Tags : | Hip Hop | 4.12 MB | Logic Pro

Description : any feedback is greatly appreciated this is a work in progress

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  1. BotBeatsGermany
    BotBeatsGermany on Mon 18th Jan 2021 - 1 month ago

    I like it a lot. it's nice and even, has a great atmposhere and stays in my ear. Super job!

  2. Celiaaa
    Celiaaa on Thu 24th Dec 2020 - 2 months ago

    Like the vibe sounds a little like XXXTentacion

  3. BaoBou
    BaoBou on Fri 2nd Oct 2020 - 4 months ago

    Love the vibe. Well done man!

  4. terryjmhitsong
    terryjmhitsong on Mon 21st Sep 2020 - 5 months ago

    great intro great words great song...overall great....totally original

  5. xstokes
    xstokes on Sun 23rd Aug 2020 - 6 months ago

    i really like the additional vox and how you pitched them. the lyrical and melodic elements of the song ply off each other very well.

  6. CinCoCent
    CinCoCent on Sat 22nd Aug 2020 - 6 months ago

    Great work creative stuff. Vocals are enjoyable

  7. Angelusyeux777SC
    Angelusyeux777SC on Sat 22nd Aug 2020 - 6 months ago

    Hey BOM,

    I liked it before but yes! This sounds so much better.
    The backing vocals and harmonies absolutely deepen the
    emotional impact of the track and makes it sound so much richer. You have done well and should be proud of your efforts. I like your voice a lot,it has such a nice tone to it. This is AWESOME! work, such a sweet! track, wish i could fave it again lol. Catchy song also. Keep going. BRAVO!!

  8. Angelusyeux777SC
    Angelusyeux777SC on Sat 22nd Aug 2020 - 6 months ago

    I totally agree with xstokes your vocals are nice! they stand out on this. GREAT! idea you got going here, with some more additions such as little harmonies here and there to fill it out a tad more but all in all i actually like what I'm hearing. Your quality of work is always TOP Work, so keep at it.


    Reply by BONEZONMARZ

    thanks for the comment sweetcherries let me know what you think i updated it a little!

  9. xstokes
    xstokes on Sat 22nd Aug 2020 - 6 months ago

    i really like your vox on this, but they sound kinda isolated from the track in the mix. maybe just a touch lower, a tiny bit of reverb? i also think doubling or adding a little harmony could be interesting. it’s a great tune and it’s cool to hear you working with it.

    Reply by BONEZONMARZ

    hey i took your advice let me know what you think

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