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Ok. So dont take anything as a negative as I am a very critical listener. Plus, I feel as if the goal is to uplift folks. Comments are just people’s personal opinions and preferences.
1. First thing is first, the mix. There are a ton of good elements in this track and a bunch of ear candy, but I feel like it could be more cohesive. Example: the rap is quieter than the chick singer.
2. Speaking of the chick singer; it seems she has a decent vocal but it’s completely not in the key of this track. This isn’t really a critique, because it’s just the fact unfortunately.
2. The guy singer with the auto-tune is in key, but at times it’s not properly modulated with the voicings of the instrumentation.
3. Like point 2, the “show me” voicings are clashing or competing with the voicings of the instruments.
4. I’m finding this to be very common, and that is this: the rap vocal needs a De-esser. The siblence of the “S’s” and “T’s” seem harsh.
THANK YOU I APPRECIATE THE FEED BACK I COULDN'T FIGURE OUT HOW TO BALANCE ALL OF THE ELEMENTS OUT SO THANK YOU IF YOU HAVE ANY POINTERS I'M OPEN I USE ADOBE SUITE 6 & COOL EDIT PRO 2 THANKS FOR LISTENING MY GOAL IS TO GET BETTER
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Sad Post Malone X xxxtentacion loop Part 1 by LilTiddy
Sad Post Malone X xxxtentacion loop Part 2 by LilTiddy
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Description : My single leading upto my first EP coming soon, Produced by me and I mixed the vocals, i also took the first verse and hook. what you guys think?
CXRTER on Spotify & Soundcloud and message me on socials if you wanna work.
Respects, 7L
hook needs work but overall sounds smooth af
keep at it
It's been a minute.
Nice work. Good to see you dropping music.
Stay up bro.
T2
1. First thing is first, the mix. There are a ton of good elements in this track and a bunch of ear candy, but I feel like it could be more cohesive. Example: the rap is quieter than the chick singer.
2. Speaking of the chick singer; it seems she has a decent vocal but it’s completely not in the key of this track. This isn’t really a critique, because it’s just the fact unfortunately.
2. The guy singer with the auto-tune is in key, but at times it’s not properly modulated with the voicings of the instrumentation.
3. Like point 2, the “show me” voicings are clashing or competing with the voicings of the instruments.
4. I’m finding this to be very common, and that is this: the rap vocal needs a De-esser. The siblence of the “S’s” and “T’s” seem harsh.
Good work.