick if we could collaborate on this, email me and I'll send you the stuff.
Overkell
Overkell 27th Oct 2020 18:41 - 3 years ago
Hmmmm... Serum? Nexus? OTT? :)
Polairis
Polairis replied 3rd Nov 2020 - 3 years ago
no nexus, but yes serum and ott
LunnchBoxx
LunnchBoxx 24th Oct 2020 14:34 - 3 years ago
I think the only thing to point out here is the drop, tho I like how it sounds but it's too repetitive try to add bass or change the flow of the drop after a bar or so, to give this track more of a variation.
EfkanDJ10
EfkanDJ10 19th Oct 2020 11:16 - 3 years ago
You can try to make a bass house drop in this song like Seth Hills,Julian Jordan and Loopers.Build up is amazing,vocal is so good,intro is so energic.But drop,I don't like it.
Frankly, it fits with dubstep, but drop is too simple.
terryjmhitsong
terryjmhitsong 19th Oct 2020 06:48 - 3 years ago
that intro is killer...u got me.....nice hook to man.....fat sound....great job
Prodcde
Prodcde 19th Oct 2020 05:57 - 3 years ago
This reminds me of early 2000s for some reason. Nice track
Nodog
Nodog 18th Oct 2020 14:21 - 3 years ago
levels are LOUD but i do really like the vocals keep em coming regards Robbie
DijamMusic
DijamMusic 17th Oct 2020 11:54 - 3 years ago
Man this is a brilliant track.
Very enjoyable to listen to.
Well done.
ValveDriver
ValveDriver 16th Oct 2020 23:21 - 3 years ago
I would suggest adjusting the levels. Louder doesn't necessarily mean better. Start low. You can always boost at the end. What you have here is a "brickwave" Everything is just pushed to the max.

Try layering your drums. Have two or more kicks. Each specifically set for where they hit the hardest on the frequency spectrum. Have one that hits hard in the lower end, and one with a nice snap on the top end. Equalize them together so that you get one equal sounding kick. Try layering a clap with your snare. Put a stereo separator, and a small amount of reverb so that it rings out a little.

It's been mentioned already that once the drop hits, it kind of just...keeps going. Try switching it up after a bar or so. Drop in a second "growl" or "wubwub". Right now, it's just 1-2-3-4, 1-2-3-4. Give it a few extra steps in there. Don't forget Impacts, risers, and downlifters, too. They add a great texture and dynamic to your track.

I like the vocals. they fit well with what you have. Once you work on the levels, those should come out a little more, too. They should take the front seat in the mix, but not stand alone above everything.

Now that we have all of that out of the way, I totally dig where you're going with this. I really hope you continue to work on it. I'd like to hear it as a completed track. It's got a great energy to it. Don't let it get away.

Take care.
V.
Polairis
Polairis replied 19th Oct 2020 - 3 years ago
damn that's a lot of feedback, thank you so much!
phantomproduction
phantomproduction 16th Oct 2020 17:40 - 3 years ago
damn ... there is sound !!! if it's you who sings, it's won! great job bro!
Michel
ClickbaitCabaret
ClickbaitCabaret 16th Oct 2020 15:22 - 3 years ago
Love the build up at ;50. Iron out the kinks & it's a wrap.
theHumps
theHumps 16th Oct 2020 11:58 - 3 years ago
I like the idea but it's waaaaay too loud. The growly distortion after about :50 is a bit much, maybe a compressor was turned up accidentally. The singing was working with the beginning musical part but the mix needs some attention. We all have volume knobs to turn a song up but once you've introduced something that saturates the mix that much, even turning my volume down doesn't help.

Wayne
BaoBou
BaoBou 16th Oct 2020 07:20 - 3 years ago
Well, if I may speak personally: I like the song up to around 0:50; then you go way overboard with the effects. That's ok for a couple bars, but not a full minute - for me anyway, but I'm an old man and others may completely disagree.
Sergi has such a good voice, so try to make him the star of the song.
My .02$. I hope it helps you!

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